Reviews For Life and Times
Name: ginnydemon77 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 - 06:55 am · For: authors notes
better than me and lips of an angel hard rock verison
Author's Response: thnx for the reveiw but i already choose... i actually used I dont wanna miss a thing by Aerosmith. Lips of an Angel and Better than Me are in the next story.
Name: aichilover (Signed) · Date: 27/04/08 - 08:37 am · For: they leave
nicce nice nice it is really nice go on
Author's Response: "The Return" is the sequel to this story. So technically I already continued.
Name: coknerthesquirel (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 - 06:10 am · For: What are they doing!!!!!!!!
i agree about adding some more detail but the stori line faintly reminds me of something else probly cus this is usalyy the classic way the get together in most storis lol
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-- narutoartlover : yeah but in most they sleep together in a differant way.
Name: Master_Jeriah_slayer (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 - 01:02 pm · For: they leave
wich sequal first, u gave 2 names u baka
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-- narutoartlover : dont call me baka im tierd and dont feel like putting up with jerks. also its the return
Name: Shayla101 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 - 04:57 pm · For: Narutos revelation
That's so unlike Haishi.Is this post time-skip or time-skip[seems time-skippy.]Kill Oro?Noo!Iruka!
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-- narutoartlover : no its pre but im changing the story line.
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/06/07 - 01:30 pm · For: they leave
Nice chapter, with some comey too. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: my updates will be on the next story the rebuilding
Name: battousai1889 (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 - 02:14 am · For: the kareoke
I bloody hate that song. Aerosmith are a bunch of wankers! Pretty good, although your technique needs some spit and polish, that will come with practice. I would have suggested either "Love Song" by The Cure or "Under My Skin" by Frank Sinatra. If you really wanted to get cheesy you could have used "Cant Stop Loving You" by Van Halen.
Author's Response: ok i like aerosmith also i was going to use lips of an angel but it sounds like hes cheating
Name: hanyou_risika (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 - 06:01 am · For: the kareoke
i love the song you picked! it's one of the best songs out there
Author's Response: thank oyu i almost chose lips of an angel by hinder but it sounds like hes cheating so i didn't lol also three more songs coming up
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 - 04:45 am · For: Narutos revelation
thank you
Author's Response: why? also its not the start its the begining
Name: lovin_Garra36 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 08:17 pm · For: authors notes
Cool. The Begining sounds cool
Author's Response: tahnk oyu be sure to note its the new name instead of hinatas bravery
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 05:32 pm · For: the night before the mission
i love it so much and if you dont finish it or make it longer or a squel or something i will summon the other-worldly force of all evil to burn and destroy every single thing you have ever seen, touched, cared, about or showed emotion at all towards write infront of you playing over and over through your minds eyes overand over and over and over again
p.s. not really...yet
p.s.s. for all you know
Author's Response: it'll be longer and it'll be a three part sequal and a sub category for the wedding after he proposes ooops forget i said anything about narutos dad being alive or him having a sister
Author's Response: acctually forgfet i said that also the new name of the story will be "The Start"
Name: lovin_Garra36 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 - 08:16 pm · For: the kareoke
I totally love your choice of song! So sweet!
Author's Response: thanks i had lips of an angel but it sounds like hes cheating on her lol
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 29/05/07 - 07:43 pm · For: the mission finnaly and a strange revealtion
Ending, very funny, but I think it's kind of in-conclusive with Sasuke killing Orochimaru, huh?
Author's Response: yes well i hate oroachimaru hes creepy also he wants sasukes body think about that also my friend threatened me to put it
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/07 - 04:19 am · For: a discovery
Its Sasuke. Not Sauske.
Anyway. Good story.
Author's Response: thanks my spelling sucks lol
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 29/05/07 - 04:10 am · For: a discovery
Okay, it wasn't funny, but it was fluff, so I loved it!!! 10/10 And as for the song: Forever by Papa Roach
Author's Response: thank you for your vote but i want something that i gave as a coice in the authors notes please i don't listen to rap
Author's Response: sorry i meant rock
Name: lovin_Garra36 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/07 - 09:47 pm · For: a discovery
really like it. but don't ask me about songs, I'm tone deaf.
Author's Response: ditto thats why im asking rofl
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 25/05/07 - 08:50 pm · For: a strange disscusion
*Snickers* I'm not sure what's funny, but I'm laughing anyway! Nothing really happened in this chap so I haven't really got anything to say!
Author's Response: you'll laugh next chapter. naruto gets beat up and a new power is reveiled
Name: lovin_Garra36 (Signed) · Date: 23/05/07 - 07:48 pm · For: What are they doing!!!!!!!!
Really good story! Somthing that would make it better is if you added more detail, like how much does Naruto love Hinata exactly? How strong are his feelings for her? Otherwise, really good job!!
Author's Response: i wont update unless i get two more reviews also ill add more detail.
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 20/05/07 - 09:15 pm · For: Narutos revelation
Uh-Oh, Okay about the moving in question. Forget it, as my mind is shot today, and I forgot which fic I was reading (I've read like eight in the last hour okay, give me a break, plz) Lol! Just clearing that up!
Author's Response: naruto is moving in to the hyugga compound because iruka was paying for part of the apartment and naruto couldn't make rent
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 20/05/07 - 09:12 pm · For: What are they doing!!!!!!!!
Oka, that was good, but it's still difficult to read. Just skip lines and I'll be heck of a happy camper- Also, what's all this moving in stuff? Update!!! Plz?! Y_Y
Author's Response: ill skip and narutos moving in because when iruka died he was helping naruto with rent on the apartment
Author's Response: if i dont get three more reviews i wont update
Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 07:53 pm · For: What are they doing!!!!!!!!
Update soon. Y'know I never much liked Hiashi. In fact, I hated him, but this story does him justice and makes me like him a little more.
Author's Response: im gald i changed your opinion on hiashi in my fic it may mean that you can grow to like him later
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/05/07 - 08:38 pm · For: naruto learns the truth
I'm afraid this is too direct; it needs to be drug out to build more suspense for a much better climax, but I noticed more dialogue, and starting new chapters, but I'm afraid it's still a bit too short. Waiting for update! (It's getting better) =)
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. please get a yahoo im account my email is screwed up. i would love to hear more comments on my works
Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 - 07:42 pm · For: naruto learns the truth
Ooooooooooh. Update soon.
Author's Response: I am updating as much as a middle school student can between school and friends.
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 18/05/07 - 03:14 pm · For: Narutos revelation
This would be an incredible story, but it just needs more detail. Talk about how long it took for them to do the things, and what Naruto's face looked like when he was saddened by Iruka's death, go more in-depth into how he died, skip paragraphs between speakers, and make more dialogue. I do NOT mean this as a flame!!! If you did some of these things, this story would be phenomenal! I personally recommend that you re-write the first chapter with more details, and to say this story has potential would be an understatement. Please contact me if you have any questions.
Author's Response: thank you for you comments and concerns i needed a wake up call thank you once again
Author's Response: i just wanted to say after reading your storys i realized how much your comment means your were the author that started my writing naruto fics
Author's Response: one quick thing my email is fucked so please get a yahoo account so i will be able to converse with you
Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/07 - 07:24 pm · For: Narutos revelation
I luv it. Except IRUKA DIES! I loved Iruka! He rocks! oh well. Update soon. I like this story. (it makes Hinata's father less of a jerk)
Author's Response: plese in your comments add some kind of fault i need to learn more faults in my writing. thanx for your reviews