I liked it, though it does need a bit more detail. I haven't really frequented this site so forgive me if I haven't reviewed your fic earlier. If there was anyway for me to keep track of it, I would have.

When I thought up the challenge, I was actually thinking of a more problematic child than the Naruto of the series. Someone who will really piss off everyone in the village. (and maybe even befriend a few missing-nins) It's alright though. ^^ And it's going to be interesting to see Naruto being raised by two mothers.

Author's Response: Right now... I'm rewriting the whole story, but I like the concept of him being raised by two mothers. Hopefully I can have the prologue and chapters 1-3 up before the end of this month, but I have to worry about internet connection alot.