Name: Gaaraluver (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 - 09:31 pm · For: non-chaptered
Another great story!! One thing I might suggest for future stories, is that you separate them into chapters, because it is troublesome to try and keep one's place on such a long story. If it were broken up it'd be easier to read.
I liked the whole handshake part and Naruto/Hinata and the blood part. Funny!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review :) And, yeah, I should have broken it into more chapters, but...