Reviews For Bright Spots
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 - 03:29 pm · For: Confrontation
Wow. At first the story was kinda (no offense) dull, but this is a really good twist! I'm really excited, I can't wait for your next chapter! Please write it soon! Thanks!
Author's Response: None taken, I actually agree with you, and if I could drop the first ten chapters, or put them in a different fic or something without losing the background for the rest I would. But the change is at least a good demonstration of a work in progress!rnrnAnd thanks so much for your reviews! I'm really happy you've enjoyed reading it so far, and I hope you enjoy the little that remains to be written.rn-niveaus
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 - 01:48 pm · For: Silence
Wow. This is a good story! :)
Please write more
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Esquilax (Signed) · Date: 15/02/09 - 12:36 am · For: Team Seven Reunited
this is the only naruto fan fic i have enjoyed
please continue
i believe it is really good
great use of character and you are true to the anime/manga so its great
Author's Response: Wow, really, the only one?!? I'm so flattered, thank you!rnI'm afraid I'm not likely to write any more until the summer, just because of time pressure. I hope you don't mind the wait. It is really encouraging to get reviews like this though, they make me want to continue writing sooner.rnAgain thanks, and I will really try to write lots more this summer.rn- niveaus
Name: Kibakun (Anonymous) · Date: 01/11/08 - 11:28 am · For: Teamwork
Sweet! Excellent chapter. But for some reason, the ending makes me think it's too quiet.
And so much for Sasuke, but I'm sure that won't be the end of him.
Author's Response: Thank you! No, Sasuke's not finished yet... Thanks again for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Name: Kibakun (Anonymous) · Date: 01/11/08 - 11:17 am · For: A Change of Plans
OK, didn't see that coming.
I'm not sure why Sasuke was smiling like he was. Good chapter overall.
Name: Kibakun (Anonymous) · Date: 07/09/08 - 01:49 pm · For: Sasuke's Story
Interesting direction taken. I assume Sasuke must have been disguised or something to not get arrested. Since this is obviously occurring before...everything after the Hidan/Kakuzu Arc, I'm quite curious what direction the story will take. And putting Hinata and Sasuke on one team--brilliant! Or a major catastrophe.... We'll see (or rather you already know).
Author's Response: Well, Sasuke wasn't disguised... I think the authorities just didn't quite know what to do, so left him alone as long as he wasn't behaving dangerously. You'd have to ask Tsunade really, I don't know for sure!rnrnYes, I was writing this during the anime first Shippuden arc, and haven't read the manga. But in terms of storyline really it diverges before Shippuden begins, and there is very little reference to anything canon after that. Hinata and Sasuke... hehe, well let's just say things will be interesting for both of them. These were some of the most fun chapters to write, I really hope you enjoy them! Thanks for the review.
Name: Kibakun (Anonymous) · Date: 29/08/08 - 02:09 pm · For: NaruHina 9
Very mysterious ending. Gotta say, loved everything from 6+. You progressed their relationship excellently, building up just the right amounts each chapter that I didn't feel a stroke of boredom. You've got a knack for that kind of stuff.
As for the new direction, I'll have to see. Big twist, but you sound very confident in it, so I'm just going to trust that confidence and plunge in.
Author's Response: Oh dear, well, I hope you like it! Didn't mean to sound too confident - though personally I do think the next chapters are (probably) better. Anyway, thanks so much for the encouragement and kind words! It means a lot coming from someone who I know is a good author themselves. Really, thank you!
Name: i like bacon (Signed) · Date: 21/08/08 - 01:28 am · For: NaruHina
aww you use to mention ten ten once an a while but she was never given a 1 line in the whole story
Author's Response: So you'd like to see more of her? Well, I hadn't decided whether she was going to come in again, or if she'd have anything to say. Check out my Lee-Tenten one-shot 'Training Partners' though if you like reading about her. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 19/08/08 - 11:57 pm · For: Team Seven Reunited
haha, busted!
whoo! great, long, story. please continue
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks largely to your review I have been writing like mad the last ninety minutes, and am half way through the next chapter already. Will try to finish it soon!
Name: Kibakun (Anonymous) · Date: 27/07/08 - 11:48 am · For: Naruto
No worries, the chapter was needed. I enjoyed Naruto's constantly switching between thoughts and that in the end he hasn't solved anything. Too bad for Naruto this is still pre-Shippuden--Sai's books would be handy here.
P.S. I couldn't review chapter 4 when I read it, but I feel obliged to say the way you adapted Tenten in the previous two chapters despite her limited exposition is very believable based on what has been seen of her. Looking forward to next chapter; I'm curious whether Naruto's meal will be courtesy of Ichiraku or *gasp* homecooked.
Author's Response: Thanks! Reading back over it I actually think this is one of my best and favourite of the early chapters, am glad you enjoyed it too. And thank you again for reviewing so carefully - and so favourably. I really appreciate it! I hope the next chapters are up to standard too...
Name: Kibakun (Anonymous) · Date: 23/07/08 - 07:38 pm · For: Hinata
A soothing break from the first two chapters. I agree the story needed one like this. Well written opening and pleasant overall plot. Good rendering of Hinata's character, and nice touch of character development at the end. The entire chapter had a relaxing effect to it, I must say. Wish I could read the next one now but don't have time. Keep it up (unless 28 chapters is all there is/will be).
Author's Response: There'll have to be a few more at least. Thanks a lot for the review! It's really nice to get such thorough and positive feedback. I hope the first 10+/- chapters won't be too fluffy for your taste, from what I know of your own writing the later part of the story may be more your thing. Again thank you, really appreciate the review. let me know what you think of the rest when you have time.rnrn-niveaus
Name: skyger (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 - 05:08 pm · For: NaruHina
I have been with you since almost the begining and i just want to say that i am sorry for not reveiwing sooner. you are a great author and i can't wait to see more from you.
Author's Response: That's alright, thanks for your review now. And if I remember right you favourited Bright Spots a long time ago, which is a huge compliment in itself. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters too!
Name: Megs (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 - 05:16 pm · For: NaruHina 8
FINALLY!!!Its about time.Great chappie
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. I worry when I look back at my early chapters - but it's really good to know people are still enjoying them!
Name: Megs (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 - 04:54 pm · For: NaruHina 5
Whoa!! What up with the time skip!
Author's Response: Hehehe... I love time skips - fill in the dots!rnrnThanks for the review. For some reason I didn't see them until now.
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 26/07/07 - 10:57 am · For: Underground
This story really is awesome (that's why i mentioned you in ode to an author!!!)I love the way Naruto was all hyper and Sasuke was just so uninterested. this story really is getting better and better everytime i read it! keep up the good work!
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-- niveaus : Thank you so much! You're always so nice! I'm sorry the updates haven't been coming so often.
Name: Blood_Lust_Gurl101 (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 - 07:00 am · For: NaruHina
I naruhina are one of my favoret couples and right now im working on KibaIno and im happy that theres naruhina
^_^
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-- niveaus : Cool! I really like Kiba/Ino too, ever since reading 'Into the Woods' when I first found this site, and even before that I think I'd had the same thoughts. And NaruHina goes without saying! I'll look out for your Kiba/Ino fic! Thanks!
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 21/07/07 - 06:13 pm · For: Underground
Lol! 'Sasuke was hardly good company, even by Shino's standards,' *snickers* That's really funny... Update Soon!
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-- niveaus : Hahaha, thank you! I'm glad you liked it/thought it was funny! I hope to update quite soon.
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 13/07/07 - 08:52 am · For: Believe in You
ooooh, so sasuke is being kept in jail, hmm? *jumps around* this story is sooo good!
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-- niveaus : hehe, thank you sooo much! I was really hoping that Sasuke being imprisoned would provoke some kind of reaction. And I'm so happy that the story's making you jump around!
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/07/07 - 07:38 am · For: Believe in You
Strange, they have yet to ask Sakura for help with Sasuke, but since he doesn't like her, that would be stupid I guess...
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-- niveaus : Yep yep, don't worry, I haven't forgotten Sakura... But it's true, her relationship with Sasuke was much more one-sided than Naruto's, so I don't think they would ask her to help.
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 - 07:16 am · For: Indifference?
this story just keeps getting better. poor kiba, being bossed around by his mother =S
please update soon!!!
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-- niveaus : Hahaha, that's just a personal opinion, but I wanted to get it in... ;). Kiba's a great guy though, one of my favourites. Thank you! I will update very soon!
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 10/07/07 - 03:15 am · For: Indifference?
Lol! He just got his *ss handed to him! Lol!!! Sasuke sucks! Great Chapter! Update soon!!
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-- niveaus : Hehe... After all, no matter how powerful he was, he's still pretty young and inexperienced. No match for Ibiki! I've been writing like crazy this morning, the next chapter's almost done!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 - 08:12 am · For: Fan tai Fang
this story just gets better and better! i really can't wait for the next chapter. =D
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-- niveaus : Thank you so much! I like where it's going now too, with more conversation/psychology... I'll finish up the next chapter as soon as possible!
Name: HinaNaruforever (Anonymous) · Date: 07/07/07 - 01:17 pm · For: Fan tai Fang
Man i hate sasuke he's so stubborn!!!!
This is really good please continue! ^_^
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-- niveaus : Ooh, a new reviewer! Thank you so much! I'm glad Sasuke is convincing, and I'll write more soon :).
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/07/07 - 02:50 am · For: Fan tai Fang
Lol! Man, is Sasuke conceded and still a prick! Update soon!
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-- niveaus : Hehe, I'm trying to keep him as in character as possible - somehow I don't think being with Orochimaru will have changed him for the better. Thanks for the review, I will!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 04/07/07 - 07:44 am · For: Setting Things Straight
this story is so good, i love it! please update soon. i want to know if sasuke comes back for good...!
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-- niveaus : Hehehe, I'm pretty interested in that too. I guess we'll have to wait and see how he feels! Thank you for the encouragement, I'll go and write some more now!