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The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

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Het Romance [1090]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [643]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [17]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1738]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [860]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [290]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1575]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [194]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [124]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
 
 

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Stories: 5874
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Reviews For Bright Spots

Name: Tari (Signed) · Date: 04/05/07 - 01:58 pm · For: Sasuke's Story
Sasuke..you bastard T_T. Show him who's boss Hinata!
Fantastic as ever ^^

Author's Response: Thank you! I was going to write him much worse, but had to let him go a bit OOC and even apologise...


Name: seizansha (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 - 11:09 pm · For: NaruHina 9
aww... this is so hinata, it's adorable!

just read the whole thing and i can't believe how in chara she is with all the growing up she's done.

please tell me there's more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to keep her in character as much as possible, with only realistic character development, so I'm glad you liked it! There is more, will be up soon (as soon as I've written it).


Name: thatguy (Anonymous) · Date: 03/05/07 - 07:04 pm · For: NaruHina 9
I agree, it shouldn't end there. In my opinion you should just keep building on it. I like the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I will then - really appreciate the review ;).


Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/05/07 - 05:53 pm · For: NaruHina 9
Kinda short, and a little, tiny bit hard to uderstand, but it still doesn't hurt the story; waiting for the update _-_

Author's Response: Mm, I was in a weird mood. But thanks to all the reviews I've gotten inspired, so it should get better, and start coming more often again. Thanks!


Name: kakashi66 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 - 02:23 pm · For: NaruHina
Ilove hina/naru fics. this one was really good

Author's Response: Thank you!


Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 - 02:07 pm · For: NaruHina 9
Yes don't end the story, yet. Update soon!

Author's Response: Alright, I won't. Thanks so much for the support! I'll update very soon.


Name: Tari (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 - 02:03 pm · For: NaruHina 9
Oh no...you cant lose the fluff... :(
Poor Hinata, whats gonna happen next? Well written!

Author's Response: Thank you! Okay, I'll keep it a bit fluffy ;). Thanks so much for reviewing!


Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 30/04/07 - 07:21 pm · For: Kiba
Wow! (I like this word, too) it seems Sakura has half-a-heart, I didn't think she had a single shred of compassion! =)

Author's Response: Hahaha, it's true, she's not all bad... not at all I would say, but compassion isn't her strong point ;). I like awesome better myself, but wow works.


Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 30/04/07 - 03:23 pm · For: Kiba
Update soon. Loved it!(go Kiba!)

Author's Response: Thanks! I will... and Kiba's another favourite of mine ;).


Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 29/04/07 - 11:20 am · For: NaruHina 8
Finally, i's out in the open, and i dont have any complaints what so ever...PERFECT!!! (Again)

Author's Response: Thanks! I get worried with each new chapter that people will hate it, but I was happy about this one. Glad you liked it!


Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 - 10:10 am · For: NaruHina 8
AWWW. It's soo cute!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! NaruHina just has 'cute' written all over it... Thanks for reading!


Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 28/04/07 - 04:25 pm · For: NaruHina 7
Yea, it's finally sunken into Naruto's thick head that there might by something more to HInata & his relationship! Can't wait for update; you're really fast at posting

Author's Response: That's right! He's gotten a little quicker, but still not too much ;). Yeah, this is so fun, I write a chapter every evening... and now it's the weekend I can do two. And I'm keeping the chapters longer now ;). Thanks!


Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 28/04/07 - 12:18 pm · For: Sakura
Yea... down with the Sakura bitch *smiles darkly* Also, story was awesome (still like the word) and it was longer too *jumps up and down then does the disco*

Author's Response: What but no! I like Sakura! Maybe not as much as Naruto and Hinata though... Thanks for the awesome! This is really cool, you're doing the disco when you read my story, and I'm doing it when I read the comments! Literally...


Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 - 11:15 am · For: Sakura
UPDATE SOON! I love this story!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed your first story! And I'm especially glad that it was mine... I'm making a difference!


Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 - 10:15 am · For: NaruHina
I like it. This is my first story I have read on this sight and I love it.


Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 27/04/07 - 03:44 pm · For: NaruHina 5
Yay! Love the chapter, even if they are a little small (Srry, I'm just used to having to read really, really long fics) *Half-smile* Anyway, can't wait for update

Author's Response: Thanks! I agree about the chapter lengths... I like the longer ones better, but I feel like I should move the story on and and not get caught up in the fluff :S. But the next one will be longer! Thanks for the recommendation - I want to know what people like/don't like, so I appreciate it.


Name: flame heart (Anonymous) · Date: 27/04/07 - 10:42 am · For: NaruHina 5
u gada wright more this is a very very good story please wright more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Everyone's being so nice, I might write another one tonight already!


Name: flame heart (Anonymous) · Date: 27/04/07 - 10:29 am · For: NaruHina 3
this was a good 1 you need more naru/hina

opinion of story? loved it not like


Name: Gabriela (Anonymous) · Date: 27/04/07 - 09:12 am · For: NaruHina 5
you update fast.. this is very very good.. ^_^
your story is great...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't help writing more when I get such nice reviews...


Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 26/04/07 - 06:24 pm · For: NaruHina 4
Wtf did you end the chappy with a cliffhanger!?

Author's Response: Sorry, it's not my style I agree. But there is a reason... Thanks for reading ;).


Name: Gabriela (Anonymous) · Date: 26/04/07 - 03:33 pm · For: NaruHina 4
it was terrific.. i love de story.. ^_^
I can't wait for the next..

Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for reading! I hope the next one will be up soon, but I need to make a lot of decisions before I write it.


Name: Arconin (Signed) · Date: 25/04/07 - 01:56 pm · For: Naruto
Great story! ^^ I cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! As my last response said, these reviews really mean a lot to me, I'm very grateful. And after these two I'm definitely in the mood for writing more tonight!


Name: kagome204 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/07 - 01:39 pm · For: NaruHina
Really great!!!Love your idea of how Hinata gains confidence!How's Hinata gonna answer Naruto?Update!!!Pleez!

Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for reviewing, the reviews really mean lot to me and encourage me to write more. I'll update very soon!


Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 24/04/07 - 02:50 pm · For: NaruHina 3
*Shudders* PERFECT, but... *Thinks* okay, there are NO bad sides to this chap what so ever!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I was gonna watch United vs Milan, but saw your review on the previous chapter (the awesome bit) and had to write some more, so you can have some credit for this chapter. When I get nice reviews it makes me want to start writing again right away ;). So thank you again!


Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 23/04/07 - 05:20 pm · For: Hinata
Okay, kind of girly-girly (I'm a guy), but it was a decent chapter: More NaruXHina-Please- Your story's awesome!!!

Author's Response: Haha, so am I... and a straight one at that, so I really shouldn't be able to write this stuff should I? Thanks though, I'll try and do a NaruHina next then... they're much easier anyway.


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