Reviews For Bright Spots
Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/07 - 01:58 pm · For: Setting Things Straight
Update soon! It's still great!
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-- niveaus : Thank you! *smiles widely*
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/07/07 - 05:12 am · For: Setting Things Straight
Ohh violent, and interesting!!! Update soon!
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-- niveaus : hehe, thanks! I'm trying to bring more depth into their characters now, rather than just concentrating on a plot - I like the way Kiba turned out especially. Update coming up soon!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 02/07/07 - 09:12 am · For: Sasuke in Trouble
ah, i've been so looking forward to this update. i eally like this story, please continue it!
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-- niveaus : Thank you! I finished the next chapter this very minute, just have to make sure I know it's in synch with whatever happens after that and it'll be posted! Thank you so much for the support!
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 01/07/07 - 02:29 pm · For: Sasuke in Trouble
Ooh! Very violent, but it's kind of cool that he almost (Or did) kill the kid with one kick (Almost pyscho). Nice chapter! Update Soon!!!!
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-- niveaus : Thanks! I really will update soon this time, I promise. I'm so glad you liked this chapter!
Name: seizansha (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 - 10:08 pm · For: A Mission
i was wondering how you'd handle hinata's moving in and i like it, even though it's alittle rushed.
but i love how she's stepped up with the mission! i'm so eager for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for the moving in, it is rather sudden, but... I don't remember how clear I made it, but Neji let them share a room for a couple of nights after they found Naruto and before they got back to Konoha, so I thought Hinata would probably just want to carry right on with that. Thank you for the review though! And I will try to write more soon. I feel bad now, because I don't want to let you guys down by ending it soon, but I'm so stuck... Thanks for the support though!
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-- niveaus : Thanks again for the review, I've edited the chapter (Hyuuga Hiashi) now to clarify that Neji let them stay together. Thanks a lot! It feels good to know I'm improving the story.
Name: seizansha (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 - 09:59 pm · For: A Mission
i was wondering how you'd handle hinata's moving in and i like it, even though it's alittle rushed.
but i love how she's stepped up with the mission! i'm so eager for more!
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 03/06/07 - 01:47 pm · For: A Mission
Well, nothing much happening her, but, after reading the last chapter, I've come to realize, Hinata's not all that smart. For one, she sleep at Naruto's knowing her father wouldn't be happy if he found out, and then she defied him, knowing he'd become even madder, and then she wouldn't let Naruto stand up to her even though she hadn't even done anything wrong, and she wouldn't let Naruto stand up for himself when Hiashi was talking about him, Naruto, or am I looking too much into this?
Author's Response: Hmm, maybe you're looking into it too much... but I'm probably not keeping the characters as synched in each chapter as I'd like, particularly with the long breaks. And yes, not much happening, but I want to find a proper ending somewhere, so have to write a little more, and when the word count gets up around 1400... I guess these chapters aren't going to be so exciting. More just easy reading with our favourite couple. I should probably have ended it after 'The Heiress'. But I would say in Hinata's defense, that she probably guessed correctly that her father wouldn't actually care - and even if he had just been angry I don't think it would have hit her so hard, like she says, she doesn't care about the clan, she'd rather be with Naruto. What made her upset was that her father was happy rather than angry. And as for stopping Naruto, surely that's a smart move? For his own good, as much as for her chances of ever being reconciled with Hiashi. But did she really defy her father? When? Actually, I'm glad you are looking into this, it's making me think about the characters, and even get back into the story a little. Thanks for reviewing! I'm happy at least that you consider it worth your time to look into it.
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 - 03:48 pm · For: Hyuuga Hiashi
dude. This story is awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you a lot! I'm very glad to hear from you again. And I will try to write more very soon now. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 10:50 am · For: Hyuuga Hiashi
Update Soon! I hate HIASHI!
Author's Response: I'll try to... He's not very nice, is he? Or, I'm in two minds about him really, I don't think he's actually as bad as I'm writing him, but the general consensus on TONFA seems to be that he's worse... Thanks for reviewing!
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 20/05/07 - 08:24 am · For: Hyuuga Hiashi
How sad T_T, but it's really good. I wish Naruto had done something to Hiashi, but I understand Hinata didn't want him to, so he didn't. AWESOME (still my favorite word) chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I read as far as Naruto defying Hiashi in 'We're in Love' (I will read the rest, but it's so long!) so I'm not surprised that you want Hiashi hurt ;). But I'm so glad you liked it! I really will try to write more soon. Thank you for reviewing!
Name: milliexchan (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 - 02:11 pm · For: The Heiress
i LOVE this story, please write some more!? I don't want it to end =(
Author's Response: It's been a while since I updated, but as it happens I'm working on a new chapter at the moment... can't promise there'll be more soon after that though :(. But thank you for your review! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I'll do my best to continue it... :)
Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 - 01:34 pm · For: The Heiress
Ooohhh! UPDATE!
Author's Response: Oss! Thanks for reviewing ;).
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 11/05/07 - 03:48 am · For: The Heiress
Lol! Hilarious ending, but I like it, and... I'm so happy, they finally got together!!! (Again)
Author's Response: Glad you thought it was funny! And that you liked the rest too... Thanks for reviewing again!
Name: seizansha (Signed) · Date: 10/05/07 - 09:29 pm · For: The Heiress
i love the ending! so very naruto!!!
is this the end? *big puppy eyes*
Author's Response: Thanks! And it would make a good ending, I thought about it... but I think as long as people are still enjoying it I'll keep writing ;). And I can hardly say no to the puppy eyes!
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 09/05/07 - 05:10 pm · For: Under Attack
Oh, well pretty good chapter, I like action stories too, but don't fret over boring chapters; I'm pretty sure people think that a couple of chapters in my stories are boring, too, and I also love how well you do in grammar, mine's usually riddled with mistakes here and there
Author's Response: Thanks - I realised after publishing this one that if I'd waited with the previous one and joined them together it would have been a perfectly balanced chapter... But what can you do eh? ;) And thanks for the grammar comment, and for reviewing in general!
Name: seizansha (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 - 09:13 pm · For: Alone
now this is a twist i didn't expect! (just read the latest 4 chapters) more to the story than just the hook-up... it's amazing to see one that actually works both stories so well that works on a whole!
Author's Response: Thank you! Again you've commented on something I've been concerned about, and I'm glad you think it's working. Am very flattered in fact!
Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 - 08:12 pm · For: Alone
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support! I will soon.
Name: Hinata1 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 06:04 pm · For: A Change of Plans
Urg! I hate Sasuke in this story!
Author's Response: thanks ;).
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/07 - 05:57 pm · For: Alone
Okay, nothing really interesting, but a decent chapter, and i only saw one grammar error, but usually your stories don't have any-oh well
Author's Response: yeah, sorry, I felt this chapter was pretty boring too, but it covered some important stuff. And I got tired, wanted to get it done last night. Thanks for the tip, I'll check over for errors again.
Name: Allos (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 12:31 am · For: NaruHina
"A top secret mission from Tsunade Oba-san." Sake bottles! I though that was clever.
Author's Response: Thanks, appreciate it. Especially since I just read your 'the contest' update, which was brilliant as ever.
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/05/07 - 12:39 pm · For: Teamwork
That wuz cool!!! I never knew Hinata had it in 'er. Can't wait for update =)
Also, from my POV, there's nothing wrong with this chap
Author's Response: hmm, something weird happened with the reviews cos I already replied to a first line-only version and now it's gone... but Thank You! Glad you're enjoying it, I'll update soon.
Name: Gabriela (Anonymous) · Date: 06/05/07 - 08:15 am · For: Teamwork
the story is really really good.. ^^
I'm waiting for the update ^_^ (again.. xD)
Author's Response: Oh thank goodness! I was afraid I'd lost some readers with the style change, but I'm so glad you're still enjoying it! Thank you, I will start on the update immediatedly!
Name: Hinagirl326 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 - 07:07 am · For: Teamwork
i really like this story but the sasuke betrayal caused me to break the pen i had in my mouth (i hold objects in my mouth to help me concentrate, like spoons or pens) and it was my fave pen! >_
Author's Response: oh no, sorry... Well, I'm kind of happy too (that it has such an effect?), but I'm sorry for your pen. I'm guessing it was the loose bit at the end of the pen, for attaching to clipboards etc.? I always break those off fiddling with my pens when concentrating... but it's just giving the pen more character! Thank you and thanks for reading!
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 05/05/07 - 10:19 am · For: A Change of Plans
Wow, a twist; Please tell me Sasuke dies...
Author's Response: hehe. I hope this chapter was better than the last one? I'm sorry if I got the characterisation wrong in the previous one...
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 04/05/07 - 05:39 pm · For: Sasuke's Story
Nice chap., but... it's really weird she just let Sasuke off that easy, and didn't tell Jiraiya or Tsunade
Author's Response: Mm, yeah, I'm thinking she was just too confused and upset, after Sasuke gave her a way out she concentrated everything on that. As for Jiraiya and Tsunade, I think she will tell them if she gets a chance. Thanks for reading!