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Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 30/10/07 - 03:52 am · For: Apologies and second firsts
This chapter was amazing!! I love it girl, I really do!

Author's Response: Thankyou! This review made me so happy! I was pleased with the chapter at first, and then I read through it again and wasn't sure about it. So then I kept worrying about the quality of it, but you've certainly cheered me up now! ^_^


Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 - 10:29 am · For: Apologies and second firsts
The review was me I think...>.< I was just telling you it was coded, so no worries. I so happy you updated! This couple still doesn't get enough love, and they can be sweet together, no? I can't wait for more! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^

Author's Response: Yay!rnI'm gonna email Priest and see if she can look at the whole coding thing when she has a spare moment. It's happened to me three times now :( rnrnI adore this pairing so much! So I really enjoy writing some fiction for them. I already have bits of the next chapter written, so I'm hoping my inspiration doesn't leave me so I can get an update soon ^_^


Name: kibafan17 (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 - 04:53 pm · For: Dynamic marking
OMFG! That... was... hot! Update soon plz!

Kibafan17 =^.^=


Name: Lt_Death (Anonymous) · Date: 08/10/07 - 04:10 pm · For: Blond and blue
Very good, your smut scenes really drew me into the story, and the "cheating on Naruto" plot was interessting/funny. And one more thing: Make-up sex is never bad.

Author's Response: Thankyou!rnAnd I agree about the make-up sex ^_^


Name: Lt_Death (Anonymous) · Date: 08/10/07 - 03:36 pm · For: A knock at the door
Man you just about screwed over your writing ability in this chapter, try improving your typing or get a beta, it makes for a better story.

Author's Response: Argh! Damnit! I just checked out the chapter, since I was thinking rnrn'What's so bad about the chapter- I just recently rebetad that one and corrected a couple of typos'rnrnAnd I just saw the state of it! What happened? There's symbols all over the place, ne? That's happened twice to me now since the last tonfa update... I wonder why...


Name: Lt_Death (Anonymous) · Date: 08/10/07 - 03:33 pm · For: They know
Nice smut, but i prefer Kiba as the seme, but you write him well as an uke.

Author's Response: I like him as both. I intend to have them switch later ^_^


Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 17/06/07 - 02:50 pm · For: Blond and blue
Becky... *is speechless* Becky!! What do you expect me to say part from amazing, amazing, amazingly beautiful?! The emotions, the smut, Naruto's comment about being stupid and wanting Kiba no matter what, not to mention the last sentence... It's gorgeous! Sorry it took me forever to read.

-- ChiyoChan : Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. It's possibly the longest load of sex that I have written ever. I'm quite proud of it also. One of my favourite chapters.


Name: angelgirl555 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 - 10:23 pm · For: Blond and blue
Just one word:nice.
What is Iruka going to do?

-- ChiyoChan : We shall see, we shall see ^_^


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 - 01:24 pm · For: Blond and blue
I can't think of anything redder than a tomato... but tell me when you think of something, 'cuz that's probably what I look like.

Somehow... Naruto seemed more innocent than this story portrays him... he's just too good at sex for his own good! (and we don't even need to start about Kiba...)

I'm glad it was just that once with Shino... hopefully Naruto and Kiba will be able to build up trust again.

I loved the last line of the chapter... amazing-ness, right there. Have you ever read any stories by the author Hey-Diddle-Diddle? It reminds me of her style of writing (she mostly does one-shots with dark/sad themes)

Blueberry muffins! Would you like blueberry muffins? (I'm running outta cookies).

Author's Response: Haha! You think I didn't write him innocently enough? I've never read any... where can I give them a read? And yes please to the blueberry muffins! Yum!


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 - 01:15 pm · For: I love him
Awe!!! Yay!

They're getting back together! [does a celebratory dance] whut whut!

Poor Shino, though! And I liked getting that bit of insight into how Hinata felt when Kiba and Naruto first got together.

Props! Lotsa them!

Author's Response: Really? Wow, I'm glad you think it's alright. I felt so sad when I wrote about Shino. I don't like making him hurt like that. I might have to have my next fic as a ShinoxKiba, then it'll be all better ^_^


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 - 01:07 pm · For: The morning after
Oh, I do hope they get back together!!

The thing with Kakashi though... that was pretty funny. And, as far as I can tell, both seem okay reaction-wise, considering how they felt last chapter. It's consitent (I think... but I'm not too good with that stuff, so I dunno how useful I am there).

I wonder why Kiba's gotto go see Shino all of a sudden, though (or maybe you said it and I don't remember... geez, I'm such a lame-o. Nothing new there though, right?)

As JBMcDragon once said: Kiba is sex on legs.

She mighta said it in the past tense and with more flourish, but that about sums it up.

Author's Response: No, I haven't said it yet. My man read that chapter and was like *gasp* lol. I totally agree about Kiba. I love Kiba. He is one of the smexiest characters, and he's so fun to write with!


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 - 12:55 pm · For: I'm sorry, Kiba
No!!

As much as I love Shino x Kiba... That was awful! Poor Naruto!

And I like how you showed us what Naruto was really thinking and stuff compared to what he was saying (yelling, shoulting?). Still not a shipper, but I'm sad to see things falling apart.

I hope it all works out!!

On a tangent... I was reading your response... and I remember Mark. It was my FIRST ever Shino x Kiba fic... (yeah!) and that's how I fell in love with Kiba and (eventually) the pairing.

I distinctly remember closing the page and jumping out of my chair when it got to the heavier smut part... freaked my parents out almost as badly as I was freaked out (I was a yaoi fan at the time, but had only -just- gotten into fanfiction and, well, had previously only read light fluff).

So yeah... just had to comment on that. I'm glad other people have read and liked the Mark Series.

Author's Response: Uh-huh I was just the same. I have read the series a couple of times since then, and it still remains one of my favourite fanfics.


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 - 12:45 pm · For: Don't go.
Hmm, the mission worries me.

But it's great to see that Kiba and Naruto are getting even closer now (yay) ... though I'm still not a Kiba x Naruto shipper.

It's kidna strange to see Kiba as uke... the only time I picture him being uke is with Shino. Though with him and Naruto I guess the roles are interchangeable.

I'd like to see some Seme!Kiba... but that's your choice (Huh, I just realized I forgot to check if the story is completed or still in progress. D'oh).

Author's Response: Story is very much in progress at the moment. I thought the same about the roles being very interchangable with those two as well. I put Kiba as uke so far because... I don't know, I like him that way, I just think he would make a fabulous uke. Saying that, He would be a great seme also... I guess Kiba's just good at sex O_o


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 - 12:36 pm · For: It's a scratch!
Ooooh, what's this? I sense trouble!

Is Shino gonna get all jealous and try to break them up?

Smut was good, but heavier yaoi than I usually read, so I was kinda like... tomato-red and constantly checking over my shoulder to make sure no-one was there. Can't offer any advice, though, seeing as you obviously know way more than me.

Author's Response: Haha, you made me giggle. I was like that when I first read a smutty yaoi. It was 'Mark' on this site, I believe. I swear I must have looked like a beetroot most of the way through. ^_^


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 - 12:27 pm · For: A knock at the door
Ha ha! Genma... psh. And all the interruptions!

Very well planned chapter, I think, yup!

Author's Response: It took me a long time to write compared to my other chapters, despite the fact that it was shorter, but I was happy with it in the end :)


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 09:21 am · For: They know
I can't believe Kakashi! I'm totally with Naruto! I can't believe Kakashi's such a gossip... oh well, sucks for Naruto and Kiba, right?

And... I might have to stop reading for fear of becoming a Naruto x Kiba shipper! D'oh. At the end, when they were just lying there and talking and laughing and stuff... I dunno. It's kinda like yin and yang, almost (not personality-wise) I mean, Kiba so tan with his dark hair and pale Naruto with his blonde hair.

It's a cute image.

Another good chapter... and I think I forgot to give you cookies last time... so yeah. Here ya go... do you like chocolatechip or oatmeal raisin better?

Or muffins. I like muffins.

Author's Response: So you think it's okay? And I'm an oatmeal raisin kinda girl. ^_^


Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 09:13 am · For: Dynamic marking
Well, that's... interesting.

The writing's good, but the pairing... eh. I just can't see Naruto with anyone but Hinata, Sasuke, or Sakura (though I hate him with Sakura and him being with Sasuke is so generic... it makes me wanna be sick. So only Hinata, really).

I guess I'm gunna stick with it, regardless of the pairing, 'cuz I'm interested in this mission. And I wonder if Kakashi is going to tell everyone while they're away?

Author's Response: I like them together. I took it up as a challenge and now it's one of my favourite pairings. I don't know, the two loudmouths seem like fun together to me. ^_^


Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 - 07:14 am · For: Blond and blue
Wow...and you thought you couldn't get emotions! That was so perfect! It was beautiful and hot and I so just loved that last line. Just perfect! The smut was awesome as well as the emotions they felt before and during. I so can't wait to see what happens next. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^


Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 - 04:23 pm · For: I love him
You nearly made me cry now, Becky... Poor Shino... Still, I couldn't help but to love the part where Kiba so bluntly told him he didn't want him. Even Shino has to have his limits, now he finally showed some emotions. Too bad it couldn't be a smile or joy or love or something, that it had to be sorrow and loss...

I also love, adore and admire you for the fact that you let them get back together, but without everything being peachy immediately. You don't just stop loving someone immediately after an incident, if you did I wouldn't love either of my parents, so it makes sense they could forgive each other. Or Naruto could forgive Kiba rather, since Kiba deserved what he got. But I hate it when a fic sorta ends with the kiss and everything is perfect again. Once more you portrate emotions beautifully, with the illogical love that our little blonde gives in to despite not completely trusting the reason for it - Kiba. I'm so looking forward to more of this fic, and I am quite pleased that you're addicted to writing it, haha. ^.^

Author's Response: Oh my gods! You made me so happy! I have a big grin on my face now *blush*... I will get the next chapter up as soon as possible.


Name: puresugar13 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 - 02:50 pm · For: I love him
Yayz! Everythings better *pats the band-aid she put on it* Now on with the story... Poor Shino-Kun... ^.^

Author's Response: I felt bad for Shino-kun. Much as he is creepy for a bug-phobiac like myself, I love him to bits. I don't like making him sad! Lol.


Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 - 02:40 pm · For: I love him
Can you just say AWWWW!!! That was so fluffy and sweet that I think I got a cavity just from reading it! You are so paying my dentist bills! But anyhoo I wuv this! I can't wait for the next chapter! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was okay!


Name: angelgirl555 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 - 02:16 pm · For: The morning after
What is going to happen?!


Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 - 08:02 pm · For: The morning after
I think you got the emotion down flat! I have no idea what you were worrying about. This is so sad. Poor Naru-chan. A part of me wants him to turn to Sasuke, but this a story dedicated to him and Kiba, not Sasuke. Please, please just don't make Sasuke like Naru-chan. I don't think I could take it! I hope things work out between them. Again I think you got the emotions down really good. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^

Author's Response: Yay! I'm improving on the whole emotion thing! I aleady have most of the next chapter written- This story is getting so addictive to write now! It's 4am here now, and I still want to write more. Ack I'm going to regret this in a couple of hours lol. I just don't learn my lesson. ^.^


Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 - 07:24 pm · For: The morning after
Aww I wanna huggle Naru and pat Sasu for actually giving a damn but I think Kiba is a royal moron for going to see Shino before going to see Naru


Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 - 07:16 pm · For: The morning after
It's great Becky! I like how Kiba can't quite say he loves Naruto, seems IC with his clan being so close to nature and homosexuallity ((for some reason unknown to me!)) seen as unnatural by so many. Naruto is depressed and angry with both himself and Kiba, why he doesn't wish to talk to anyone and wants to be alone despite the heavy thoughts that come across him then. It seems pretty realistic to me. I love the part where he, Naruto, admits to still loving Kiba and wish he could find some comfort in the Inuzuka, even though it was Kiba who hurt him. That is love in all its twisted, messed up, unrealistic glory. I think you did a great job, honey.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! I kinda tried to use my own feelings when I wrote Naru-kun, 'cause I know I could have the BIGGEST argument with my fiance, but it would only be him I went back to for comfort. Yay for illogical loved up feelings... kinda...


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