Reviews For Confusion
Name: San Davis 687 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/11/11 - 05:49 pm · For: Together
great job!!!:)
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 16/04/08 - 06:32 am · For: Together
Hay great. love it .keep it up.
Name: Dunaiv (Anonymous) · Date: 27/12/07 - 11:36 pm · For: Strange
Damn you can write..
That is actually a very cute paring, why arent there more stories about it?
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 12/10/07 - 05:43 pm · For: Strange
that really was a very good story. i wish you would write more.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 - 05:55 pm · For: Together
Wow... d@mn... that was definitely one of, if not the, most beautiful yuri smut I have ever read.
I would like to see more of this. I've got an idea... maybe you can write about them going on a mission, and one of them is placed in serious danger. That'll at least give enough material to write on for about 2-3 chapters.
Anyways, I can't wait to see more! Great work!
Name: BloodOfANinja (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 - 02:52 pm · For: Again, sensei
wow! it's amazing, definitely a strong story here! keep it up ;D
louise =]
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-- ChiyoChan : Thankyou very much! I'm happy you think so. I've been trying to write the new chapter for a while now, but I just can't get it right. I've been getting so annoyed with it to the point of giving up- but I will stay determined! I will keep trying!
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 04/08/07 - 06:35 pm · For: Together
well i think it pretty good
Name: LuffLemons (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 - 11:19 pm · For: Together
Wow Chiyo, you did it again! *adds to favorites*
I demand moar! >D
Awesome awesome awesome!
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-- ChiyoChan : Oh thankyou, I'm glad you enjoyed. This story has been on hold for a while, but I'm hoping to continue very soon ^_^
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/07 - 06:24 pm · For: Thoughts
Huph, while I'm not a yuri fan (I'm a yaoi hater), I have to say that this is pretty good! AWESOME!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. It makes me so happy when people say they enjoy my work!
Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 - 04:42 pm · For: Thoughts
Took you long enough! 'Twas worth waiting for, though. I think you portrayed their feelings well and the only misstake I found was at the end when yoou said "i was rather tired while writing it."
Don't take so long this time! I want to see what happends next!
Author's Response: Yeah sorry about that, for ages I seemed to have no inspiration for it. I have the rest of the story planned out now, so it shouldn't be too long between chapters anymore. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: Hikora Rea (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 - 02:48 pm · For: Strange
Hey I finished it...don't be to dissapointed it was my first pairing fiction
Name: Hikora Rea (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 - 09:10 am · For: Again, sensei
its a good story and u should defentily continu with Kurenai and Hinata
Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 - 04:36 pm · For: Again, sensei
Of course this is worth continuing! I've never thought about KurenaixHinata, but this is one of the most well writen stories I've read on this site! You kept all of the characters in character, and it was over all a great story!
Author's Response: In that case i will start on the latest chapter today! :]
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 19/04/07 - 04:07 pm · For: Again, sensei
You should continue this. Its very good!
I never thought of KurenaixHinata!
^_^
If that came up in the show, that would be a episode worth watching.
But it most likely wont happen, sadly. Your a very good writer!
Author's Response: yay! thanks you've made my day!
Name: hinata_hyuga (Anonymous) · Date: 13/04/07 - 09:40 am · For: Strange
this is a very good fanfic!!!
when are you going to add a new chapter??
Author's Response: i have it almost finished, so should have the next couple up tomorrow :)
Name: hinata_hyuga (Anonymous) · Date: 13/04/07 - 09:40 am · For: Strange
this is a very good fanfic!!!
when are you going to add a new chapter??
Name: Jigoku Dayu (Anonymous) · Date: 02/04/07 - 07:16 pm · For: Strange
The story thus far is pretty good. The puncuation could use work and there are some grammatical errors, but I understand it hasn't been beta-read yet. Good job!
Name: baldragnarok16 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/07 - 02:54 pm · For: Strange
Awesome! It's great to see another shoujo-ai/yuri story added to the small amount archived. It's really good for a first time story, especially considering that most of them...well...I'm sure you get the drift. And also, your grammer's almost always on the mark (another thing sadly missing from most stories.) Your characterization's pretty solid, as is your dialogue. Your writing style's pretty good also.
And so...
Baldr adds you to favorites and hopes you continue the goodness.
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you enjoyed! I'm so happy now lol!