Reviews For Girls Night Out
Name: Sasuke (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 - 02:55 pm · For: Chapter 5:Tres,and quatro
wtf...you said you HATED yaoi but then again you read my stories so i guess you do love it lolz
Name: puppetmanipulator (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 - 01:21 pm · For: Chapter 9:Epilouge
Umm... sure! Go for it?
Name: emolover (Signed) · Date: 05/04/07 - 07:25 pm · For: Author's Note
a sequal like that would be hott!!!
Author's Response: ook
Name: EdisMine (Anonymous) · Date: 29/03/07 - 06:04 pm · For: Chapter 4:Second Round
eh. no big deal. just me over reacting. sorry if i caused u trouble.
Author's Response: no.its ok
Name: EdisMine (Anonymous) · Date: 26/03/07 - 03:17 pm · For: Chapter 4:Second Round
ANKO IS NOT A LESBIAN!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: heh,she is in this:Psorry.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 26/03/07 - 01:42 pm · For: Chapter 9:Epilouge
considering i reviewed two other chapters you don't :D unless you want 10 different reviews!
*please please please let her do the sequal now*
;)
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 26/03/07 - 01:33 pm · For: Author's Note
naruto, sasuke, gaara, neji, shikamaru, kakashi, iruka, lee, kiba, haku
those have to be in the yaoi version!!
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 26/03/07 - 01:27 pm · For: Chapter 5:Tres,and quatro
i am enjoying this, but i would LOVE a yaoi version of it!! please, write it up! unless you have already, cause i didn't look before reviewing... >.
Name: XxSasukeLovexX (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 - 01:30 pm · For: Chapter 9:Epilouge
woo yes! cant wait for the story to continue! 'act emo and all' lol that's funny. I can tell this ALL GUYS PARTY is gonna rox.
Author's Response: yeah,but i need two more reviewsT.T
Name: Nikki_Yaoi (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 - 01:00 pm · For: Author's Note
Yaoi sequel is nice, but Kyuubi is a girl demon :x -shot-
;o; Oh gosh...-doesn't want to read Orochimaru yaoi-
(But SasuNaru and KakaIru is nice n_n)
Author's Response: oh crap.forgot about Kyuubi being a girl thereO.o(and i'll put a warning for the Oro yaoi,)
Name: XxSasukeLovexX (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 - 12:58 pm · For: Chapter 1:The Begining
lol Naruto getting raped by all the girls? ok...its ur story, jus plzzzzz SASUNARU IN THE SEQUEL!!!! PLZ? LOL
Author's Response: there's hints of NaruSasu in the end.
Name: XxSasukeLovexX (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 - 12:52 pm · For: Author's Note
For one yes make a yaoi sequel and please have Naruto and Sasuke together! they are my favorite pairing and two yes he shud dump the pink bitch.
Author's Response: yes!but first,he must be raped by all the girls.GO YAOI!
Name: Nightmare (Signed) · Date: 24/03/07 - 11:11 pm · For: Author's Note
Nooooooooooo! Naruto should arrive back in this story early and shows everyone just how much 'stamina' he has for the 'activities'*Dies from a nosebleed from the image of Naruto and all the girls doing...........thud*
Author's Response: ok:Pyou got it!
Name: shadow shriken (Signed) · Date: 24/03/07 - 08:34 pm · For: Chapter 5:Tres,and quatro
no no no pleas4 no yaoi please thats disgusting please don't
Author's Response: huh?no yaoi?yet you like yuri?odd choice isent it?well,lets see what everyone else says.
Name: kakashilovesme2 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/07 - 07:13 pm · For: Chapter 4:Second Round
the guys shouldn't come in till a little later. and it should be naruto or sasuke since naruto was out for a mission he should come home and find the invitation figuring that they wouldn't notice if it wasn't him if he did the sexy jutsu or something but yeah so theres and idea.
Author's Response: ok.Naruto than.Hm...I geuss all the girls are going to get him thanO.o
Author's Response: thanks
Author's Response: nvm about the all thegirls going to him thing,i have something better planned>:)
Name: battousai1889 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/07 - 10:52 pm · For: Chapter 3:First Picked
The only thing that I can suggest at this point before I can form an opinion about the story, is that the chapters are too damn short. It takes me all of 3.5 seconds to read an entire chapter. Due to this, the plot tends to skip around a bit, for instance, as Sakura and Hinata were in the guest room, you jump to the aftermath of the chapter. Moreover, by the language of your story, you are going to have a incest pairing between Hinata and her sister. I feel that is just odd, but I never have been a fan of incest pairings. Looking forward to more from you!
Author's Response: crap.I forgot about Hanabi being there...