Reviews For Chant d'Automne
Name: Charlia-Chan x (Anonymous) · Date: 30/10/07 - 03:38 pm · For: Introduction: Preludes
Woah, i love this [=
you're a really talented writer!
And i love Kakashi And Hinata. :P
But i never thought of them together tbh..
(Im a NaruxHina fan >;D.. or was..)
BUT you like, so changed my veiws on it :0
Y'know, ima get a detention now bcos instead of doing my homework i was reading this ;0
Heck, worth it though! :P
A-MAZING. :]
kai, ill end my essay here :P
Keep it up, and cant wait for next chapter!
(Not being pushy or anything XD)
xoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
Name: HAVEN213 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 - 07:35 am · For: Introduction: Preludes
you are an amazing writer.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 16/10/07 - 05:11 pm · For: Chapter 10: Turn and Face the Strange
Hmm... this is getting... intriguing, shall I say. They've got themselves in pretty deep (no suggestiveness intended). Wonder how this'll work out.
Very nice, as usual. Waiting patiently for another update.
Author's Response: Thanks, and as usual, your patience is appreciated.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 - 11:14 am · For: Chapter 9: Welcome to the Jungle
Wow, this chapter has so many sides to it... I think I could re-read it ten times and get new things out of it every single time. With this you truly proove that you are an amazing writer, one that gets down with your characters and make them seem alive. I must have said it a dozen times by now, but you really do balanze the story gorgeously! The emotions and the regret, the desire and the fear, the reason and the love, put together with the writing you are capable of it sure looks professional. Whereas drawn-out plots often makes me loose interest, your story has me hooked and longing for the next chapter the minute one ends. I want, no I need to know what they'll do next! The ending part of this chapter, where they do confess they are truly interested in each other, is marvelous. There is so much in this story I never want it to end! Thank you for writing this, seriosuly.
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-- pokey jr : Thank you. :D <-- that is what my face looks like after reading your review. Actually, all the reviews I've gotten on this site have been flattering, positive and intelligent. I'm glad you like the story so much, and get something out of it too. I started it for several different reasons, but I never expected it to turn into what it has. With my last two chapters, the most recent one in particular, I feel like I've really grown as a writer. Next chapter is in the works!
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 - 11:33 am · For: Chapter 9: Welcome to the Jungle
Aww... so nice. I got to say, you're a professional at developing the story and the plot. It's really good to see this kind of story around, you know?
I do know that smut is nothing without emotion, and emotions are meaningless without development. I'll be waiting patiently for your update.
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-- pokey jr : *blushes* thank you. that's so true about how a writer really needs to develop the story, to make smut meaningful. When I write it, I really have to get in my character's headspace, and to do that, I kind of have to start from the beginning, no jumping right in the middle. thanks for the review.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 - 01:33 pm · For: Chapter 8: 'Quelle heure est-il au paradis'
this summer i work constantly, while in school i only have classes three days a week. it gives me more free time than when i work, ironically... no worries about the time, this story is more than good enough to wait for! it's marvelous, to say the least. ^.^
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-- pokey jr : too bad about having to work. I hope it's at least a job you like :-) I just got out of high school and will start college in the fall, so I guess then I'll understand what it's like to really choose my own schedule. Thanks again for all your support and encouragement with the story! It means a lot.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 05/08/07 - 08:58 am · For: Chapter 8: 'Quelle heure est-il au paradis'
seriously darling, i absolutely love this chapter! and i think you did the exact right thing in putting the so-called 'real action' on hold. it makes so much sense, kakashi is in such control of himself and...i don't know, but it's perfect. though i won't be complaining when they do get down to some pure, uncensored sex. XD
it's beautiful, keep it up at the pace you feel comfortable with. hopefully i'll get down to do some writing on my own once school's back on. i'll be here when the next chapter comes out - whenever that is.
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-- pokey jr : thanks and I appreciate your support! btw, how do you find time to write once you're back in school? I'm always super busy... anyway, next chapter is about 1/2 to 2/3 of the way done. (I know, I'm about as fast as a slug.)
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 28/07/07 - 10:08 pm · For: Chapter 8: 'Quelle heure est-il au paradis'
Aw man! I wanted to see some real action! Good job so far, though.
You got me incapable of waiting for your update. Plz update soon!
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-- pokey jr : yes, I know I promised 'smex'... honestly, I thought the scene at the end was pretty explicit. If it were a movie, it would definitely be rated R. I'm surprised at people's reactions, as yours isn't the only one asking for 'real action'. But anyway, the story will soon move into NC-17 territory as it is. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: thenarutofanfreak22 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 - 12:03 pm · For: Chapter 7: We've Chased Our Pleasures Here
Very good story ^_^ keep up the good work hehehehehehehe
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-- pokey jr : thanks!
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 - 12:24 pm · For: Chapter 7: We've Chased Our Pleasures Here
I'm in love with this story
Author's Response: thank you... I'm rather partial to it myself. :-)
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 01/05/07 - 12:15 pm · For: Chapter 6: Purple Prose...
Hokage's Balls made me laugh out loud :D Loved this chapter. AMAZING!
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 - 10:57 pm · For: Introduction: Preludes
Who wouldn't want to get inside Kakashi's pants?! Haha, he is the smex. Single longer-chapter updates sounds very nice. ^-^
By the way, would you happen to be a user of MSN or AIM...?
Author's Response: I recently joined the rest of the world on AIM. screen name is 'noyalle' - and I warn you, I am a very slow typist (although that isn't the reason my updates take so long.)
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 - 12:27 pm · For: Chapter 7: We've Chased Our Pleasures Here
You tease! *pokes tongue and laughs at the same time* Here I thought they were gonna get together, but no-no. At the risk of sounding like a broken record; I love how well-balanced this is! You make it seem so realistic, the way they both want the other but fear what that other person will think and therefore keep quiet about it... And how situations that are completely ordinary seem awkward at such times... I just love it, can't wait for more! ^-^
About the update-rate, I'd say it depends. If you leave cliffhangers like the previous chapter, then an immediate update is VERY appreciated! Haha. Then again, it's always nice with close updates... Still, I'd say the way you do now, with two chapters at a time, is good. I like reading a bit more when you update. ^-^
Author's Response: hehehe *evils* your review made me happy. when I started writing, I didn't think I'd be doing much from Kakashi's perspective, but it just keeps coming up... I can't resist getting inside his head (and pants :p) updates will be in single chapters for a while, but each of these will be longer than current single chap's, so it's a compromise. Thanks, and I'm glad you still enjoy the story!
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 - 12:10 pm · For: Chapter 6: Purple Prose...
Oh. My. God. I loved this story before, now I absolutely love it! You are a brilliant writer, the balance of this story is marvelous! And thank god you post two chapters at a time, I would've died from the cliffhanger otherwise! XD *hurries on to read what happens next*
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 02:07 pm · For: Chapter 5: Decline of Day
Ah damn! You have to update this NOW! I wanna know what happens next. I love the way you write. I love this story. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I would respond to all of the lovely and flattering reviews you left, but I'm short on time (trying to get the next chaps out soon), so I hope this will suffice. There WILL be more action (read: sex) shortly, but I'm debating how graphic to make it. I don't want this to turn into a smutfest, fun as those are. I'll try to update as soon as I can, but I have a lot of work right now. Thanks for all the reviews!
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 01:50 pm · For: Chapter 4: A Room with a View or, A Slow Start
I want some HinataxKakashi sex ;P
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 01:39 pm · For: Chapter 3: Decisions in the Name of Action
tehee, Kakashi's such a pervert. I'm loving this so far. I love how you've portrayted the two of them. Amazing
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 01:22 pm · For: Chapter 2: Domo Arigato, Mr. Roboto
Oi! (I'm loving this) just wanted to say you wrote she plopped down on her bed, and in the letter she says she's in Kakashi's kitchen.. Maybe you'd like to change that or so..? Anyways.. off to read the next chappy :)
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 01:13 pm · For: Chapter 1: Tumult to a Lifeless Ocean
I'm liking this so far.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 - 03:33 pm · For: Chapter 5: Decline of Day
yes, i do have this one as a favorite, haha. absolutely lovely, especially the last chapter! the balance of their desire for each other & their fighting against it is...gorgeous! please don't get bored with this story, i wanna read mooooore!
Author's Response: yay, someone noticed! thanks for the feedback, this kind is really helpful. and you know, it's only gorgeous because they are! i'm planning the next update to be three LONG chapters...and I promise, I'm really only just getting into it. there's lots more to come.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 29/03/07 - 05:57 pm · For: Chapter 3: Decisions in the Name of Action
i fall more in love with this for every chapter i read, haha. gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous!
i only thought of one thing i chapter 3; the text says she's laying on her bed while the letter she's writing says she's seated at the kitches table... a minor detail, the rest is...pretty much perfect...
Author's Response: Crap! I thought I fixed that. (I'm posting on two archives, and fixed on the other one- guess I missed it here. thanks again, and I'm glad you liked it.
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 22/03/07 - 09:09 am · For: Chapter 1: Tumult to a Lifeless Ocean
I honestly love this. You're a very good writer, good language and a fluent story. The pairing is very intersting too. I can't find anything to complain about, and I definitely look forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapters should be ready for posting very soon, and hopefully will continue to please. Thanks again for your kind words. :-)