Sorry to disappoint you but i'm new at this writing thing too...BUT...still I have things to say. First of all, your doing a great job! I almost cried as well, and I dont cry easily. Your grammar and spelling is good accept for when I think you ment *as* but put *ass* in the first chapter. Your really good with this suspense thing. Basically I'm saying that you got 'skillz' for a person who's new at this. Keep up the good work and update soon, i like your story! R&R mine too if you get a chance! Ato!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm not disappointed at all! I'm glad you liked it! I'm almost done with chapter 3, in fact, I might have it up tonight. (but no promises. XD) Thanks SOO much for your input. And thanks for pointing out that typo, I'll go change it. I'm so bad at editing my own work. XD And yeah, I'll definately check out your work! Again, thanks for the input and I hope you like the rest of the story! ^_^