Reviews For the missing nin's return
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 - 10:36 pm · For: The rokudaime
not bad
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-- rasengan_welch : hmm
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 - 10:30 pm · For: so called 'fun'
"sasuke please,naruto is already gone with jiraiya.and if you leave then there will be no one else to care for!" uh how did naruto fight sasuke if naruto left before him
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-- rasengan_welch : dude,it's my first fic.i wasn't thinking okay?
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 - 09:55 pm · For: naruto the almighty cook
didnt you say naruto had 30 bowls of ramen when he returned and he somewat doesnt eat it anymore and no offense but wtf naruto's dad serves sushi and how did he know hed be there but great story
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-- rasengan_welch : same as the review below
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 - 09:55 pm · For: naruto the almighty cook
didnt you say naruto had 30 bowls of ramen when he returned and he somewat doesnt eat it anymore and no offense but wtf naruto's dad serves sushi and how did he know hed be there but great story
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-- rasengan_welch : 1.naruto was uber hungry so he had no choice but to eat ramen that time.(it was the only filling thing he could find) and at the sushi bar,he couldn't resist leaving ramen anymore so he had no choice. 2.it was all a coincedence.got it?
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-- rasengan_welch : his dad didn't serve it,some other man did.his dad was there on his own.
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 30/04/07 - 04:37 pm · For: near the end notes
PARTY PARTY PARTY!!!
Oh and did naruto become the Rokudaime?
Author's Response: YES!^_^
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 28/04/07 - 11:18 pm · For: near the end notes
Ohh... Another of my afvs, outside of NaruXHina, is NaruXTsun *Smiles devilishly*
Author's Response: naruto and......tsunade.......hmm
Name: naruto_junior (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 - 08:48 pm · For: NARUTO'S BACK!!!
naruto's a missing nin now....lol
nice story u got it pretty well detailed n wat not i liked it.
Author's Response: thanx
Name: YondaimeNarutosDad (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 - 07:17 pm · For: near the end notes
Plz conyinue the story and do it leaning towards NaruxHina and alittle SasxSaku and Maybe SasxIno him and Sakura come up with a plan for Sasuke to sleep with Ino and post the video on the internet or the pictures all over Konoha lol Hey nvm thats mine lol use if you want if you don't I will.
Author's Response: an odd idea,but still,it might work.i was currently thinking of a nejixten fic. and i dont do x-rated stories! so stop asking.
Name: kagekage (Signed) · Date: 23/04/07 - 09:17 pm · For: so called 'fun'
good liked the lee tied to a tree and kiba getting insuted stupid dog boy
Author's Response: heh
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 17/04/07 - 07:45 pm · For: ino's encounter
alright, the story's okay, and funny, but i can't seem to get into it all that much; also i'm not going to review your other story because it's not NaruXHina
Author's Response: aww well,but next story will be naruxhina
Name: hibiki96 (Anonymous) · Date: 17/04/07 - 07:08 pm · For: the search for hinata hyuuga
Well, it's okay, but to direct/forward, it needs more time to build up to a larger climax, but it's still cute
Author's Response: i know
Name: kyuubixshukaku (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 07:41 pm · For: NARUTO'S BACK!!!
good story
Author's Response: thx
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/07 - 05:55 am · For: author's notes
drunken people!
Spin the Bottle Games!
teeeeheee!
Author's Response: instead of drunken people and spin the bottle ill do truth and dare it will be better wouldnt it?
Author's Response: truth or dare will be better
Name: kagekage (Signed) · Date: 04/04/07 - 07:35 pm · For: author's notes
i would like to see more naruhina
Author's Response: you got it ^_^
Name: almightyalchemist (Anonymous) · Date: 04/04/07 - 06:24 pm · For: author's notes
u should make a food fight. that would be realy funny to see. and r u gonna expand the naruhina thing or not
Author's Response: i dont know about the food fight but i will expand the naruhina part
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 03/04/07 - 02:18 pm · For: memorized moves
Continue with the good work man ^_^
Author's Response: i know i will
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 30/03/07 - 01:09 pm · For: reunion
Naruto vs Hinata
Sasuke Vs Sakura
Shikamaru vs Temari
Kiba vs shino
Neji vs Tenten
Author's Response: uuhhm how about you switch it up a bit?
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/07 - 04:59 am · For: sasuke
How old are the characters in your story?
Author's Response: naruto:15 sasuke:15 sakura:15 shikamaru:15 temari:18 kiba:15 shino:15 neji:16 tenten:16 kakashi:28 ino:15 chouji:15 hinata:15 tsunade:53 jiraiya:53 4th hokage:hmm...ill make him 37
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/07 - 06:38 pm · For: pineapple head's troublesome 15 minutes
-.- and you say i need to work on my punctuation haha
Author's Response: heh
Name: runescap21 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/07 - 06:37 pm · For: NARUTO'S BACK!!!
hey cool i was reading this earlier today. You updated it yippie!
Author's Response: yeah its good so far right?
Name: darkleaf234 (Signed) · Date: 28/03/07 - 02:44 am · For: NARUTO'S BACK!!!
heh, nice storyline but improving on ur punctuation would rock this fic so much more i read all chaps ler,, xD
Author's Response: thanks for the note
Name: kagekage (Signed) · Date: 26/03/07 - 10:02 am · For: naruto the almighty cook
good story you gonna update soon
Author's Response: pretty much
Name: kyuubixshukaku (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 - 08:03 pm · For: NARUTO'S BACK!!!
huh?so it's narusaku....and it somehow turns to Naru Hina....ok.makes sense
Author's Response: yes i know
Name: almightyalchemist (Anonymous) · Date: 05/03/07 - 03:45 pm · For: sasuke
its a realy good story so far. keep up the good work
Author's Response: thanks
Name: Wharehouse (Signed) · Date: 23/02/07 - 09:54 am · For: the search for hinata hyuuga
Poorly written and very poor grammar and punctuation. A definate way to improve would be to make paragraphs and not just 1 long blurb of text. Honestly I was barely able to understand the language in some areas.
Author's Response: well honestly at least i have a story.so instead of talking about mine i think you should start on yours.if you know how to