Reviews For The Heir and the Demon
Name: Sorca5 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 02:43 pm · For: Fury of a Fox
Please continue this, it's great. I think Sasuke died a little prematurely though, but the story still rocks. I give it a nine!
Name: Henebi (Anonymous) · Date: 02/07/07 - 03:45 pm · For: Fury of a Fox
Great story..can't wait for another chapter.
Name: dehaloking (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 - 11:09 am · For: Fury of a Fox
better late then never,I loved the chapter it was so good I hope you put some fluff in the next chapter so who are u thinking of havin the leader be the 4th or uchiha mandra
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-- koshiir_ra : neither. Both of those are illogical. I'm pretty sure that Uchiha Madara was the first person to unlock the Mangekyou Sharingan. And that's supposed to have been a long, long, time ago, so he's probably long dead. As for the 4th, he's dead too. And even if he was still alive, he wouldn't turn on his own village. Case closed.
Name: Water Uzimaki (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 09:09 pm · For: Sasuke's Decision
Wow, intense, hope to read the update soon (sorry about not comenting before, i was to into reading the story, forgive me)
Name: dehaloking (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 - 03:58 pm · For: Sasuke's Decision
okay im your 15th does this mean u will dedicate the next chapter to me or does this not count
Author's Response: lol sure...
Name: dehaloking (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 - 12:59 pm · For: Sasuke's Decision
omg it cant end like that
Author's Response: I'm waiting for my fifteeth review... I thought a cliffhanger would make people review more...guess not... don't worry, I'm in the process of writing chapter six!
Name: uzukun7 (Anonymous) · Date: 02/03/07 - 06:52 am · For: Sasuke's Decision
thats messed up leaving it in a cliffhanger like that. it has been a good story so far i really hope you update soon. laterz
Name: the guest (again) (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/07 - 05:52 pm · For: Sasuke's Decision
OMG!!! this is starting 2 get very very exciting!!!. Wah i hope naruto will give the sasuke teme the odama rasengan. I cnt stand one of my most fav couple being killed just like that. Oh yeah heres some ideas i wnt 2 share wth u:
1. After hinata (or sakura since u gave some hints) got hit with the chidori, kyuubi got released. As his anger lvl gain towards the teme a tail of the kyuubi is revealed. Until the 8th tail came, the ground shook and formed a very huge crater which l8er intimidatd the teme. Then sasuke chargd anthr chdori to naruto n naruto got hit. But naruto only laughd at ths. Finally the 9th tail came out and kyuubi (2gthr with naruto) touchd hinata (or sakura) and healed her but still faintd.
2. Nw the kyunarubi chargd a new rasengan which consist of all the elements from kyuubi nine tales forming a black red colour rasengan. This made sasuke more scared. Then kyunarubi (kyuubi naruto) said "u thnk u can kill me just like that or better can u get near me hmm?".
well sorry for da short rev (dats bcoz im nt gud at revs hehe). Again im using my cellphone 2 read ur fanfic (one of my fav) and revd it. U can (or not) use (or alter) my ideas for ur nxt chap. Man i cnt wait. I hope u post da nxt chap soon!!!
Name: shy_vibrant_luv (Signed) · Date: 22/02/07 - 01:57 pm · For: Legacy of the Fourth
Keep up the good work and update soon, please! You've got a storyline so far and I cant wait too read about what happens next!! You can count me as a fangirl, lol. R&R my story too if you get a chance! Yeah, NaruxHina!
Name: shortd (Signed) · Date: 22/02/07 - 06:14 am · For: Love at first sight
Cons: I don’t have a cookie & its story line is basically the same as many other Naruto- Hinata
Pros: It’s a good story with its moments and I guess its action scenes... wait never mind BECAUSE IT DOESN’T HAVE ANY… yet... I guess
P.S. I want a cookie tooooooooooooo……………
P.S.S. Author is annoying he’s sort of my friend in the same class
P.S.S.S. I know embarrassing… he is
P.S.S.S.S Email me at nightshadex2005@yahoo.com if you hate cliffhangers… and doughnuts without jelly cream filling.