Reviews For Desperation on Campus
Name: sew123093 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 - 02:20 pm · For: And So It Begins.....Desperation part I
How can Sasuke be the killer if he's dead...
So far it is great. I love it!!!
Personally, I think Gaara did it for some reason.
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-- uzamaki_fluff : You think Gaara is doing it..that is pretty interesting.. And Sasuke could because of the whole..I dunno..people came up with that
Name: XxanimefanxX (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 - 09:01 pm · For: Consequences For Our Actions
Are you going to write the next chapter?
Author's Response: I am working on it..unfortunately got hit with major writers block sorry!
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-- XxanimefanxX : Oh it's ok :) I was just wondering..
Name: XxanimefanxX (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 - 07:28 am · For: And So It Begins.....Desperation part I
This story is so suspensful and it has a very good plot. I love the way you write it and i hope that each chapter will reveal more about the killer and each chapter be as good as the last. I'm new and this is the first story I've read here. I think it is an excellent way to start off as a member. Thank you.
Author's Response: Well, um your welcome..I am actually kinda of speechless at this is the first fic that you have read here, and what you think of it. I am honored, now my turn to say thanks.
Name: battousai1889 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 - 01:16 am · For: Consequences For Our Actions
So Sakura has Stockholm Syndrome? No I wouldn't think that Kabuto was behind the murders. You are too talented and would not fall to such sloppiness. I still feel that there is not a whole lot of information to formulate a guess. It seems that characters tend to disappear from time to time. I will admit I am at a bit of a loss.
Author's Response: Giood because it is not Kabuto, that is a little piece I threw in to throw people (Darn it revealed my secret!!). and thank you for the talented compliment, mind you all I have to say is that is someone you expect, but then again not expect.
Name: kyuubixshukaku (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 - 04:31 pm · For: Consequences For Our Actions
yeah,I agree.It sounds like it could be..Sasuke...or...ITATCHI!
Author's Response: hmm..can't say at the moment..but *shrugs* we may never..no actually we will..because I intend on completing it..
Name: kyuubixshukaku (Signed) · Date: 10/04/07 - 04:30 pm · For: Consequences For Our Actions
O.OKabuto scares me in this fic.Good though:PAt first i thought it was Shikamaru,than Oro,than Iruka for some reason.But.....I'm geussing Kabuto sense he is acting like a phycopath right now,or possibly Kiba.O.O
Author's Response: wow..so many guesses..which one is right you'll never know..and Iruka???
Name: katana_uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 - 06:24 pm · For: Consequences For Our Actions
i think its sasuke....anyone can call me crazy, i deal with it all the time, but thats what i think
Author's Response: Good Guess still..You're not crazy..because you aren't right and you aren't wrong..you are just in the middle..
Name: katana_uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 - 06:18 pm · For: Consequences For Our Actions
i think its sasuke....anyone can call me crazy, i deal with it all the time, but thats what i think
Author's Response: nah, its all right..although I can't tell you now, all will be revealed in coming chapters my dear..good guess!!
Name: battousai1889 (Signed) · Date: 27/03/07 - 01:53 am · For: So You Think You're Safe
So far so very good. I am ranking this in my top 5 stories on this site. The story's format is very fluid and logical. It works very nicely especially for the story you are writing. It has hints of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. There are a few grammar/spelling issues, but that is of no real concern as it does not detract from the story. I feel that this is an incredibly creative twist on a genre, that is subject to too many clichés and is anemic of real quality. Cheers!
Author's Response: Why thank you very much, I work especially hard on this story. I love to see feedback such as this, considering when it comes to genre of writing this here is my strongest. As for the comment concerning hints of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, his stories are what inspired me to take on suspense and mystery. Once again thank you so very much for your input.
Name: XenaAdamana (Signed) · Date: 16/03/07 - 04:32 pm · For: So You Think You're Safe
Wow... I was on the edge of my seat reading this chapter....
yet I still can't quite guess who the murderer is... I'll try harder soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, and the fact that you can't guess yet is all right..I guess I am more of a suspense kinda person when it comes to writing. I am gonna be giving more hints out in the next coming chapters