Reviews For Ghost Writer
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 11:31 pm · For: Chapter 9: Propositions
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh... mean old Itachi is trying to cut into the Hyuuga's business hmmmm.... i like the way the story is set out... it is different... but still allows the characters to be themselves... yes good
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-- Yumi : *sniffles* I. Love. You!! I'm so glad that you think that!! *huggles* You TOTALLY get cookies for that!!!!! *runs off to bake cookies* -Yumi ^________^
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 11:26 pm · For: Chapter 8: Discovery
hahahah neji cant kiss.... sorry it made me giggle
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-- Yumi : well, if suddenly your lover just kissed you out of the blue, you'd be a little shocked and unresponsive too!! ^^;;; anyway, he'll definately give Hinata her well deserved kiss later. . . -Yumi
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 11:20 pm · For: Chapter 7: Secrets
hmmm... the hyuuga family is up to their eyeballs in bad-ass-ness.... its getting very interesting
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-- Yumi : ^_________^ yup. . . I love this chapter!! -Yumi
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 11:12 pm · For: Chapter 6: Hearts
ohhhhhhhh shes so cute!!!
Neji is like... one of my favourite characters.. and hinata is one of the few females i can stand... you manage to stop the characters from being OOC... too much... which is good because i like them the way they are lol... but you know... im a hypocrite... like all my characters are OOC
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-- Yumi : well. . . I guess that's a good thing?? lol I really try hard not to make the characters too OOC because they're fun the way they are. Fanfiction is for those who wish to play with their favorite characters and/or who lack the ability to make their own. . . I fall under both categories sadly. . . TT__TT -Yumi
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 11:08 pm · For: Chapter 5: The First Time
hahaha... you can make up words if you want... i do it all the time... hmmm... Hinako has... quite a storng personalitu doesnt she...
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-- Yumi : oh yeah. . . wait until later! She'll come at Neji with a wrath that doesn't quit!! ^__^ -Yumi
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 11:03 pm · For: Chapter 4: The Typewriter
creeeeeeeppy.... very creepy
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-- Yumi : hehehehehe. . . loving it!! -Yumi
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 11:00 pm · For: Chapter 3: Hyuuga Hinako
ooh... ok... is this going to be scary? nah, jokes... good.... argh... time for more... i did tell you i wuld review everyone... im a loser with too much spare time ok... well actually i should be doing my assignment but i dont wanna!
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-- Yumi : I know the feeling. . . a lot of times I just write when I don't want to do my assignments, but don't follow in my footsteps!! XD thanks again for the review!! -Yumi
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 10:54 pm · For: Chapter 2: The Old Family House
hmmmm... i see a mystery unfolding... just a question: Why would the Hyuuga's expect Hinata to work at all, if she was really justa figurehead heir, or an heir at all?... wouldnt they teach her the family trade or something?... anyway just wondering... im going to read the next one now!
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-- Yumi : She's the heir, but she'll never really take over the business. Hinata will marry a good businessman, and then let him run the trade of the Hyuugas. She'll never really do anything other than be the heir and produce more heirs sadly. . . oh, and can I tell you how much I love you right now? I haven't had reviews in months and I haven't been able to write without the encouragement!! -Yumi ^__^
Name: LittleCrane (Signed) · Date: 08/06/07 - 10:48 pm · For: Chapter 1: Moving In
hehehe i like it already,... i read your profile and it said you like reviews so im going to review every chapter! just to be nice :)
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-- Yumi : *gasp!* A person who will review every chapter!! *sniffles* I'm gonna cry!!!!! I LUV YOU!!!!!!!!!! ^__^ - Yumi
Name: AshNight1214 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 10:31 am · For: Chapter 10: Exchange
*takes a few panicked breaths* Oy... I'm starting to freak out because of that. Woo... Well, it was great. I just need to find my oxygen tank now to breathe...
Author's Response: well. . . you get the picture. . . X3 hehehe I feel so evil suddenly!!!!! XD -Yumi
Name: AshNight1214 (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 10:19 am · For: Chapter 8: Discovery
Lovey, lovey! Another great chapter. If they stilll had number ratings, I'd rate twice; tens both times! -^____^-
Author's Response: coolz ^___^ thanks for FINALLY reading and reviewing!! -Yumi
Name: Tari (Signed) · Date: 25/03/07 - 11:09 am · For: Chapter 9: Propositions
MORE! Come on Yu-chan how evil can you be, leaving it on a cliffie like that...so mean. *sniffle*
Author's Response: I'm sowie *pouty face* but that was 8 pages!! If I fit any more in, I'd be into the next chapter already!! >< Well, I'll try my best to get the next chapter up sometime within the week. . . I'm going through hell with math and Japanese @___@;;; school sucks, doesn't it? -Yu-chan ^^