Okay, well, I avoid yaoi because I don't like it, but when it's not the main character, I can sometimes deal. With this I dealt with it just because it was so funny XD. Maybe there could have been more detail, and at first I had no idea which boy was chasing her, but dang, I was laughing the d tire time reading this XD. Definitely hilarious. If you do continue and it's like this again, I'll definitely check it out