Reviews For The Ten Tails
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 01/11/14 - 10:17 am · For: Chapter 71
I liked that update :) The first half was cool, and very interesting, though perhaps a little choppy. The second part was very sweet. I'm happy to see the plot and character development. Thank you for updating, and good work! :)
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 30/10/14 - 03:02 pm · For: Chapter 71
Damn i was about to cry there it was beautiful!👍
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks. I'm glad it met my expectations. I wanted to show their love form one another, and I'm glad that emotion got through. Thanks for commenting.
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 20/10/14 - 02:56 pm · For: Chapter 70
Hehe can't wait for the next one! Stupid Sasuke.
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 10/10/14 - 05:17 am · For: Chapter 69
That was really cool and interesting! What a plot twist! I look forward to reading more about it. Happy Birthday to Kiyoko!
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 06/10/14 - 07:00 pm · For: Chapter 69
I knew it once they said ice and brother I was like, "Haku?" and yep there it is. I hope we see her soon! Thanks for writing!
Name: NinjaRace (Signed) · Date: 23/09/14 - 02:49 pm · For: Chapter 1
Interesting, you put the tension on right away. The details were realistic and painted a not so pretty picture but did so well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for giving my story a chance. Hope you like the rest.
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 22/09/14 - 03:54 pm · For: Chapter 68
No words can describe this chapter it was just... and just... It was just so... :')
Author's Response: Ahhhh! Thank you so much! I've been having a rough time lately and I'm glad that someone still notices my story and my writing. Thanks a lot it mean more that you think
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 25/08/14 - 07:10 am · For: Chapter 65
I think it is the mom maybe not sure. Poor Kiyoko. Well was a great chapter I look forward to reading more!:)
Author's Response: The pieces of the puzzle will come together soon enough. Thanks for reading.
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 16/08/14 - 02:08 pm · For: Chapter 64
Omg what doing on so confused! But this is the best story ever!^-^
Author's Response: ya it is confusing right now, but it will all make sense in the future. Thanks for reading!
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 13/08/14 - 03:42 pm · For: Chapter 63
Wonderful chapter! Kiyoko sure works hard and that is what i love about her character! Man things are getting intense. What is happening? Question have you ever watched death note? Thank you for writing another chapter!^-^
Author's Response: Ya. I love that about Kiyoko too. I'm so proud of her. Lol. Thanks or reading and no I haven't watched death note. I think I've only watched the first episode but I know the concept about it
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 08/08/14 - 01:36 am · For: Chapter 62
Thank you for the response! Well i think the Akatsuki might be the ones but i dont know there is so many possibilities like how strong is her father? If she fears her father so much than does that mean he is powerful? So many possibilities... This was a great chapter! I will always be here to support this story! Good work!^-^
Author's Response: thanks. I'll try to make the other chapter longer. And as for just how strong her father is, I can't say just how strong he really is because that will be revealed in time. But to answer your question, he is strong, stronger than Kiyoko realizes. So he can be a threat, and so can the Akatsuki. I look forward to writing the few chapter after the next one. And thank you for supporting my story, since it seems like you and a couple others are the only ones who let me know just what you really think about my story.
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 05/08/14 - 04:38 am · For: Chapter 61
I thought it was good. It was wonderful. I love how this story is going. I hope you will continue to write it because it is a really good story.
Author's Response: Thanks. And don't worry about the story going unfinished. I have a lot planned out for this story that goes with the manga. So it will be a long story for Kiyoko. I plan to make a spinoff series in the future, and even other different stories about other Naruto characters. I'll be busy with school starting and marching band is starting too, so I will be extremely busy, but I will find a way around them just to write. Another thing that may prevent me from updating often is lately I have been having anxiety attacks, and they are affecting me. I try not to think of it as an excuse, and writing helps me with my anxiety, so it shouldn't stop me. I will definitely, I PROMISE, to finish this story and see it all the way through.
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 27/07/14 - 08:20 pm · For: Chapter 60
Beautiful! Blue haired guy turned out to be weak. Good kiyoko kicked his butt!^-^ Ooo Kakashi you is better be proud! Another wonderful chapter! I love the action and the ending!:)
Author's Response: Thanks. Maybe Kiyoko just got stronger ;)
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 27/07/14 - 12:40 am · For: Chapter 60
That was very fulfilling :p I feel like it went by quite quickly, but not in a super dissatisfying way. I loved the content, and the emotion. I'm also interested in seeing where you take this, seeing as how a step has been achieved in character development and plot. Please update when you can; no rush! :) thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for being so understanding. Especially since it's hard to see without glasses. I'm looking forward to writing her journey with her training too. She's grown into a better character than I ever imagined. Thanks again
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 24/07/14 - 11:15 pm · For: Chapter 59
Dang! Interesting chapter! I kind of feel bad bad for the tree man. I like how eri protect kiyoko from guy i thought that was funny!^-^ who is the blue haired young man? Cant wait to find out!
Author's Response: Thanks. Ya Eri is protective of her and Kakashi. Awww. Even though Guy is a great guy. You'll find out who the young man is. Thanks again!
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 24/07/14 - 10:45 pm · For: Chapter 59
Wow, that's super cool :) I really enjoyed this chapter! Protective Eri is cute :) I'm glad she's really coming into her own!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Ya Eri is great. And Kiyoko is finally filling her role and herself the way she wants to become. I feel as a writer that the character is developing itself. It's great to hear feedback, thanks
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 22/07/14 - 03:04 pm · For: Chapter 58
Omg! You go girl tell how is boss! Lol. I love the lovey dovey parts! Really good writing! Can't wait for the next one! Good job!^-^
Author's Response: haha. Thanks!
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 22/07/14 - 06:49 am · For: Chapter 58
Another fulfilling chapter! Of course, you know me, the fluff is golden. :p nice to have a little seriousness in there, though it was quite short. I just figure she had a pretty darn good excuse. Like, use wood technique or watch K die and then die herself. That wouldn't do :p anyways, another great chapter, and as always I look forward to the next with great anticipation!! Thanks!
Author's Response: Ya sorry it was short, I was thinking about making it longer but I didn't want to make readers wait too long so the next chapter will be longer. Thanks.
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 20/07/14 - 09:04 am · For: Chapter 57
Oh my gosh I've been waiting so long for that! Yay progress! Yay fluff! Yay Kakashi romance! This chaper makes me really happy :) good idea with the festival, and goodness have I been looking forward to it! Thanks for writing! :D
Author's Response: Haha me too. It's kind of a relief almost that they kissed. ;) thanks for leaving a review
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 20/07/14 - 07:47 am · For: Chapter 57
I thought it was good!^-^ well thanks for writing another chapter because im stuck in bed and when i awoke this morning i saw you wrote another chapter i was going to scream!It was sooo cute!:)
Author's Response: Omg. Thanks so much. I'm really glad you look forward to my story. I hope your doing okay.
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 16/07/14 - 06:41 am · For: Chapter 56
Aw! That's sweet :) that was really cool too! Totally unexpected, a trial version of that technique, and her having to use wood technique. Great plot twist, and of course I always look forward to the future writing! Thanks so much! (Also the shout out was pretty great :D woop woop!)
Author's Response: Thanks. It might not be correct on the real naruto concept but it worked in my book so. Haha.
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 16/07/14 - 12:20 am · For: Chapter 56
Awww finally the truth is out. I was about to cry at suzu's part. Hehe Thank you for another wonderful chapter. It was beautiful!😊
Author's Response: Don't worry I was teary writing it. Thanks for reading
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 13/07/14 - 02:42 pm · For: Chapter 55
Man cliffhanger. Another good one. Guy is too funny i wonder what he was going to say.
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/14 - 05:52 am · For: Chapter 54
That. Was. Great!
Author's Response: thank you so much! I love that you're enjoying my story.
Name: MissMuffinman (Signed) · Date: 09/07/14 - 10:51 am · For: Chapter 54
Beautiful loved the beginning and the middle and the ending. I can't wait to read the next chapter.^-^
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm excited to write the next chapter!