Reviews For Taking Control
Name: X3Dee (Signed) · Date: 05/12/14 - 04:39 pm · For: A Promise
I feel like the mom is both an important antagonist while at the same time being an extremely unimportant character, like she is trying too hard to be angry possibly? anyway though, and more importantly, I like this so far and I feel like I could really get into this character and what's going on in the story so far. This arc in the show has probably always been my favorite and the characters involved are probably some of my absolute favorites, so it's an added bonus for me that the story starts here :)
I'm trying to get myself back into the fanfiction community and I think this is a good story to add to my must read list, so I'm going to try and dive right into this and really get a feel for it. I will review again soon so watch out, and keep the chapters coming :D
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/14 - 10:15 pm · For: My Mother is a Ninja?!
As if I could leave this story, it has freakin Kakashi in it lol! Oh man things went south quickly, not sure if I want to read the next chapter --yeah I do lol.
Author's Response: Glad you like it! I don't have a computer at home so I sometimes take awhile to update, but I think I'm getting a new computer soon, so yeah! I'm glad you don't want to stop reading even though I put Tomi through some crap last chapter O_O. Yeah...crap is an understatement lol
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/14 - 09:33 pm · For: A Teacher With a Name to Match
So glad you updated. How dare Kakashi talk like that about her,
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're sticking with me when I don't update for about a year lol. Most of my readers leave after that, but you're awesome for sticking around! I hope you like the chapters to come!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/12/13 - 04:25 pm · For: One Week Early
Okay, finally getting to this. Yes, finally. Anyway, I do have a problem with this chapter's end. I know the Mist is kind of in a bad situation right now. They're not too far after the types of tests Zabuza had to do. But if they've adopted a four man squad position I don't think they'd be so fast to let a genin be alone. I'm sure you have your reason, but I feel maybe it could have been done better. Maybe if they'd done it because there wasn't the right number (as in a multiple of 3) and wanted the best student on their own, maybe. But if so that would have to be explained. The reasoning here just seemed flawed.
I did really enjoy the chapter. I loved Tomi's first meeting of Team 7, though wasn't Kakashi bedridden for overusing the Sharingan? Did Naruto seriously spill water on her? That big buttmunch. Then again, this is Naruto. Lost in his blue eyes? Then this was switched to NaruOc? I couldn't quite remember. Or I may be completely wrong still XD I'm curious as to how the interaction between the Konoha ninja and Tomi will go about when she comes back. There wasn't too much here so I'm eager to find out. Especially with a certain Hatake.
Although I was uncertain about it, the Academy scene was nice as well. I liked seeing a piece of her life in that aspect. Hah. She's already ahead of Team 7 since she's already aware of how to walk up trees XD. Maybe she'll be able to help them out?
Great chapter, Dino-chan. I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: It was SasukeXOC but I made Jena's story and I can't handle a second Sasuke story :P
Name: Olivia-Channnn (Anonymous) · Date: 22/11/13 - 10:36 pm · For: One Week Early
Ahh I really love it. Right off the bat, I can tell you've got Naruto's personality down, lol. Can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response: Thx for the compliment lol. Well I can't say when the next update will be, but I'm going to try to get it out before Christmas break. Thx for reviewing also. Welp bai!
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 22/11/13 - 08:56 pm · For: One Week Early
Really enjoying this, can't wait for you to add more!
Author's Response: lol thanks. I looked at this last week and I'm like: "I haven't updated for over a year. I think it's time to write a new chapter." Yup. I'm glad to have two new reviewers though! I thought Tonfa was really starting to die for a minute...well I probably wont update till next week so bai!!!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/04/13 - 07:19 am · For: Constellations
Ahhhh! This was so cute XD. I really did like it. The relationship between Inari and Tomi really makes them seem like a family. So adorable. I'm glad Inari has Tomi there with him. She really helps him along. Inari also gives Tomi someone to love since obviously she holds none toward her mother.
Nice chapter, Dino-chan. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yay! I thought I should give a little insight on their relationship, so I did! I don't know when I'm going to have chapter three out lol I'm going to my eye doctor tomorrow soooooo yeah.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/03/13 - 07:49 pm · For: A Promise
Taking Control Review
Hm...... I believe you are right about this one being better. The only real complaint is I think Tomi should have had more of a reaction from what happened with her mom. Yes, she pretty much hates her, but it just didn't seem right.
Inari is sooo cute. I just absolutely love the little guy. I liked most of the characters from the Bridge Builder arc really. I like how he and Tomi are so sibling-y. I think it's sweet how she wants so strongly to prove there are still heroes and stop Gato.
Speaking of whom, what is he planning, kidnapping Tomi's mom like that O.o? I really am curious about his goal. Guess I can only find out what it is by reading.
Nice chapter, Dino-chan. I really enjoyed it.
P.S. Happy Easter ^_^
Author's Response: Thx Sasa! U wanted to do an Easter special chapter but my mom won't let me go anywhere -_- so I might have to do it tomorrow lol u put me in a better mood tho lol
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 27/03/13 - 06:34 pm · For: Constellations
this has been a super cute chapter :) even more so when she was talking with inari.
20-something? seesh, what a perv :p
not sure what else to do?
Author's Response: Exactly :P I was trying to make Zori look like a perv lol. I'm glad you liked it and the next chapter will probably be out in a day or two :D
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/13 - 08:07 pm · For: A Promise
i read the first version before and quite honestly. i enjoyed this one a lot more than the first. keep up the good work ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks :D I think my writing has improved since the first version. The next chapter should be out later today or tomorrow.