Aww. Sad ending. It's an interesting take, considering the whole Them-not-being-alive in the original Narutoverse thing. There were some problems as far as smoothness go, and some for the dialogue, but the heart was there and it was quite sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad that you liked it, despite the sad ending. I'll definitely work on smoothness in story and dialogue in future fics. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. It really does help.