Reviews For Finding Home
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/12 - 01:53 pm · For: The Conclusion
:3 He's coming home~ That's so great! I think I'm gonna cry now...
The thing with the painted walls... wow, that was really sweet. Oh Sai, so sentimental...
This was a great story, Yui. You did fantastically on the entire thing. I loved every moment of it. Excellent work. I look forward to reading whatever you post next. Keep up the amazing work.
Author's Response: About the walls, I added an end-note on the concluding chapter about that. Thanks again for your reviews. !hugs!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/12 - 01:42 pm · For: Part V Bonds and Release
Oh my gosh... Sai's not evil! Sheesh, I can breathe now :D
But... I'm still really disappointed he didn't want to come back. The whole goodbye talk was really sweet and I'm glad he knows now just how much he means to them... But it's still really sad that he didn't come back to Konoha.
Though I did laugh at the whole Kazan-sama thing. The way you explained it made sense, that there are greater forces that shinobi will never know. But the fact that he wants to play with animals is really funny in a cute way XD
I'm also really impressed with Sai that he pretty much pushed Sasuke and Sakura together and hinted about the NaruHina coupling. It was really cute. And it made me happy to see that Sasuke and Sai were able to bond in a way because they've both lost their brothers. It's a sad way to bond, but it was still really sweet.
This was a great update, and I'm almost afraid to read the conclusion T_T But I must! Great job on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Kazan is inspired by a trek I made to a volcano's crater 2 summers ago. I'm not into pairings but Kishi practically gave that away in a spoiler page early on so unless he changes his mind, that's pretty much how it'll end up. My stories are strictly canon after all. ^^
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 03:02 pm · For: Part IV Black and White
The first thing I saw was that when Naruto was using Rasengan, you called it sharingan. Hmm....
Other than that... Sai is evil?! This is terrible! What happened to him?! Oh my gosh! I need to know T_T
Great update, Yui! This was excellent, I love the develop in each chapter.
Author's Response: Haha! Rasengan! And that's why I like posting here. Either no one noticed at DA and FF.net or no one bothered to tell me. Thanks!!! Changed it. Will post the next one in a bit.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 01:19 pm · For: Part III Journey and Discovery
Wow, I wonder if Sai really didn't want to be tracked... He's so devious to give away all the crackers.
I really liked how all the Root members are making friends with their comrades though. It's really sweet :3
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 08:34 pm · For: Part II Friendship and Survival
Aww, what good friends :D I'm really glad they're all going after Sai. Though not having Kakashi there somewhat disappoints me... Meh, I guess he wasn't as close to Sai as Tenzou was.
I am really excited to see where this story goes now. It's getting very good, I'm hooked now. There were a couple times when you had tense issues, as I believe I've mentioned to you in your prior stories. But it didn't even happen that often, so you've definitely improved.
This was a great chapter!... Or, I guess, combination of chapters... Anyway, good job! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks again. There's a reason for Kakashi not going (both for story's sake and practicality) but I won't go into it. ^^ I'm afraid I'll be too lazy to edit the tenses now. But thanks for the constructive crit as always! I've upped the next.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 07:50 pm · For: Part I Loneliness and Grief
Omg, Sai's leaving T_T That's so sad that he was pretty much forgotten about. I can understand why he left, it's just... that's a terrible reason to leave for a mission in which you might never return. Having no company stinks.... no wonder he was so sad.... I loved his quote though, how it's more lonely to be alone among company. That was a great line.
This was a great installment. It really set up everything very nicely. Well done, I'm off to read the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks. It's a line from personal experience which I think a lot of people can identify with (even secretly.) I wrote Part I in a sort of melancholic state but hey, the story may be emotional but it won't be EMO, if you know what I mean. LOL!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 03:36 am · For: Prologue
Oh my gosh, this seems like a really sad story already... But it also seems really good, I am looking forward to being able to read more. This was a great prologue. Very short, but it had a lot of content in only 300 words. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thanks! I actually uploaded Part I at the same time as the prologue so it should make up for the shortness. XD