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Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/12 - 03:53 pm · For: Act 4: Good Samaritan
awesome chapter. way to go! kick their butts. must be kind of a blow to their pride being beaten by a dog ;)


Name: Charlie (Signed) · Date: 03/06/12 - 02:36 pm · For: Act 4: Good Samaritan
A Samaritan is a person from Samaria, so it's a kind of comedic title :P I like the horses. Having horses in here made me like the story more, cuz my uncle has horses X3 Great chapter DropDeadT- Your username is really long. Can I call you Zonbi{zombie in Japanese lol}?

Author's Response: Yes, yes you can call me Zonbi. That is probably the greatest nick name I have ever received! lol


Name: Charlie (Signed) · Date: 03/06/12 - 02:29 pm · For: Act 3: The Interesting Curse
Supposedly? What's she mean by "supposedly"? It looks to me like she doesn't agree with the dude that put the curse on her.

Made an account for easy access to your story; don't you feel special ;P


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 02/06/12 - 09:43 pm · For: Act 3: The Interesting Curse
she was given a collar with her name on it. i wondered how they knew her nae but that is so awesome. great chapter so far. i wonder how she's going to do in the new town she's going to be in


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/06/12 - 09:01 pm · For: Act 3: The Interesting Curse
I really liked how you described her background and past. It was a nice explanatory chapter, and it came out very well. It was a very good way to set up her character. Nice job.


Name: Charlie (Anonymous) · Date: 02/06/12 - 10:06 am · For: Act 2: Woof Woof
ha. she can't get through the door :3 I liked this; it's fun. You have comma splices sometimes, though, but I'm prob the only one bothered lol


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/12 - 06:30 am · For: Act 2: Woof Woof
awwww that was so cute! makes me wonder how tall she really is. seeing the world from a dog's eye view is intreasting. even when she has the mind of a human. great chapter! loving the fuzzy character :p


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/12 - 03:46 am · For: Act 2: Woof Woof
Haha, Makita's interaction with the villagers really is very cute. It's very classic almost, how the dog is well known and liked throughout the village and they feed it and talk to it and such. I like how it plays into this story.

I like how you're showing Makita's life so far. It's very laid back, very cute in some ways. Overall, I find it quite adorable, though I don't know how Makita feels about me saying that XD

Nice job on these updates! They were both very enjoyable!


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/12 - 03:36 am · For: Act 1: Not the Average Hero
OHMYGOSH, I CAN'T BELIEVE I ALMOST MISSED THIS!

I was so excited to see this in the concept book, and then I saw it on your profile page and I flipped. I was so excited to see you were writing.

AND THEN I WENT AND NEARLY MISSED IT! T_T

Ah, anyway, this was a really good first chapter. The whole through, I really enjoyed it. Makita really is an interesting character, and I can't wait to find out more about her.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/05/12 - 08:06 pm · For: Act 2: Woof Woof
I'm just curious - are you going to explain why Makita is a dog? If not, those who haven't read Forgotten Concepts may be confused. Then again, I'm sure it'll be explained. I just felt the need to ask.

I think I forgot to mention in my last review, but I love how being a dog changes Makita's thoughts so they aren't normal thoughts. I also find the dilemmas she faces because of being a canine hilarious. It's probably cruel to find it funny, but I do =P.

This was a good chapter. You're slowly but surely giving us a sense of who Makita is. I mean, just reading a bio can't give you the same knowledge of an oc that the actual story can. And Makita is one oc I am enjoying getting to know.

So, I just want to know - is there a reason the cat repeats everything? I find it hilarious that it was a cat she ended up saving.

This was a great, amazing chapter, DDTD. I absolutely loved it!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/05/12 - 07:38 pm · For: Act 1: Not the Average Hero
I won't lie - I squealed when I saw you had made this story. I ciuldnt wait for either this one or the one about Joji, and then this one magically appears. Yeah!

I know I've says it before, but I'm saying it again - I love how you have a different name for each chapter (in this case, Act). It's just so very creative. For some reason my mind just had a weird moment where I imagined you using Swim for Joji's story =P.

This is most definitely an interesting start. It's very different when looking through Makita's PoV since she is, well, a dog. It has me very excited to continue reading. Makita herself seems like an intriguing character. The fact I read her bio in Forgotten Comcepts just makes her more interesting to me.

This was a great start to a story I know will be mind-blowing. How? Well, it's written by you, duh ;). I'm glad that there's another chapter to read, because I'm most definitely hungry for more.

Oh, and great banner, DDTD. Like always, your picture is amazing. You draw animals just as well as you draw humans. And the rain just makes it more amazing!


Name: lilmissmindy (Signed) · Date: 31/05/12 - 05:58 pm · For: Act 2: Woof Woof
This is pretty good!! I don't understand it all just yet, but it has the potential to become a great story!!


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 31/05/12 - 02:34 pm · For: Act 1: Not the Average Hero
woah. at first i was confused. but this is a really great begining to this series


Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 31/05/12 - 02:26 pm · For: Act 1: Not the Average Hero
Sorry to hear about your job, but this is a very interesting perspective. I've never seen a story quite like, mainly since the main character doesn't have dialogue, but I like it and I want to see where you take it.


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