Reviews For Impervious
Name: Shizake uchiha (Anonymous) · Date: 30/06/12 - 04:29 pm · For: Adrenaline
Damn those were some sick ass battles. Sucks that yuushin couldnt stop orochimaru but I know you probably have something in store for that situation. Also glad to see Tsuma finished her challenge nicely. Keep up the good work bro. I dunno when sasaui will have retribution up but it should be soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked them man, and hope you;re enjoying Florida. I'll be back with some Lost Heritage before I pack more chapters into this story, so keep on reading man!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 07:10 am · For: Will Power
Huh. Interesting introduction. Looks like Yushin met Zakaru when he was about to snap. Poor boy had no clue what he was up against. Then again, neither did the former Kage XD. That was a really great way to introduce him, Hazard-San, and I'm excited to see what will happen after the upcoming fight. Sheesh, I really want to read more!
Well, finally caught up. Now I cab get to Retribution!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 06:59 am · For: True Virtue
Yeah! Yushin is possibly going to kill the snake freak! Die snake, die!!!
Anyway, I'm really glad Kimimaro is cured. It surprised me when I saw Yushin was pretty much to blame for it, but it's all even now.
I can't wait for Tsuma's battle. And, well....... Does Kiba know how many guys she's in love with?
Author's Response: Yes, it is snake season finally! Kimimaro has always been a favorite character of mine so I decided to bring him in, and I just made a small twist to his disease. Tsuma is well...loose. lol, thanks for reading!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 06:45 am · For: Breaking The Spell
Sweet! That was a really great battle, Hazard-san! Totally epic in every way! I loved it. It was also nice to see Yushin isn't all powerful, just really old ;). And wow. Scary summon, though very cool!
*gasp* Kimimaro may be cured? Oh my gosh! That is so amazing. He will live!!
Author's Response: I tried to make it a great battle, and looks like I did alright. and yes Kimimaro has a chance to live!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 06:32 am · For: Contender
Haha. Sweet. I'm a big fan of Kimimaro, so I'm very excited to see this fight. I'm sure it'll be an amazing one.
I feel kinda bad for Sasuke. He had no clue what he was running into. But he did do rather nicely considering who he was up against.
Great chapter. Now I'm off to read more.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 06:21 am · For: Emergence
Hm..... I'd have to think Kabuto. It just makes sense to me that it would be him, but hey. I may be wrong.
Anyway, this was a great chapter and very interesting to read. I liked the fight between Sasuke and Tsuma. I'm glad it came out as a tie. Don't know why, I just am. And so Sasuke is being taught to kick Naruto's butt...... I bet Yushin has no clue it would be best if Sasuke couldn't do that (unless Sasuke doesn't go to Orochimaru without the curse mark).
Anyway, great chapter. Off to read more!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 04:32 am · For: New and Old Allies
0o0. Orochimaru is after Voldemort?! Did he steal Manda from him?
Haha. Sorry - I couldn't resist when you wrote you know who.
Anyway, this was an interesting chapter. Sasuke is curse mark free and Yushin's trainee. This ought to be fun. And I really liked Qwasuke. He's definitely an interesting addition to this story.
Author's Response: Haha, not voldemort. But, yeah he cured Sasuke of the curse mark, and damn you read fast -_-
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 09:04 pm · For: Wily
Haha. The match ups were really random. I was kinda sad to see Naruto had to fight Hinata, though it was Kankuro who did real damage, so...... Anyway, totally epic fight with Gaara, Lee, Neji, and Sasuke. It was awesome. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Great that you loved the fights! I tried to make them somewhat interesting, and I guess it worked. Keep on reading!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 08:56 pm · For: Revealing Your Worth
Ooh. Interestingly different. I think 2 vs 2 is a very intriguing twist that can have a huge affect on everything that happens, but that's not your main focus, so eh.
And he woke up with Kiba in his bed............ No comment.
Author's Response: Yep I decided to mix up the battles for fun, and lol w/ Kiba.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 08:41 pm · For: Settling In
Bad Tsuma. You should not drink *insert scolding face*. Though Silverwolf is right about it being a funny thought.
I loved seeing Garra again and so happy. It's so sweet to read and I have to wonder how Yushin will affect everything.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 08:16 pm · For: Testament
Haha. This was an awesome chapter, one I really enjoyed reading. Tsuma's trick was dirty, but it was clever. And then she cried. It would be a difficult thing to do.
Great chapter. I really enjoyed it and found it very fun. I'm really liking Tsuma.
Author's Response: Glad you're liking her!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 07:28 pm · For: Forgotten
Haha. This sounds like an awesome idea and makes me really want to see what will happen when Tsuma fights the deities. The game sounds really cool. I'd love to do something like that.
Great job, Hazard. I really enjoyed this chapter and am off to read more.
Author's Response: I got the idea from a game I palyed awhile back, and I just decided to expand upon one concept of it, and I turned it into something completely different. It's sure to mix things quite up. Keep reading, and I just introduced you're OC in the latest chapter!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 06:54 pm · For: Surprise and Suspicion
I can relate to Tsuma and hating failing. I feel the same when I fight my older brother. And I'm really starting to like her for some reason. I don't know why, I just do.
Agh, good ol' Team Gai. Always has to appear at the worst of times. I love it >=-D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 06:28 pm · For: Roots and Vines
Haha. It's so fun reading through Tsuma's hot headedness and temper. So amusing! And I really find reading the different reactions from all the people hilarious.
Woah! He taught Kakazu! That is so interesting and unexpected. I have to wonder if they'll ever meet again. And I feel really sad reading about his son. Maybe Tsuma or Zakaru can help cheer him up XD!
Ooh. A proctor, huh? Well, this ought to be interesting. Great chapter, Hazard! I'm off to read more!
Author's Response: Glad you're liking this story! Tsuma and Yushin are quite the ying and yang in a sense, so there banter is a little comical. Lots of things about Yushin's past will be revealed through the story, and some may be a bit shocking.
Author's Response: Glad you're liking this story! Tsuma and Yushin are quite the ying and yang in a sense, so there banter is a little comical. Lots of things about Yushin's past will be revealed through the story, and some may be a bit shocking.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 09:53 am · For: Will Power
Ha is Sasaui's OC's kekkai genkai the one with the "fighting spirit" after they've been knocked out? I totally recognize it.
Great chapter, Yuushin seems a bit heartless to hit a kid but you do what you gotta do. Nice chapter
Author's Response: You nailed it, and it is for sure. As old and grumpy as Yushin is he doesn't like to bullshit, so he can come off cold to certain people.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/12 - 08:33 am · For: Will Power
Whoa, Zakaru has joined the bunch. Cool :D That boy really knows how to keep going in a fight. That battle was pretty intense and epic for a civilian versus a former Kage.
And this chapter was a nice setup for the upcoming fights, I'm very excited to see them. Can't wait for more, keep up the good work, Hazard-san!
Author's Response: Well I felt like giving him a little bit more bite than the average person, so you got a little skirmish (:, and now Yushin will face the Sound 4 plus Kabuto while Tsuma dukes it out with another god!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/12 - 11:43 am · For: True Virtue
Wow, such an eventful chapter. I'm glad Kimimaro is healed. I think he deserves it... Even if Yushin helped give him the illness in a way -_-
Anyway, I'm looking forward to Tsuma's upcoming fight! That'll definitely be fun to watch.
Keep up the good work with your stories, Hazard-san!
Author's Response: Yep, Kimimaro is on his way to being cured of Oro, but there may still be a few bumps in the road to come. You'll learn more about Yushin's past as the story goes along, and that he wasn't always the nicest person. The fight will be awesome with Tsuma, and should be in a chapter or two!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/12 - 11:39 am · For: Pulling Strings
Haha. It sounds like Yushin is gonna have a load of fun from now on. I can't wait to see how him being involved will change anything if they do go to Konoha and how different the stuff will be with Gaara having a seal.
Author's Response: O he'll be a busy man in the future, that's for sure. Keep on reading!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/12 - 11:27 am · For: Wrong Place, Wrong Time
I really enjoyed this chapter. The fight between Yushin and Team Gai was very interesting and funny at the same time. I can't wait to see where Yushin's going next. I'm sure it'll be a lot of fun to read about!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/12 - 09:50 am · For: True Virtue
Lol you spelled Qwakuse's name wrong.
Anyways nice chapter. Glad to see Kimimaro is going to betray Orochimaru. I hope Yuushin can kill Oro though. Can't wait to see Tsuma battle the godess. Nice update!
Author's Response: I fixed his name, do not worry! But yeah, a big showdown will be going down real soon!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/12 - 07:56 am · For: A Helping Hand
First off, I'll try to get my character to you layer today. Probably tonight at latest.
Anyway, this was an interesting chapter. That butthole really got his butt kicked, and he most definitely deserved it XD.
I'm glad to see Yushin and Gaara have bonded. It's actually very cute. I love it, and I'm curious on whether or not Gaara will have to use that scroll. Great chapter, Hazard. It was very enjoyable.
Author's Response: Sounds good! Glad you kicked the butt kicking :D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 07:02 pm · For: Bloody Wishes
Sorry, but probably last read of the day.
Great chapter. It really Shocked me how he interacted with Gaara, and then I was happy because he helped him. Now he feels some peace. Though I think he'd still be bitter because of his past and all. Overall, great work.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 06:45 pm · For: History Counts for Something
Hm.... Is it too late to submit an oc? Because I think it sounds like fun!
Anyway, this was a great chapter. I enjoyed reading the Hokage's baffledness. So funny. And I can't wait to see what will happen in Suna. I'm sure it'll be interesting. And I love the fact he was helping Naruto. So nice of you, Yushin!
Author's Response: You can still submit an OC for sure, just give me all the back ground info and what not, as well to how they know each other, for good or bad.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 06:35 pm · For: Just Another Day
Yushin seems more interesting the more I read about him. I was slightly surprised when he used Minato's move. I don't know why, I just was. And an attack by the Anbu, eh? That was a nice addition. Good ol' Hiruzen, always so smart. And now the Hokage and former Kage shall talk XD.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/12 - 06:23 pm · For: Prologue
Originally I was just going to skim through this to learn about Yushin for what you talked to Shizake about. It felt wrong not to review, so I am. They may be shorter than my usual ones. I'm not sure.
Yushin seems like an interesting character. He also has an intriguing kekkei genkai. I'm excited to see how this turns out. Now I must read more!
Author's Response: Glad you started to read this! The start is mostly explanatory, but it's better!