Reviews For Impervious
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/08/12 - 10:28 am · For: School of Hard Knocks
Haha. 119 to 1 XD.
This was a nice chapter. It was interesting seeing Zakaru's growth in this. I'm waiting for something to go wrong, though, simply because I'm used to things looking good before suddenly going bad. I'm interested to see what will happen once he meets Kakuzu. How about I just sum it up and say I'm excited for more XD.
Author's Response: That's fair enough :D and I'll be posting more very shortly!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 29/07/12 - 09:57 pm · For: School of Hard Knocks
I see the relationship between Zakaru and Yushin is developing nicely. Nice filler chapter, can't wait to see what goes on next.
Author's Response: It will be a bit more exciting, that I can assure you.
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 26/07/12 - 08:53 pm · For: Just Another Day
Why do you always include a space after your first " ?
Author's Response: Just a bad habit I suppose.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/07/12 - 01:47 pm · For: New Venture
Sweet! The start of the Zakaru arc *punches air*.
Anyway, this was an awesome chapter. It was an interesting twist to throw in a new hunt for Kakuzu. I can't wait to see how that turns out. I am also excited for Zakaru's training. It was very creative to have shogi be the first step. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you're excited! His training will be unorthodox since Yushin is trying to cram so much in so little time, and I hope I'm portraying Zakaru correctly. *holds breath* and yes the hunt for Yushin's first apprentice has begun!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/07/12 - 01:36 pm · For: Yushin's Stories: Reckoning
His past is so sad, but it just makes me love Yushin more. He really seemed to mature a lot in that one night. It was sad seeing the two pitted against each other. I wish he could have realized it sooner. And then he killed Kodai. It's terrible, but I was slightly happy about that. Great chapter, Hazard-san! I can't wait to read more of his past.
Author's Response: His past is sad, but ti gets better. Trust me. I think I made it quite realistic for how times were back then. His next story will be a little less sad and more about him helping form the Hidden Mist.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 10:18 pm · For: Prologue
Wow...Yushin's past was awful. It definitely made him into a strong person though. His quest for peace was justified though and he did the right thing. Awesome update man.
Author's Response: Glad you like it man, I'll have more up very soon and I hope I portrayed his actions realistically.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 06:38 am · For: Hydroplaning
They really are improving, and they did quite well against someone like Yushin. Speaking of, this was an awesome and epic battle, Hazard-san. I truly enjoyed it. And Zakaru's arc. I can't wait! I'm sure it will be epic. And then we have another Origin chapter coming up. I can't wait!
Author's Response: Glad you like it, and I thought you'd like to see I have Zakaru's arc coming up. More improvement for all of 'em so far and it's just going to keep getting more interesting from here on out.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/07/12 - 04:53 pm · For: Hydroplaning
Another awesome chapter. The fight was intense, I enjoyed the jutsu's that Yushin spit out. He is certainly powerful. Tsuma and Kimmimaro put up a good fight though I'll give them that. Now all that is left is for Zakaru to spar and for Yushin to leave the village. A whole new journey up ahead and I know I'll enjoy reading it. Nice update!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/07/12 - 07:16 am · For: Wild Card
It's kinda sad to know he's leaving them behind. I'm curious about what he's going to do if he wants to train them again. Would Danzo legally allow him (I say legally because I'm sure Yushin can kick his butt). It's nice, though, because it shows how much he cares for his students.
Great chapter, Hazard-san! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and next up will be fairly centric around your OC so I hope you're excited for what I have planned in store for him.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/12 - 01:44 pm · For: Wild Card
Aww, that's kinda nice how Yushin was looking out for his students. It's sad to hear that he'll be leaving them, but I guess it'll be for the best. And I'm glad to see that Yushin didn't get into trouble with the council. That would have been bad.
Good job on this chapter, Hazard-san! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yes he'll be leaving, but it's only for the next arc essentially. No trouble with the council...this time around. Lots of things can go on behind closed doors. Thanks for the review!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/07/12 - 10:18 am · For: Wild Card
Ah a very insightful chapter. I respect Yushin's decision and it's great that Tsuma and Kimmimaro will be leaf nin. Awesome update man awesome.
Author's Response: That's what I was aiming for, and glad it worked as it sets up the next arc in the story. The next arc will be Zakaru-centric and will wrap up his story line. Thanks for the reviews and I'll have more to come soon.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 - 06:40 am · For: Eradicate The Darkness
Well, now I feel really bad for Zakaru, seeing as I made him, so I'm the reason he had to go through that...... But hey, as much as it sucks, the saying "No pain, no gain" is very true. I'm also very curious as to what he had to go through. Gag! Just leaving that to my imagination is evil! My imagination can scare me......
Ooh. Yushin's in a bit of trouble..... Stay asleep, Zakaru! I'm sure that's not a situation you want to be part of. Anyway, I hope Yushin is alright, and I can't wait to see how everything will turn out for him...... Good luck, Yushin!
Author's Response: Things are going to be taking a very sharp turn soon, so keep up with it! As I think I said before, the bog will be brought back later on one of Yushin's stories chapters, but for now I'll leave it to you're crazy imagination :D And yes the council meeting will be interesting for sure....
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 - 06:26 am · For: Yushin's Stories: Origins
Sheesh. That's not a lot to ask a twelve year old kid or anything. I mean, come on. That's going to be hard on anyone, buy a kid? I understand his reasoning, but still. Poor Yushin.
Anyway, great chapter. Yeah, Zakaru is freed! So cool. And now he's hanging out with Yushin's little group. Haha, they're like a team, with the three kids and their teacher. Oh, and I'm really glad we get to learn some on Yushin. That's always fun.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/07/12 - 02:11 pm · For: Steam & Surprise
It's pretty bad when it doesn't even surprise me to see that old pervert being the one peeping on Tsuma. Jiraiya's just terrible like that. He so deserved the shocking.
I was glad to see that Tsuma is okay, and she got some nice treats for it. I'm actually quite excited to see this crocodile summon in action. Great job, Hazard-san!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/07/12 - 01:50 pm · For: Signal Flare
Yeah, Shizake is right, it's Zakaru, but hey - everyone makes mistakes. Anyway, I saw you've fixed it in layer chapters.
I've always hated Hiruzen's death. It's just so sad T_T. But it is necessary. I wish there was some way around it, but......
AND OROCHIMARU IS GONE!!!!!! Yeah! Stay dead and gone, you stupid snake creep. Sorry, very strong Orophob here.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/07/12 - 01:36 pm · For: Adrenaline
Sweet. Two epic battles in the same chapter XD. So cool. I really enjoy seeing the different abilities of the entities and how Tsuma defeats them. It's quite interesting. And Kabuto got away. Darn. I wonder how all the things Yushin's doing is going to affect the original plot. Hm....
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it with all the battles and what not, and yes it will be deviating more from the original canon eventually, but still on the same tracks. It's hard to explain.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/07/12 - 09:50 am · For: Eradicate The Darkness
This was an interesting chapter. I wonder what sort of hell Zakaru went through...I wonder if the council will figure out if he's the former Mizukage also...So many questions. Nice chapter!
Author's Response: Zakaru did in fact go through hell, and you'll learn more about that place later on in the story. The council meeting will be interesting for sure, and thanks for reading man!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/12 - 06:22 am · For: Eradicate The Darkness
Jeez, I thought you were going to kill Zakaru. I was so worried, I thought he wasn't coming back. But he accomplished his task, which is awesome for him! Well...maybe not right now... I wonder what happened to him while he was in there.
Uh oh, Yushin is in trouble... I hope things with the council don't go too badly for him...
Good work on this chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: I just wanted it to be suspenseful with Zakaru, and I will give more details about that place eventually in one of Yushin's stories later on. Yes, Yushin is in a bit of a mess, and only time will tell how he gets out of it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/12 - 09:34 pm · For: Yushin's Stories: Origins
Wow, that's actually almost a sad flashback. I feel bad for Yushin, that he had to go through that. He lost his childhood so young so he could work for Kodai...
Oh, before I forget, the Japanese word for brother would be Nii-san. Nee-san actully means sister.
Anyway, this was an interesting chapter. I really liked this first entry of Yushin's stories. I am looking forward to more, keep up the awesome work.
Author's Response: Thanks, I fixed the mistake. Yes, he does have a bit of a sad and twisted past, but it only gets more interesting from here on!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/07/12 - 08:28 pm · For: Yushin's Stories: Origins
Damn your on an updating spree. I'm really liking this story more and more honestly! Yushin has such an interesting past and now he is starting to gather a group with him. It's just a new thing everyday with him. Keep up the awesome work man I really can't wait for more
Author's Response: Eh, I had some extra time so I decided to pump out another chapter. Glad your liking his past, and it'll get more interesting for sure!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/07/12 - 10:48 am · For: Steam & Surprise
Ha. The minute you said they noticed someone peeping I knew it was Jiraiya. Sweet update it's nice to see Tsuma progress nicely. Oh and nice banner btw.
Author's Response: Yep, a bit canon but predictable for someone like Jiraiya. And I did try to get a banner seemly usable for the story, so I hope everyone likes it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/12 - 08:58 am · For: Steam & Surprise
Aww, this was actually a rather cute chapter. Tsuma and Yushin are bonding, and it's really sweet. The crocodile summoning scroll and then the hot springs and giving her his surname... I find it rather adorable that they're so close now XD
And the little episode with Jiraiya was hilarious. He deserved his punishment, so kudos to Yushin and Tsuma for teaching him a lesson :D
Awesome work on this chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more of this story as well as seeing the mini-series of stories. Can't wait!
Author's Response: Thanks, I tried to make it a change of pace from all the fighting with a little bit more warmth. Next chapter will most likely be the start of the mini series with some extra.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/12 - 11:29 am · For: Signal Flare
I was so excited when Gaara summoned Yushin, I had almost forgotten about that summoning scroll. How amazingly useful :D
I'm still sad that Hiruzen died, but I guess there was no way around it. But I am super happy that Orochimaru is no more! That was a great battle, and he died a lovely gruesome death XD
Great work on this chapter! It was an awesome read!
Author's Response: Yep, the summoning scroll makes a return! Hiruzen died due mainly to trying to use the reaper death seal like in the anime, but Orochimaru is now no more, right? Probably. Next chapters will probably be less battle oriented, but fun nonetheless.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/07/12 - 09:15 am · For: Signal Flare
Damn for this part I thought you would've had Yushin save Hiruzen but I guess not since the events following would have to be skewed as well. But hella nice fights and stuff nonetheless. Oh, I think Sasaui's OC's name is Zakaru lolzz. Anyways, keep up the nice work!
Author's Response: Oh shit...I guess I'll have to go back and fix his name -_- but that's fine. Next up is going to be less battle based and more plot development, and the whole gang gets back together! Thanks for reading.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/12 - 05:41 pm · For: Adrenaline
Two freaking awesome fights :D So worth the wait. Both were great. Yushin's fight was amazing, I'm glad he took out the Sound Four, but it sucks that Orochimaru might still kill the Hokage. And at least Tsuma's fight went...sorta well, I guess. As annoying as she is, I hope she doesn't die.
Great work on this chapter, Hazard-san! Excellent job well done!
Author's Response: Glad you liked 'em! Next coming update should be a double or maybe even triple for Lost Heritage so hope you're pumped.