Reviews For Impervious
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/09/12 - 03:02 pm · For: Message in Blood
Poor poor Zakaru *trying to hold back laughter at oc being tortured*.
Wow. We sure are learning a lot about Yushin. So he still wants peace? Well, maybe he can. As long as he does it right and doesn't try the world domination angle. Use Naruto! He seems to be going in the right direction.
This was a really great and interesting chapter, Hazard-san. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Ha, happy you liked the OC *torture*, which was a bit fun to write. Yes a lot is being revealed since it's going to be coming down to it eventually, so its all coming out. Glad you liked it!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/09/12 - 02:48 pm · For: Conqueror
Hm...... I wonder what happened to change his mindset. I'm sure he's not the same. Being in his mind with his first PoV shows that. Unless even then he's somehow hiding something. Many people do things they regret. Is the war something Yushin regrets, or no? Gah! I wanna know!
Epic fight as well, Hazard-san. It was really great. They really didn't know what they were getting into. I feel kinda bad for team 7 because of this.
Great chapter. I really enjoyed it.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/09/12 - 07:02 pm · For: Friends of a Feather
Seems like Yushin is really having fun back in Konoha. Neon yellow. Haha. And I wander who he'd rather deal with - Tsuma or Tsunade? Or even bring stuck with both XD.
Wait, he's taking over Kakashi's test? Now I feel bad for Team 7. At least Sasuke has a heads up. I'm really wanting to see how that turns out.
Great chapter, Hazard. I really enjoyed reading Yushin's suffering.
Author's Response: Yes Yushin is having is fun in Konoha...for now. Anyways epic battle next chapter with team 7 and more to be reveled!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/09/12 - 06:40 pm · For: Fresh Start
Oh, Yushin, it can always get worse. Don't even try to kid yourself. Especially when you tick of Tsunade. Never a good idea. Unless, of course, you're the reader who was laughing at the situation. But seeing as that was me, not a good idea.
My little Zakaru is growing up. It's going to be sad when his arc ends. I wonder what will happen then.
Great and hilarious chapter. I loved the little reunions as well. I can't wait to read how this turns out.
Author's Response: Yes Tsunade can make anyone's life hell, no doubt about it. Glad you like it so far, and a twist is coming soon!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/09/12 - 01:05 pm · For: Message in Blood
More things being revealed about Yushin. It's all so interesting but a bit frightening at the same time. Nice chapter man.
Author's Response: Yes there is since it's coming down to the few final arcs, and the big finale soon enough. Thanks for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/12 - 01:42 pm · For: Message in Blood
Oh my... Yushin just seems so much more devious now o_O That's so freaky! He wants peace and unity but you know what... so did Pein and Madara T_T
Wow, this story just gets more and more interesting. All these little insights about Yushin have really made a great twist for this story. Nice work, Hazard-san!
Author's Response: Really makes you think about all his past actions, doesn't it? And I'm glad you made the connection to Pein and Madara, because in some ways he is quite similar. I'll be having more coming soon and another Yushin's Past chapter in the works as well. Thanks for the review!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/08/12 - 06:28 pm · For: Conqueror
Dood! That was an epic twist. I knew there was more to Yushin than meets the eye. Awesome chapter man! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! More stuff coming soon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/12 - 05:00 pm · For: Conqueror
Holy... crap... Yushin is freaking crazy. Crazy as in scary dangerous though I guess O_O I always thought he was a pretty cool guy but after hearing about his past more, it almost makes him seem so dangerous that he's an enemy. Not really but someone that would need to be watched really carefully I guess.
Awesome twist here, Hazard-san! Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to seeing where this twist goes.
Author's Response: Glad you liked that little twist at the end, and it's a little peak of what kind of a person he used to be and similar to how he acts today in the story. Things are going to heat up in Konoha in the near future, that's for sure...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/12 - 09:30 pm · For: Friends of a Feather
Ooh, Yushin is going to do the bell test? That's an interesting twist. I'm definitely looking forward to that. I know it'll be a really intense matchup.
Haha, Tsuma was big spoon XD What a strange girl, she would be friends with Anko.
I kinda feel bad for Yushin though, first he's blackmailed by Tsunade into being a jounin and then he doesn't get a bed. Poor guy.
Good job on this funny chapter, Hazard-san! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yes everything has gone down hill for poor Yushin, and he may do something to change that soon... Old people like him don't have much tolerance for this kind of stuff XD. I did have to edit some of this chapter out because I felt their was a bit too much fluff for my tastes in the chapter, and it just felt weird writing it 0_0 But it turned out pretty good anyways. The Bell test is next and I won't dissapoint with the intense battle scene to ensue!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/08/12 - 02:20 pm · For: Friends of a Feather
Ah blackmail is a bitch isn't it.
Haha he kept calling her a hooker, hell I'd get annoyed with her too.
So Yushin is going to be a placeholder hm? and now I suppose Sasuke hasn't gone rogue which will make things even more interesting.
Nice chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the input! Yeah Yushin is very annoyed with this blackmail, and he doesn't have a lot of patience... Yes Yushin will be a sub for many genin teams and other odd jobs as part of being kept tabs on and a little bit of his punishment. Glad you liked!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/08/12 - 05:53 pm · For: Fresh Start
Alright sorry I didn't get around to this earlier.
Everything was pretty good. I had a feeling he would piss off Tsunade in the first place and he did haha. The reunion was funny too. A mission already huh? Payback is a bitch literally. Nice chapter!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/08/12 - 11:06 am · For: Fresh Start
:3 Tsuma and Yushin's reunion was very cute...mostly hilarious though XD
Tsunade and Yushin's fight was also pretty epic but mostly funny because now Yushin has to pay the consequences :D
Great update, Hazard-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 08:56 pm · For: Yushin's Stories: The Crusade
Wow... It's so weird not having a Next button. I've officially caught up now O_O Sweet~
Yeah, I agree with Zakaru, it's not cool for Yushin to leave that story at a cliffhanger T_T Then he went and spoiled it...so unfair...
Awesome job with this chapter, Hazard-san! And hopefully I will actually continue to stay up to date.
Author's Response: Glad you caught up and have enjoyed the story! You're my 100th reviewer! Congrats! Sorry about the spoiler, Yushin was cranky :/ ha, so I'll be posting the next chapter vvery shortly! Thanks for reading thus far!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 08:35 pm · For: Student and Master Reunite
Such an epic battle! I loved it! You did a great job writing out this fight scene! I'm really upset that Yushin wasn't able to kill Kakuzu but I guess that's up to Naruto and the others :/
Anyway, excellent work on this chapter! I really enjoyed it!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 07:51 pm · For: The Vigilante
Omg... A fight between three basically immortal people... I can't even review, I gotta read! Good job in this buildup to the fight, I'll be back soon after I read the next one!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 07:19 pm · For: School of Hard Knocks
:D Zakaru won at shogi! Good for him! I'm glad that things seem to be going better for Yushin and Zakaru. So far they seem to be getting along. That's good to see.
Nice chapter! I'm off to read more!
Author's Response: Yep, everything is going quite smoothly for them for now, but it may not be like that for long....Thanks for the reviews!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 07:02 pm · For: New Venture
O_O Kakuzu?! His old apprentice is Kakuzu?! And he's going after him?! Oh my, this just surprised the crap out of me! I am really eager to see how this turns out now. Thankfully I have all those other chapters to read :D
Author's Response: Yes, Kakuzu is his old apprentice, I believe I had a little foreshadowing about it in some of the earlier chapters to hint the readers of what may to be coming in like chapter 8 or something. Keep on reading, and I'll keep posting more!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 06:46 pm · For: Yushin's Stories: Reckoning
T_T That story was really sad. He killed three people in one fight, and they were relatives. It's kinda sad that that's how Yushin gained power.
Even if it was sad, it was still a well told story. Great work!
Author's Response: Indeed it's sad, but it's shaped who Yushin is in the regular time line. keep on reading.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 06:23 pm · For: Hydroplaning
.... Well then.... I feel terribly guilty for not getting to this sooner. I've fallen like...a month behind. I'm sorry, Hazard-san; I didn't abandon this story, I just disappeared and then fell behind. Then there were so many updates to catch up on, it was intimidating T_T
Anyway, this was an epic chapter with the amazing fight. I really liked this. Good work. Now I have...about 6 more chapters to catch up on...wow...
Author's Response: I figured you'd be back to this story eventually. Sorry if the updates cared you 0_0 but I do hope you like what I've put in during the meantime!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 06:47 am · For: Yushin's Stories: The Crusade
I don't know why, but I found this look at his past especially interesting. I like the way you also incorporated a bit on the rest of the world, like how you mentioned the Fire Country and Senju and Uchiha clan. I laughed near the end because of Yushin's grumpiness. So funny. And now Zakaru starts physical training. Oh the fun.
Author's Response: In the next coming flashback stories, you'll be seeing a lot more world incorporation, and *spoiler* the start of the first great shinobi war *end spoiler* Yes, Zakaru will be starting his training under Yushin finally and will be after the band of miscreants that killed his village very shortly, thanks for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 - 06:18 am · For: Student and Master Reunite
Wow. Now that was one heck of a fight. He even brought in a god. I wander if he knows Jashin. Hm..... Haha, anyway, this was a really cool fight. I'm looking forward to seeing more epic battles because I'm sure you have more in store.
Great chapter, Hazard-san, and sorry it took me a while to read.
Author's Response: I tried to make it epic as much as I could, and it isn't the end of Kakuzu and Yushin for sure.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/08/12 - 05:01 pm · For: The Vigilante
Sorry it took me so long to get to this. My Internet was bugging most of this week and my mom kept on taking the iPod to work.
Anyway, this is an epic start to what is sure to be an epic fight. Especially since its against two hard and one impossible to kill. I'm very eager to see where this fight goes.
Author's Response: Glad to see your internet problems have been solved, for the most part that is. I do hope you enjoy the fight!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/08/12 - 01:10 pm · For: Yushin's Stories: The Crusade
So is his quest for peace similar to that of Akatsuki's? I mean he's conquering other clans. But I like the way he's going about it. Especially the outcome of it all with creating a country and what not. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, I suppose you could say it's similar to the akatsuki's way, but Yushin had a different way of thinking back in these times and violence was the norm back in the olden times. Thanks for the reviews man! The next story of Yushin's past will explain his mistakes that he made and eventually the first great shinobi war...
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 07/08/12 - 10:13 am · For: Student and Master Reunite
Sorry I didn't review earlier. But wow epic epic battle. Kakuzu and Hidan put up a good fight though. I was disappointed to see more Akatsuki show up but I figured that would happen. That just means the final confrontation with Kakuzu will be even more fuckin epic. Nice chapter
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/08/12 - 10:34 am · For: The Vigilante
Whoa...An epic battle between 3 immortals. Wow this is going to be an awesome fight. Hope you update soon man
Author's Response: I will for sure, I'm really excited to write as well!