Reviews For Impervious
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/06/12 - 05:55 pm · For: Prologue
That was a pretty epic battle I must say.
I never expected Yuushin to know a summoning of that sort but god damn was it awesome.
Hmm I like how you are straying from the plot and going for something completely different though.
Keep up the nice work can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks, I tried to mix it up, but I think I did put his summon as the Hydra in the prologue, but you probably forgot about that :P But more is to come soon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/12 - 05:33 pm · For: Breaking The Spell
Now that was a fight worth waiting for :D I loved the Hydra and the epicness of the whole thing. It went so well. And I'm really excited that Yushin knows what Kimimaro's illness is. I've never been able to hate him because of his condition, so I really hope he is able to be cured.
Great work on this, Hazard-san! I really enjoyed this chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, Kimimaro will play a role in the future, perhaps. Just a setup for what's to come next.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 08:07 am · For: Contender
Finally an update.
Nice. Sasuke didn't stand a chance, though i'm surprised he managed to use that genjutsu on Yuushin.
Ha I knew it was Kabuto, epic fight coming up.
Nice chapter! Keep em coming!
Author's Response: Well it is a sharingan, nonetheless. Anyways epic fight will be coming soon, thanks for the support!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 03:42 am · For: Contender
O.O Ohmygosh, epic fight is about to ensue... I'm so excited!
This was a really good chapter. Sasuke's damaged ego was a good wake up call to him. But I also almost feel bad for him that he was so freaked out by the Hidden Mist jutsu. Poor Sasuke.
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next update! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: It's about to get crazy with the fighting as well as the scheme of things, and it will be fairly non-canon from this point onward. More to come, and thanks!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/06/12 - 08:04 am · For: Prologue
Sweet. That was some intense training. I'm excited to see how Sasuke fairs up with Yuushin. Nice chapter
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/12 - 03:28 am · For: Emergence
Kabuto?! Was it Kabuto?! I think it was Kabuto :P
You did quite well with the whole training sequence. I really liked it. Sasuke was his usual brooding self but even he has to be impressed with Yushin.
Now that things are getting more intense in Konoha, I wonder how it will all turn out with Yushin there. There are so many factors that can be changed! I want to know what happens...
Nice job on this, Hazard-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I won't tell you who it is! it's a secret, but you'll know soon enough. More is to come soon, and it will definitely be different than canon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/12 - 11:25 pm · For: New and Old Allies
Wow! He extracted the seal! That's amazing! And now he's going to train Sasuke! That's cool; I thought it was adorable how Sasuke asked to be trained XD Maybe a little OOC in tea of personality, but I can still see why he'd ask. I hope he gets that spot.
Qwasuke seems really nice, I hope we see more of him.
Awesome work on this chapter, Hazard-san! It was great!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/05/12 - 10:43 pm · For: New and Old Allies
Haha. Nice seeing Qwakuse in there. I hope him and Yuushin work together in the future. Nice update!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/05/12 - 02:00 pm · For: Prologue
Ah so that's how the chuunin exams are going to play out. Wonder what Yuushin's gonna do with Sasuke. Nice update!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/12 - 07:47 pm · For: Wily
I approve of the victors :D I personally want to know how you came up with the matches, did you select them all at random? Just to see it all mixed and matched was entertaining in itself, especially since some of them actually lost/win when they didn't in the original.
I liked it though, and I look forward to seeing how things go from here. Nice job on this chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the victors and the progression. I came up with the matches on the spot randomly, cause that's how I roll :D and now I can get up some much better chapters that aren't so predictable.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/05/12 - 08:07 pm · For: Revealing Your Worth
That's such a crazy twist to have 2v2 battles! I like it! It's so different and strange, but I like it! The first match was just pathetically sad, haha. But I'm really looking forward to this next one! Can't wait!
Oh, and I cracked up when I found out the guy was Kiba. I love him so much XD
Anyway, keep up the awesome work, Hazard-san!
Author's Response: Glad you like my little twist, and I'm quite excited to write up the battle. Thanks for the review!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/05/12 - 08:03 pm · For: Revealing Your Worth
Ah. What a twist on the chuunin exams...Cant wait to see. Nice job
Author's Response: Yeah, it's about to get real serious! Pretty epic battle coming up next with a bunch of strong characters.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 10/05/12 - 08:46 am · For: Settling In
I wonder how Yuushin will react to Gaara's fight...With Lee and with Sasuke. It'll be interesting...unless that seal comes into effect. Good chapter anyways. Lol Tsuma getting drunk...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/12 - 08:08 pm · For: Settling In
I can't stop laughing at the idea of Tsuma drunk. That's gotta be hilarious in itself XD
This was a filler-ish chapter but I don't really care. It was still really good and made me laugh. I'm excited to see how Yushin enjoys proctoring the exams. That'll be fun.
Good job, Hazard-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/12 - 12:45 pm · For: Testament
Aww, I felt really bad for her when she cried about seeing her dead self... Even if it is a god, it's still really frightening to do something like that.
Hmm... I wonder what Tsuma was doing that she came home so happy... Interesting...
Awesome fight scene! Loved the intense epicness. This was a great chapter. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Loads of stuff in development for the story, and much more to be revealed! Glad you liked the update, and the next one will be probably just as intense!
Author's Response: Loads of stuff in development for the story, and much more to be revealed! Glad you liked the update, and the next one will be probably just as intense!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/12 - 12:27 pm · For: Forgotten
Wow, that's really interesting... It makes me really eager to see how Tsuma does against these gods... It sounds freaking impossible, I can't believe Yushin is making her do this after only one day of training with her!
Ooh, there's another update, I get to go read more now :D Sweet!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/05/12 - 08:01 am · For: Forgotten
So this is what bastion is like hmm? It sounds really cool actually, I might check it out on xbl. Nice chapter!
Author's Response: Kinda sorta. I'm using the idols, but in a completely different idea than the actual game. I figured that this would be something fresh and unique.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/12 - 08:42 pm · For: Surprise and Suspicion
I personally really liked the part when Kakashi was interrogating Yushin. I don't know why though...
Haha, Gai and Lee are back. That figures... Yushin must have terrible luck.
Awesome chapter, Hazard-san! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: He, yeah nobody can be completely perfect. Glad you liked it and I'll be updating very soon!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/05/12 - 01:32 pm · For: Surprise and Suspicion
Nice chapter. Interested to see Tsuma's lightning style techniques and more of Yushin's own.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 08:06 pm · For: Roots and Vines
Tsuma is so dramatic about everything. It's kinda funny compared to Yushin's calm nature. I find it rather amusing :P
Oh, so, Yushin is going to be a proctor? I wonder for which test... And will he be clerking the same type of test as the originals created? I'm curious now.
Awesome job with this, Hazard-san! I really hope you're able to fix your computer soon :) Keep up the good work with your writing.
Author's Response: It's going to be different, that's for sure :D and glad you like the character banter.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 30/04/12 - 07:40 pm · For: Roots and Vines
Great chapter. I can't believe it's been this long since he first met Naruto. His apprentice is...interesting. I can't wait to see his training methods. Damn he trained Kakuzu? It's funny because Kakuzu is immortal too. Great chapter, can't wait to see how he handles the chuunin exams.
Author's Response: I know it seems intracate,and yes he did train Kakuzu when he was a boy roughly 75 years ago from the current time in the story. Chunin exams are next and it'll one hell of an event.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/04/12 - 08:51 am · For: Pulling Strings
So he picked up his new apprentice huh? To be honest she annoys the shit out of me, but that just makes for a more interesting story. Keep up the great work.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/12 - 10:29 pm · For: Pulling Strings
Wow. That's so surprising that he'd ask a wild girl to go with him. He seems so patient and not likely to want to travel with someone like her. But I guess his patience built his tolerance a little :P
Nice development in this chapter. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: He's a strange cat, that's for sure. Next chapter should explain a bit more in his reasoning. Thanks for reading!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/04/12 - 05:43 pm · For: Wrong Place, Wrong Time
Awesomeness! I loved the fight scene, I loved both, actually. Yushin's abilities always impress me, and his personality is actually very nice yet challenging in a way. He's kind to people and doesn't want unnecessary bloodshed, but he isn't soft enough to go too easy on people either. I don't know, I just like his character. Keep up the good work on this story! And I hope your computer problems are fixed soon!
Author's Response: Thank You! My computer should be back to normal soon, I just have a few more kinks so sort out. Glad you like the character because things will be getting much more interesting in the next few chapters!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/04/12 - 03:37 pm · For: Wrong Place, Wrong Time
Sweet. As usual Yushin kicks some ass. Nice chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, but I don't think this will always be the trend in the future, and remember he was facing team Gai(before chunin exams), which is a cake walk for someone like him. I'm glad you liked it.