Reviews For War's End: Naruto versus Sasuke
Name: KakashiLuv (Anonymous) · Date: 26/03/12 - 09:27 am · For: Naruto v.s. Sasuke
I loved it! Excellent writing. This has got to be one of the best fight scenes I've ever read. I think you've captured the relationship of these two characters perfectly, and I can't wait for the second part of this tale. I'm interested to see what you do with Naruto!
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 25/03/12 - 07:49 pm · For: Naruto v.s. Sasuke
I really like it. Your writing is extremely good with the flow and word choice you use. I'm a fan of twists, and Naruto's death was quite the clincher. Now, I'm even more excited to see how you play of this event, and how it trickles down. Great start and wanting to see more.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 06:31 pm · For: Naruto v.s. Sasuke
Wait a minute, wait a minute, wait a minute! YOU KILLED NARUTO?!?! Just like that? He's dead? Oh my goodness!
....Well, before I got to that ending strike, I had a whole review planned out already. I was going to compliment you on your creativity and amazingly well-written battle scenes. I've never read one this good before, I really enjoyed this....
Except for the part where Naruto dies. That, I don't like :P
Since this is a two-part story, I'm seriously looking forward to the second chapter. This was amazingly well written, I really loved this entire action-filled fight. Great work!
The only thing I will complain about is that there was no spacing between paragraphs. It was a bit cramped to read.
Other than that, this was awesome! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the response! I actually just went in and fixed the spacing. And just stick around for part 2, I think you'll be pleasantly surprised.