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Reviews For Three Days

Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 26/03/12 - 12:00 am · For: Prologue
well...
The very month i lost my aunt... >_<
when you told me bout your grandpa last year...
You suppressed those feelings too much i think.. =( i felt pain in your tone last time.. but i couldn't imagine how painful it might have been :/
this was... well.. heart-breaking >.>
you really did.. do your job as a writer.. thats all i can say...

Author's Response: I did suppress talking about it too much at the time, especially since this was on the Internet. I don't think I could get all that emotion out by talking in a forum or anything :P Writing it out like a story, that helps me to release it all. I'm glad I could do my job as a writer though, at least I know I'm improving in making my readers feel something. Thanks for the feedback, it is much appreciated.


Name: RowanRose (Anonymous) · Date: 25/03/12 - 09:42 pm · For: The First Day
Amazingly sad, amazingly deep. I don't even want to try to imagine... the sadness.. Otherwise I think I'll cry.
I think that most people would be able to relate more without the honorifics, because we call our grandparents "gramps" and "gramma".... It was very heart wrenching.

Author's Response: I remember this day like it was yesterday, honestly. I don't think the next couple days in the story really live up to this one because almost nothing is as horrible as the initial shock of it all. Please don't cry, Rose-chan, I don't want you to be that sad :( Hmm, I guess it would help more people to relate to the story. But honestly, I used to call my grandpa 'Grandfather', hence the 'Oji-san'. I don't know if it makes too much of a difference to others because I know many people call their relatives different things. But anyway, thank you for the review. I'm sorry it made you so sad.


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/03/12 - 10:18 am · For: Prologue
This keeps getting more and more emotional. Your really good at portraying her type of sadness. This is great I hope you continue to write more and I know you will.

Author's Response: As the whole ordeal continues on, things do get more and more emotional. I'm glad I am able to portray the sadness throughout this story. I'm glad you found this good to read. I will update, hopefully sometime this week. Thanks for the review, Shizake-san!


Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 09:28 pm · For: The First Day
Oh my gosh, Silverwolf...this is tremendously good.

I am so sorry for you loss and it must be awfully hard for you to right this. But you're very strong for doing so. Good job on this. I will definitely continue reading.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad the writing is good :D I appreciate your condolences, thank you for your thoughts. Admittedly, I did cry while writing this chapter, I believe it was the dialogue that did it for me. Thank you for deciding to read this, it means a lot to me. And thanks for the review, I appreciate the feedback.


Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 07:19 pm · For: Prologue
...*grumble*
Yeah... I can relate to it. And the part about 'not getting along' too. Three days before we found out about my uncle's death, I put up with my mom talking trash about him and his girlfriend that she hated. Then comes the part where everyone finds someone to blame it on. His girlfriend. His parents. Himself.
Haha... sorry for ranting.

Author's Response: Wow, not many people admit to having their family not getting along. It sometimes made me feel strange. I'm glad you could relate to it though because everyone needs something they can relate to. And please do not apologize for ranting. Everyone needs to vent, and I'm glad this post allowed you to release some of those upsetting feelings. I'm truly sorry your family had to experience something like this. My condolences go to you.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 04:03 pm · For: Prologue
I can somewhat relate to the part about hearing the news. The only difference for me was it was actually false, incomplete news, but still. One time we thought my grandma had cancer because someone couldn't explain very well what had been found out, and I don't know what hurt more: thinking my grandma was going to be put in the hospital or seeing the pain everyone else felt. I've only seen my father full out cry twice in my life, and that was the worst I've ever seen him. To have it be the complete truth, though..... I don't think anyone can explain that pain, but you sure did leave something that can touch anyone's heart. Things written by experience are so much more meaningful than something created in one's mind. What sucks is when you imagine the pain all too well (even if not even close to the same). I've found myself crying just at the thought of my grandma dying. To tell the truth, I began to want to cry after reading this because it made me imagine just what you had to be going through. I know it will never be enough, but I'm truly sorry for your loss, Silverwolf. Just know that if anytime (even now) you ever need to talk about it, you have all your friends at fanfictionwriters. Pain like that never goes away, but friends and family help it to fade.

Sheesh, I didn't make you feel worse with that, did I? I feel like it had the potential to counterproductive......

Author's Response: I feel bad for both you and your father. For you, because you had to watch your loved ones go through so much pain. For your father, because he must have been a strong man to have a firm will; to see him cry like that must mean he was horribly emotionally distraught. I am sorry you went through something like that. I have never read something that I could relate, before and after my grandfather's death. And that's a painful thing because you don't know whether or not what you're feeling is something others have felt or not. In times like this, you need to know you're not alone.

I guess I was able to get my emotions across somewhat through writing this though, huh? If was almost made you cry, I guess that means my writing was acceptable enough :P

I'm grateful that you care so much, Sasaui. Thank you for your condolences, I appreciate them very much. No, don't worry, you didn't make me feel worse. You made me feel better with your support. Thank you.


Name: Kazumi-chan (Signed) · Date: 22/03/12 - 06:54 am · For: Prologue
I really really love this! I know this pain so well. I went through it with my aunty. Great job sharing these emotions, it helps to express such feelings in writing :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you love this, even if it is depressing. I'm sorry you had to go through this pain yourself, I'm sure your aunt was a lovely lady. My ultimate goal with this was to share the feelings of loss with others. I'm glad you liked this and can relate to it. Thank you for the awesome compliments!


Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 - 07:47 pm · For: Prologue
Beautifully written. Not much to say(as usual) but I'm sorry for your loss, and hope you continue to write great stories such as this tribute.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you for the compliment on the writing. I appreciate your condolences, thank you, Hazard-san. This story will have four or five more chapters. After that, I think I might write other tributes to honor those who deserve one. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate your feedback!


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 - 06:54 pm · For: Prologue
It's really sad, and it hits home, especially since you experienced it yourself. It made me think of my grandparents and how I would feel if they passed one. I'm sorry for your loss wolf-nee.
Well written, especially the first sentence. Have you thought of showing this to your family? They might appreciate it.
Heart wrenching, but awesome. I bet he was an awesome gramps.

Author's Response: I'm glad you could feel the emotion in this. It means I'm doing something right while writing this. I appreciate your condoences, thank you Rose-chan. I did consider showing my family this, thouh I would have to un-Naruto-tify this first :P Anyway, thanks for deciding to read and review this, Rose-chan. I appreciate your feedback!


Name: UzamakiMasumi (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 - 06:38 pm · For: Prologue
Oh, wow. I am bad at feeling sympathy for others, perhaps because I've been lucky enough to not have to experience anything terribly bad like this yet, but even I feel a little sad by this. The emotions are raw, real. No one can deny it. I'm sure it was hard to write, but it turned out beautiful.

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure that was a compliment. I'll take it :D Wow, the fact that you don't normally feel sympathy and yet feel bad after reading this really is a nice comment, in a way. I made you feel something, and that's what I always want out of writing: to make my readers experience some kind of emotion. As someone who experienced such a tragic event, I hope you never have to go through this. This kind of pain and loss is heartbreaking. I appreciate your review, Mimi-chan. It definitely made me feel a bit better about this style of writing, even if it is depressing. Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're awesome!


Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 - 06:21 pm · For: Prologue
Aw, Im sorry this happened to you wolf-chan :( This had a good balance of despair and rage...I sort of did the same thing here that Takako did...Now I'm a bit depressed, not that it's a bad thing. I like reading stories that make you dwell on the wonders of life. Good story. I hope you continue to write this.

Author's Response: Wow, my first review for this story.... :) I'm always happy to get that first review, even if it is for a story like this. I appreciate your condolences, but stuff likes this happens. I've never read something that I could relate to or something that had events similar to what I went through. Perhaps that is just me. I'm sorry to hear that you experienced something like this though. I feel bad for making you so depressed now :( But I'm glad you liked how this was written so far. I do plan to continue this; I wanted to have it done before April 1st, though with my update routine, it probably won't happen. But anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing, Shizake-san! I appreciate it!


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