Reviews For Three Little Words
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/03/12 - 09:21 pm · For: Chapter 11
She was disowned for real... Wow, I feel so bad for her. I mean, she's living with Naruto now, which is awesome. But now she's cut off from her mom and sister, which really has to suck...
But honestly, Hinata and Naruto are still just as cute as ever :D I love them.
Nice chapter, it was very eventful. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Well, it was a long time in coming. Even in the manga and anime it seems to be inevitable. And as for Mom, etc...well, they have their ways of getting over to see how she is doing. I am glad that your enjoyment is continuing with the story. It lets me know I'm doing well. I hope that you will keep enjoying the story as it progresses.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/03/12 - 08:27 pm · For: Chapter 10
Such a steamy chapter here! I only hope you leave warnings when the intense stuff starts ;)
Even throughout the sexual stuff in this, I loved the ending. I think that was really sweet, and it was just a great way to tie up a chapter like this.
Awesome job on this so far! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I hadn't really considered that but I will be sure to put up a warning. I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Figured there should be a bit of build up in their relationship.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/03/12 - 01:26 pm · For: Chapter 10
Great chapter. I really like the relationship between Hinata and Naruto. And it's getting a bit sexy ;). Cant wait for the next chapter keep up the great work!
Author's Response: think you'll enjoy what happens next.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/03/12 - 07:04 pm · For: Chapter 9
Sweet chapter! I really enjoy everything that's going on right now. It'd be cool to see the romance between Temari and Shika be elaborated on. You probably have a plan for that :P Keep up the good work! I am really really really enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Hope your enjoyment continues as the story progresses!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/12 - 06:18 pm · For: Chapter 9
Gah, you're killing my eyes! Your chapters just get longer and longer! It hurts to blink... Ow...
Well, what can I say... You're hitting all of the important points in this story. Not only is there a wonderful romance, but you're including stuff from the plot as well. Chuunin Exams, Jiraiya's will, protective friends... It's just amazing how well you're developing this story.
I loved Temari's confession, it was so sweet to see her vulnerable like that. And Kiba's apology was my favorite part. I love him XD
Great work on this amazing (and abnormally long) update! I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Sorry about the length, but I couldn't see the events happening elsewhere. But I will try to not let them run so long either. Can't promise but will try.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/12 - 12:05 pm · For: Chapter 8
Ooh, things are hearing up between our favorite couple here XD
What? Hiashi was cleared?! Naruto, you are way too nice sometimes...
I really love the emotion you poured into this chapter. This was a great installment that really showed how Naeuto still can't believe that people look up to him, and even Hiashi is starting to like him. Though he doesn't even deserve Naruto giving him the light of day...
Nice job on this update! I loved it! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: yeah thinking its time for it start heating up a bit between them. and he was publicly cleared at the trial. But his Clan had other ideas....*winks* I appreciate the feedback! I think you'll like what happens later. Hiashi gets a bit of comeuppance...
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/03/12 - 03:40 pm · For: Chapter 7
Ah closure...for now. That was a great chapter. I like how everyone is reluctant to talk about sexual things. hehe. Great chapter. Amazing story too, cant wait to see more
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/03/12 - 03:05 pm · For: Chapter 6
Whoa...I am just speechless. That battle was absolutely amazing. People say i'm good at action scenes. But no no no your amazing at them. This was filled with such emotion I was dying to read the next paragraph. This was an amazing chapter. Great job!!
Author's Response: I appreciate that. I really really do. To say I was nervous about this chapter is an understatement. I didn't want to drag it out, yet not make Hiashi a pushover. Plus how to take im out without killing him in a way that no one expected. I hope that you will continue to enjoy the story as it progresses.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/03/12 - 01:08 pm · For: Chapter 7
Yay! Things are going well now... Sort of, I guess. Hiashi being put on trial is a little suspenseful, I'll admit. I want to know the sentence for that headless wretch.
Everything else was so cute though. Hinata and Naruto together, I just love it.
I will say I'm pretty sure Sakura knew Naruto had a crush on her. He was always asking her out on dates and wanting her attention, or at least in the first part of the series.
Other than all that, I really enjoyed this chapter! Great work!
Author's Response: I went that route as it always seemed to me that she never really looked at the emotion behind it. I figure she chalked it up to him just being annoying and trying to keep her from Sasuke. But anyways, I am glad you enjoyed the chapter I hope that you continue to enjoy the story!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/03/12 - 03:49 am · For: Chapter 6
Oh my god... Oh my god... Oh my god...
The battle itself was just...amazingly well-written. It was a great display of epicness and a greatly well thought out fight. I commend you on such an incredibly written fight.
But dear god, when Hiashi did that to Naruto, I freaked out and started choking on my cereal. Then when I found out just how bad the attack was, I fell out of my chair. I was so afraid and angry...
I really hope he does make a full recovery. If he doesn't, I'm going to beat everyone else to the punch and destroy Hiashi Hyuuga myself.
Great work on this chapter. The fight was everything I imagined and more... Though I don't know I'd that's a good thing, considering Naruto is in the hospital! Well anyway, keep up the good work with this story.
Author's Response: thank you so much! I was really nervous about this fight scene. I had hoped it didn't come off as stretched out or unrealistic for the series. Yet I didn't want Hiashi to be a pushover either. Can't be considering his position and the experience he has up to this point. Anywho, your reaction and response was more than I had hoped for and I am ever hopeful you'll continue to enjoy the story as it progresses.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/03/12 - 08:08 pm · For: Chapter 5
Whoa this chapter was full of intensity! The Kyuubi part was my favorite! I like the fox even if he is just pure evil. Sometimes I forget just how powerful he is. Awesome chapter I really enjoyed it! I cant wait to see the fight between Naruto and Hiashi. It's all so epic! Great work!
Author's Response: I glad you are enjoying the story thus far. There will more Kyuubi moments as the story progresses.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/12 - 01:13 pm · For: Chapter 5
Oh wow! I seriously thought there was going to be a fight between Naruto and Kyuubi. Thank goodness there wasn't though, it would've ended badly.
The preparations for this upcoming fight between Hiashi and Naruto is leaving me in so much suspense, I can't take it! Whatever Naruto is planning, it sounds brilliant and I don't even know what it is! I need to know!
Great work on this chapter! I'm loving this story!
Author's Response: I am thrilled that you are enjoying the story so much! I had originally planned for that chapter to be in two parts. But it felt better as a single solid chapter. I'm glad my instincts were right. I think you'll be in for a cool surprise when the fight comes around.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/03/12 - 07:13 pm · For: Chapter 4
That was an epic moments with Naruto busting in. I cant wait to see the fight against Hiashi it to will be epic! Great chapter, keep up the good work
Author's Response: thank you! I really appreciate the review! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/12 - 01:11 pm · For: Chapter 4
The italic mistake was toward the end, when Sai is speaking, starting with "Me neither." The mistake is something like Mi> instead of the
Author's Response: thank you so much. I missed it when I was re-reading!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/03/12 - 11:11 am · For: Chapter 4
Hmm... I just noticed you spell Neji's name wrong. You write it as 'Neiji' when it is 'Neji'. There was also a point where you didn't get the italics just right because you didn't use the < symbol.
Other than that, I loved this chapter! I seriously just love this story more and more. Great job, I love how you have written this so far! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: could you tell me where I goofed with the italics? that way, I can get it fixed asap! I'll get Neji's name fixed as well tonight!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 10:17 am · For: Chapter 3
OO I really like this story. It may be weird but Hinata is one of my favorite characters. I cant wait to see how Naruto battles it out for Hinata. Itll be epicccccccc
Author's Response: I truly appreciate your review and response! I am happy you are enjoying the story thus far! I think what I have ready is gonna be a bit of a shocker.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/12 - 03:53 am · For: Chapter 3
EEEEPPPP! This is so epic! I'm loving where this is going. This chapter played out so well, you really did a great job on this one. You still need to edit a bit more; there were some capitalization and punctuation issues. But everything else was awesome! Good job!
Author's Response: I'm thinking the capitals that I'm using for a stronger emphasis is what your talking about. Maybe I should switch those over to italics instead like I did in some spots?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/03/12 - 07:02 pm · For: Chapter 2
There was another HTML malfunction, somewhere near the beginning in this chapter.
But anyway, this chapter was so cute. This is really getting me so interested just because this story is so adorable. Things may be rushing a bit, but I think things are still playing out nicely.
In terms of mistakes, I'm sad to say that there were more in this chapter than in the last. You really need to edit, or at least have someone proofread for you.
But this was still a very good chapter. The conversations are very realistic and sweet. I really like this. Good job.
Author's Response: Again I thank you for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/03/12 - 05:59 pm · For: Chapter 1
This is absolutely adorable. I haven't read a story like this that took place right after the Pein attack. I'm loving this NaruHina fluff.
Oh, but a huge chunk of this chapter was italicized. An HTML malfunction.
There were also some mistakes with grammar and occasionally leaving a word out.
But this is just so gosh darn cute! I really like this! Good job! This is really good, especially since this is your first fanfic.
Author's Response: thank you! I have sent you a message in regards to to your reviews and I look forward to further conversations.