Reviews For Three Little Words
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 20/04/12 - 10:53 pm · For: Chapter 10
I am just wondering what is in that storage unit. I also forgot all about the exams. All in all this chapter talked alot about the relationship and the imprtance of what everything in a sexual point is so important when forming a great bond and not just sexually forged one. But it does look like it is inevitable that it happen. It is still one of those things that only work some of the time. To be aunest i would not last with a girl like that. But in any case It looks like Naruto is going down that road that all men go down. The first time is always scarry but it must happen.
Author's Response: They're still human, and this is one those things that everyone faces. Relationships should be about more than just the physical.
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 16/04/12 - 06:38 pm · For: Chapter 9
He is know finding a little more about his past. Just enough to satisfy him and everyone else for the time. It is funney how he is learning how to use blowing as an attack. The first thing I thought is he would practice it and accidently take out like half a city or foresst lol. Id hate to be the one to ever tell him to go blow himself.
Author's Response: that's why he is at one of the more open training grounds. *C*
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/12 - 05:38 pm · For: Chapter 18
Holy crap, he bit the poop out of Gaara.... Now it's Naruto vs. Tsunade...
This was freaking amazing! I loved it! Every bit of this action chapter was just really well written and amazingly described. I enjoyed this, I really did. I look forward to the second half of the fight. Can't wait! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: *smiles* I wasn't sure if I should make the entire fight one chapter or split it into two. So I did what anime and manga does often enough. Split it into another chapter right at a turning point. And your reaction, as much as my other reviewer's, showed me it was the right call. So thank you again!
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 16/04/12 - 04:54 pm · For: Chapter 8
Forgiveness is one powerful thing and it seems like both have forgiven each other. the realization that he has gain everyone aprovel of not only his love for Hanata but for him as a person and as someone they can all respect. There is a new begining in his live and now there is only a few more things for him to know to make him fully complete.
Author's Response: Completion is often an elusive goal. but yes, a new chapter is beginning for him. And while Hiashi was forgiven by him, he won't let it happen again.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/04/12 - 04:49 pm · For: Chapter 18
What?! That was awesome! I never expected a fight of that magnitude! Dammit I hope you update soon I want to see the fight against Tsunade!!!
Author's Response: Heh....they did say he didn't have to hold back...and even so, he made sure to not use his Rasen Shuriken, which would have killed.
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 15/04/12 - 11:57 pm · For: Chapter 7
With the fact that her father had no reason to do what he did makes ne think if ther is an underlining reason? Is there somthing from the past that has made him the way that he is or is he really just doing it cause he just don't like him. I also wonder if Hanata is ready for what is to come she is doing well now but what will come may be more difficult to handle. I am liking the chapters even more as i am able as a newb at this naruto stuff to visualize it.
Author's Response: No real underlying reasons. At least nothing I will admit to right now. *Evil grin* Glad to hear you are finding it enjoyable to read and you're able to "see" it taking place s you read!
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 15/04/12 - 06:37 pm · For: Chapter 6
The match didnt dissapoint and was exactly what i expected a hard fought battle. I cant believe that Naruto was hurt so much. His death would have made bigger broblems for all rather when he is alive the probblems are less if he had died. Cival war would not have been a good thing at all. And through it all his love would be dead to with no one to replace him hananta would have ended up a widow and unhappy for all time. Using a trap was cool i really didnt think of that.
Author's Response: Sometimes the simplest of maneuvers that do the most damage. Especially when performed on the fly. Glad you enjoyed it!
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 14/04/12 - 07:56 pm · For: Chapter 5
Secretes are not somthing that you can use to get your way. Espeasually if it is not your secrete to keep. I can see the delema and the reason why Naruto needs to face the up comming battles not knowing may keep him focues. But not telling him to prevent him from leaving is worst then telling him. When one leaves some place he or she is bound to retund that is why they call it leaving. In all of this mess he want to win his upcoming opponent but not kill or seriously injured. The dream was cool as well. I liked the exchange of words and the fact the Naruto now has a little more things to think about.
Author's Response: True enough. Secrets have a habit of coming back to haunt ya. AS for the battle, I think you'll enjoy what is to come.
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 14/04/12 - 07:29 pm · For: Chapter 4
It was a surprise to see that he would be facing the clan leader the same guy that he origionaly was just going to have a talk with. Both will surly be planning out there attacks very carefully. If he losses he will lose his love for good witch is a bad thing. If he wins everyone will know he is really powerful and he will become the one who eveyone will turn to. With a win here he will have prooved himself twice to being the oppisite of what he was expected to be. In it all there will be more situation I think down the road that will happen that probably wouldn't if he didn't get involved. Threw it all the match he will have soon well be a great match and a even greater triaumph.
Author's Response: Surprisingly enough most would see it as inevitable that Naruto and Hiashi go at it. Especially since this match will not only secure their relationship, but it will also ensure that his name and heritage is known throughout the village for years to come.
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 14/04/12 - 02:49 pm · For: Chapter 3
Just goes to show that wemon in your life can cause some drama and confussion. This chapter doesn't dissapoint. Classic style of romance and a feel for the characters and how important this situation is to them. I so wonder though these ten guys must have really big balls. I mean almost everyone knows about Naruto so these ten men must have known this would happen. Has this finelest used up all his energy defeting everyone else or has he planned for it.
Author's Response: Heh. I appreciate the feedback. For the most part it was unanticipated that he would show up. It was supposed to be a Clan matter only. They just didn't know he already had Hinata's mom and her cousin on Naruto's side.
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 06:58 pm · For: Chapter 2
wow really can't believe that he just clocked him like that haha now all he has to worry about is that what all us guys dread that long talk with the father.
Author's Response: *C* well Neji made the mistake and paid the penalty. And yeah...the "talk" is something every guy dreads.
Name: TheKingV (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 05:11 pm · For: Chapter 1
A hero a nerd a book worm or any person in the world who can relate to that pretty girl he grew up with and never had the nerve to tell her how he really feels. In this case a man who can do almost anything is powerless to the strans of love. lol Even though most real life situations dont end well this really tells you that most the time the other person feel the same you do. HaHa If only I had some one old and wise to point me in the right direction.
Author's Response: I think we could all use a Kakashi or Iruka in our lives when we were young. Just to give us the nudge in the right direction.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 01:17 pm · For: Chapter 1
Ok finally going to get to review. I read this at school on my ipod lol. Anyways, awesome chapter there were twists around every corner that made me want to keep reading. The Mizukage is still grinning at the end? Wtf is up with that? Can't wait to find out...Great work keep it up!
Author's Response: Heh heh heh.*evil laugh* I think you'll be surprised.... I love the continued feedback!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 09:14 am · For: Chapter 17
Wow, that was such an intense chapter! Mizukage is so evil! I didn't think it was possible, yet knowing how Kiri is, I should have expected something like that to happen. I'm glad that Kakashi and Shikamaru stopped Sakura from injecting the blood, otherwise, there'd be a terrible epidemic in Konoha. Thank goodness everyone is alright now.
Ooh, a fight between Naruto and Gaara, I presume? That's kinda cute in a friendly kind of a way. I want to see that!
Excellent work on this chapter! This was definitely a very creative and intense chapter, and I love every second of it. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I think you'll enjoy what coming up! I like to think its going to be epic and I continue to greatly appreciate your feedback!
Name: NakoniKutone (Signed) · Date: 12/04/12 - 04:09 pm · For: Chapter 1
I have no doubt I will! and ur very much welcome ^^
Author's Response: cool deal! things will start getting interesting yet again!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/04/12 - 03:10 pm · For: Chapter 16
He.... He forfeited? He quit?! But.... Yeah, I understand. It's just a bit surprising because there was so much buildup to this point. But after what happened in this chapter, I am very proud of Naruto. He did the right thing.
This was an amazingly intense and epic chapter, definitely one of the best, if not the best, of this whole story. Great job!
Author's Response: I appreciate that. Hopefully you enjoy what follows.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 10/04/12 - 02:40 pm · For: Chapter 16
Ok...This was the most amazing chapter by far. Sure i'm very disappointed that Naruto isn't a chuunin but you definitely didnt waste his oppurtunity and made him have a good reason to withdraw. The fights were epic, the emotion was so very apparent and everything was just awesome. Incredible story! Was this the last chapter? I hope not, I like this story way too much.
Author's Response: You have no idea how much your response means to me. I was kinda worried that the fights would seem one sided so to speak. But to answer your question: by no means is this the end of the story. And I think you will enjoy what happens next very much.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/12 - 06:43 am · For: Chapter 15
Gah, all this worrying about someone stealing Naruto away is making me flustered now! They both need to stay loyal, otherwise I'm just going to have to beat them both up!
Awesome job on this though! Another amazing chapter, I love how much this story continues to develop.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the drama I'm putting in. Just something I figured would come up when they went to Suna. And it would be something that Hinata has to come to terms with now or later...
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/04/12 - 12:56 pm · For: Chapter 15
Yet another great chapter. The chuunin exams are on their way and Naruto is in for a challenge...From what I can tell. Great development keep em coming
Author's Response: Coolness. Think you'll be surprised with what happens.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/04/12 - 05:28 pm · For: Chapter 14
Such... Amazing... Updates...
You don't even need to apologize for taking so long, these two today were more than I could have asked for. Not only is Naruto learning more about his past and training extremely hard, but Hinata and Naruto are now so far in their relationship. It's so awesome!
Great job on these! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I appreciate it! I tried to skirt that edge when it comes to their intimacies...hinting without being graphic. And I had to kinda think hard on what Minato would actually say to his son. But here is a hint for later: His mom's scrolls and journals? They play a role later on beyond what has already happenned! It is my deepest hope youcontinue to enjoy the story!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/04/12 - 02:06 pm · For: Chapter 14
Two amazing chapters. I really like how the story is developing. Naruto is intensifying his training and Hinata is teaching him more and more. And its getting more and more sexy ;) Great job keep up the good work!
Author's Response: A little bit of heat never hurts, ya know? ;) I am glad you enjoyed them. Wait til the Chuunin Exams!
Name: NakoniKutone (Signed) · Date: 04/04/12 - 01:24 pm · For: Chapter 1
love it so far
Author's Response: thank you! Your feedback is very much appreciated! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 29/03/12 - 12:57 pm · For: Chapter 1
Ah as expected. Naruto's training just keeps getting more and more intense. Awesome! Lol how to seduce Naruto haha this is going to be interesting :P Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I just hope you enjoy what he is going to have to go through when the Chuunin Exams take place. Think he'll need it. And I felt it important that Hinata grow as a woman and in the process gain more in terms of understanding her own inner power as a woman and not just a Shinobi. Just hope my ideas turn out good on paper. Just also wanted to say thank you for your encouragement. I almost quit after the first couple of chapters til you and one other started submitting responses. Now I can't stop! Hope you continue to enjoy what comes next....
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/12 - 03:43 am · For: Chapter 12
Wow, Naruto's training is so intense, it's kind of frightening. It worries me just how strong he can get o_O
Ooh, Kurenai is giving Hinata advice on how to seduce Naruto? How interesting, I can't wait to see how that turns out :3
Awesome update! Keep up the amazing work with this story!
Author's Response: To me, there are certain limitations working against him. Like the Kyuubi, etc. Bit by bit, I am incorporating them into the story. Though I see him as becoming extremely powerful, thanks to reading the manga. But we'll see how he develops as this story goes. *LOL* Yeah, Kurenai giving her lessons is gonna make things interesting for them. Thank you again for your generous encouragement. I really appreciate it.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/03/12 - 10:14 am · For: Chapter 1
Oh damn disowned? Intense. I wonder what Hiashi is going to do about it in the future. He's probably so pissed that Hinata is staying at Naruto's. Great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks! I can say that while he can't do anything to interfere, he is not happy about it. But in time things will work out. I am glad you are continuing to enjoy the story!