Reviews For Human Behaviors
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 22/01/12 - 01:12 pm · For: Chapter 1
LOL. I - LOVED - IT, haha! So totally Naruto-esque, srsly.
Lovely - i'm rereading the part where Iruka says that they'll be representing the school, so "do your best" - makes the ending funnier.
I found the text too crowded, thus hard to read. It almost put me off when I clicked on the story, and might put off other readers. What I do is double space after every para, and I keep my Word setting on "No Spacing", not "Normal". Maybe that'll help.
Thanks for the laugh!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm happy that it made you laugh. i would also like to thank you for the advice, I just fixed the paragraphs and it looks WAY better :). Anyway, now I have to go fix all the old ones lol. Thank you again!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/01/12 - 01:21 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hehehe, I actually enjoyed reading this. It was really funny. There were a lot of grammar and spelling issues, but the humor made up for it. Nice job :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad that the humor was alright, and I admit I could have proofread it better...Thanks again!