Hehe, well, I don't normally read yaoi, but I have to say that this was actually pretty entertaining. I pretty much laughed the whole way through.

My only suggestion would have to be to edit because sometimes you have run-on sentences, which take away the flow of the story. There's also an issue with spacing; it came out rather strange in this chapter...

And I have to admit, one of the reasons I reviewed was because of the song, Best Friend. I don't know too many people who know that song, so I had to laugh when I saw Kiba singing it.

Anyway, nice job on this. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Ah well like i said it's the first fanfic i have ever written so i know it's not all that great, but at least i gave it my best =D

Author's Response: Ah well like i said it's the first fanfic i have ever written so i know it's not all that great, but at least i gave it my best =D