Reviews For Fate's Chosen
Name: Jang Wo Li (Signed) · Date: 10/12/13 - 01:50 pm · For: Alone
this is very well put together. I look forward to the next part!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/02/13 - 07:00 pm · For: Alone
Short but awesome. Deno is awesome especially his will to bring forth his energy. and now things are hitting the fan. Great update!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/11/12 - 07:06 pm · For: Chapter 27
I like the development with Yuki. She's delving more and more into who she truly is. Can't wait for more!
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 19/08/12 - 08:57 am · For: The Golden Feathers
Y'all've got a good thing going here. I look forward to the next chapter.
Oni
Author's Response: Hi, Oni! Thanks so much for deciding to read this collaboration, we're very grateful!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/12 - 04:22 pm · For: The Golden Feathers
Ah it's nice to read some of your writing again.
So more development I see. I wonder what those golden feathers are about...I thought it was genjutsu at first but wellll idk
Anyways, awesome chapter! Keep up the awesome work.
Author's Response: Well, this was written a long time ago... I wonder when I wrote it... Can't even remember O_O Haha, you'll find out about the golden feathers soon-ish ;D I have to keep myself from spilling any secrets, haha. Thanks for the review, Shizake-nii-san! It is much appreciated!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/05/12 - 10:29 am · For: The Second Mission
ah... hotaru is so sweet... =D
hmm...
someone special...huh? mother...? nope...
gf...? hmm... crush... maybe... well w/e it is... sure seems very very painful... =/
nice chapter... =)
Author's Response: Yeah, Hotaru's kindness is one of the reasons why I like her. As for who the "someone special" is.... You'll have to wait to find out ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're awesome!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/12 - 10:35 am · For: Waking to Fate
xD
i like this Kasumi too... xD
i totally love word wars lol... xD
poor deno =P
but it was really kind of her to take the time to first save him and then even actually feed him... ^.^
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/12 - 10:24 am · For: In Death's Grip
ah...
finally... xD
Deno Kazukae... =P
so tis the infamous mr. kazukae... can't wait to read more bout him...
and ahaa... Mr. whooper =D
kasumi seems an interesting one... with a past somewhat similar to that of a jinchuriki...
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/12 - 09:51 am · For: Night Walk
woah... Dx
being able to see/talk to spirits is NOT a pleasant experience... i hvn't had it... but clearly... being able to see ghosts... x___x
poor poor yuki .___.
and hmm... might that spirit be from tear village...? strange happenings...
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/12 - 09:42 am · For: The Warrior Princess
Go Tashi...!! am all out supporting him over kiba... =P
xD
kool chappie...
Author's Response: You like Taishi over Kiba?!?! That's so mean! Haha, thanks for the review, it is much appreciated!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/12 - 06:24 am · For: Departure, Team Neji
so... hiragana has a grave and mysterious background...
bone...? o.O hmm...
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/12 - 06:21 am · For: The Tiger Child
wow... even naruto seems a bit more mature then those two... xD
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 17/05/12 - 06:19 am · For: A Spirit Girl And Her Crush
strange happenings... wat might they be...
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/04/12 - 07:40 pm · For: Demons of the Past
Wow this was long lol. But I liked it. Is Kasumi really dead now? I didn't expect her to go like that...Great job Itoko!
Author's Response: Well, you'll just have to wait and see ;). And yeah, it was really long. Sorry about that. Thankfully Silverwolf's chapter is shorter.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/04/12 - 01:32 pm · For: The Breaking Point
Oh wow so Yuki is...In this case "Fates Chosen?" That's awesome! this chapter was awesome! Keep up the good work.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/04/12 - 09:52 pm · For: Outrage
This was a good developmental chapter. I can't wait to see what comes next. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I'll try to, though no promises. I hope you keep on reading and enjoying, Itoko-san!
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 14/04/12 - 01:40 pm · For: Beginning the Hunt
Whoa, so what is Kasumi then? If she's not a demon or a demon holder, what is she? This is just so intense and getting even more epic, it really makes me wonder what is going on.
Now I'm eager for me. You did excellent with this, SilverWolf-san. Great work.
Author's Response: Oh, you'll find out what she is eventually ;) Until then, you're pretty much left in the dark :D I'm glad this leaves you eager for more. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Rainbow-chan!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 01:22 pm · For: Beginning the Hunt
Gah, I wanna know what's wrong with Naruto...It probably has something to do with Kasumi. Great chapter! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Haha, all shall be revealed relatively soon-ish.... Maybe.... I don't know.... :D Thanks for reading and reviewing, Shizake-san! I'm glad you liked it!
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/04/12 - 01:31 pm · For: Dark Side
Ok I am reviewing for this chapter and the previous one. Both were awesome, I liked the continuing development. Kasumi continues to interest me, especially her interest with Deno. Great job you two keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sure Sasaui would agree with me for saying that we're glad you enjoyed this! From this point on in the story, things do become more intense. Hope you continue to enjoy this story! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Shizake-san! You rock!
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 11/04/12 - 12:04 pm · For: Dark Side
I love Deno. It's as simple as that. I really like him. He's just such a good person, and the speech he made to help Kasumi was just so gosh darn sweet.
And I'm really curious as to what is going on in Kasumi's head. It's making me nervous, she only sounds like a crazy person....
Nice job on this, Sasaui! It was a great update!
Author's Response: I love him to. No offense to my other Ocs, but he has got to be my favorite. He's probably the second oldest main oc I still have. So far he's also the character that has been changed the most. Actually, this is the old version. The recent Deno wouldn't fit into the whole Kasumi situation as well. Crazy? No, of douse not. That's too simple >=D. As for more, you now have your wish.
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 11/04/12 - 11:59 am · For: Confrontation
I have been waiting for this team to find Kasumi! Now that they have, I'm so worried for her. I hope they don't hurt her. Actually, I hope she doesn't hurt them. O_o
Great job on this chapter, Silver Wolf! This was a lovely dramatic chapter that leaves me wanting more.
Author's Response: Hehe, this is one of my favorite chapters (out of the ones I have written) because it really pushes things forward a little bit. As for who will get hurt in this little fight... Eh, you'll have to wait and see ;) Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments, Rainbow-chan! I appreciate it!
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 03/04/12 - 03:20 pm · For: First Vision of Disaster
Hmm, what an interesting vision. I wonder what Naruto has to do with anything... Heck, I wonder what Oni is up to. Trying to run away, from what exactly? So many questions in such a short chapter, and now I need them answered. Ugh, well, I hope there is an update soon on that horizon :D Keep up the good work ladies.
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 - 06:39 pm · For: First Vision of Disaster
Well now Im in even more suspense...Great chapter! I really wanna now whats to come
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/03/12 - 08:33 pm · For: Arrival at the Tear Village
I really, really, really, really, like this story and Kasumi and Deno and your protrayal of Lee, and EVERYTHING!!!
Brekky chan, you're awesome.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/03/12 - 08:29 pm · For: Curse of Thorns
Next chapter! I wanna know!
Author's Response: Haha. I guess it's a good thing the next chapter was already up then.