Reviews For Fate's Chosen
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/11 - 10:35 pm · For: Departure, Team Neji
woah....
hmmm....
Rogues... using bone sythe, mist n othr techniues... they do look powerful...
n awh :( i thought i'd get to see Yuki's abilities... :P
n woah at hw they retreated wen they heard Yuki's name...
Does tht Tear village have smetin to do with Yuki? tht they are allowing them to enter the village? O.o
suspense....suspense.... :D
i love where this story is going :DD
n lol at hw concerned Neji IS bout her ;) xD
Awesome job at this chappie Kayla-chan :D
Keep up the kool work.....!!
~Compliments of the Season~
Author's Response: Lol, sorry, maybe next time we'll see some of Yuki's abilities!;) Yeah, let's just say that the clan name Hiragana is slightly powerful in these parts.... And yes, but you'll find out more:P Haha, thanks so much! I love suspense!!! It's what builds a story, and yeah, hopefully we'll have some more NejiXYuki fluff in later chapters. Thx so much shadow-san, happy holidays!!!:D
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/11 - 10:34 pm · For: The Tiger Child
Haha... :D
nw tht... ws Kool :D
Kiba n Taishi's rivalry huh? ^^
lol poor Naruto...xD he really is trreated like a loser here isnt he... :P like he needs a trainer like a Genin n stuff... :P
y do they think he left Konoha for 3yrs in the first place xP
lol... anyways...
hope Naruto wins... xD
cz if either of em wins its gonna b a real bad scene... xD
anyways... Awesome job on this chapter :D
~Compliments of the Season~
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like their rivalry, Shadow-san. It was just something I thought would be fun since one had a huge, scary cat (aka: a tiger) while the other had a huge dog. It seems like I'm not the only one who likes it. Yeah, they weren't very nice to him in this chapter. Taishi's own cockiness in the cause of that. He sees himself being higher than others usually. As for who wins, I believe you've already read the chapter with that, so yeah..... Yeah, I think they could lose to knock down their egos a bit. Anyway, I hope you had a great holiday (I'm not exactly sure which of the holidays you celebrate, so yeah.....)
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/11 - 07:56 am · For: A Spirit Girl And Her Crush
:D
tht ws quite a nice beginning :)
oh... so Naruto dosn't knw much bout her?
hmm... so ws she part of team guy..? O.o
or did she just train with them...tht ws the only part tht confused me...
othrwise...
its an awesome chapter :D
haha... is she kinda like hinata around neji...? :P
n hmm... Tsunade as well as yuki worried bout the strange happenings...
i hv a feeling its gonna lead to an intense plot...
Anyways... great job with this chapter... :D
n m lookin forward to its updates... ^^
Author's Response:Nope, it's because Yuki is a year older than him so she wasn't in his class. PLus, she's kinda quiet and stays to herself:) She wasn't apart of the team, but she got to spend a lot of time with them since she had graduated with Neji, Tenten, and Lee. Sorry for the confusion! Yeah, kinda:) They actually have a lot in common, which is why Yuki and Hinata are great friends.
And yep, you're right about the plot... Thx so much for reading and reviewing shadow-chan!:D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/12/11 - 04:15 am · For: A Spirit Girl And Her Crush
Quick question: Do you want us to add our own chapters? I'm just curious and in no means would that bother me, but I had to know to see if I was supposed to add my chapter.
Okay, yeah, it feels weird reviewing a story under my name (as well as yours and Silverwolf's), but your chapter deserves to be reviewed! Have I ever told you that I absolutely love your writing? Well, if I haven't, shame on me. It's absolutely amazing! It was short, but even from there I loved Yuki. I don't know why. Maybe just everything about her personality. And yeah, those strange happenings are definitely not good =P
Author's Response:Yeah, you're next in line to add the next chapter, then Silver Wolf.
Haha, thanks! And yeah, you may have mentioned it a few dozen times but who's counting?:P I love Yuki too! She really resembles me, how I tend to act sometimes so I can relate to her. Definitely not good happenings.... Thx for reviewing to our story, haha, couldn't resist!:P