Reviews For Knights of the Midrealm
Name: DokuroBerri (Signed) · Date: 16/11/11 - 08:59 pm · For: Chapter 1
I'm very into this story so far! Very interesting! :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/11/11 - 01:54 pm · For: Chapter 1
Holy cow. That was just so..... sad. I can't believe you make them go through that, Fantasy Madeline. I hope it doesn't have to happen again in two weeks. I mean, what's so bad about making something happen by then? Man, I feel like crying now just imagining going through that. Gwen truly is strong. I really like her for that. Both of your characters are outstanding. Once again, I hope they're helped somehow. It doesn't even have to be by then ninjas. Just as long as they're helped. Man, their situation is so sad. Great job, Fantasy Madeline. Other than a mistake or two, it was amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I know where my plot is going (mwa ha ha). No spoilers! Thanks for reading and staying true to the story!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/11/11 - 06:48 pm · For: Chapter 1
*chokes on sobs* This... This is horribly sad! You've gotten so good at instituting emotion in your readers, Fantasy Madeline. This is quite remarkable. I was on the edge of crying halfway through this chapter, and it wasn't even that long. You've got me hooked already. Great job with this, I already really like this story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Really? I almost made you cry? Wow. I didn't think it was that sad. It was so short though.. rnI am so happy that you like this, I love experimenting with different writing styles. I will update soon!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/11/11 - 02:08 pm · For: Prologue
I loved this! It was absolutely, positively amazing even if it was short. But that just leaves me wanting more =D. The Medieval thing was awesome. I love things like that. And I really can't wait to see how you combine it with ninjas. I'm positive you'll do an outstanding job. So far I like Gwen and Trir. I feel bad because of them being orphans and hope that they don't feel too bad of pain. If they do, I hope Team 7 can help them out.
Author's Response: I am so happy that this has intrigued people! Um...yea....the ninjas.........help. We'll go with that. =D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/11/11 - 08:12 pm · For: Prologue
Different than your normal style! Yes! I can already tell! Even with so few words, I can picture the desolate setting. The brother and sister pair, surprisingly, already have tugged at my heart strings, simply because I feel bad for them already. I'm already fascinated as to where you will take this. If it's different than what you normally write, then I want to see how your new and improved writing style applied to a different idea. You have me interested, Fantasy Madeline, just as always. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am happy to have intrigued you. I am basing a lot of the story on my own experiences in the SCA, and I am looking forward to working with this story.