Reviews For Happy Halloween
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 - 09:33 pm · For: Chapter 2
Heya. I like this one shot I just have one quick question.
Is Itachi divorcing Yuki? If so why are they still all... Couply?
Eh, sorry. It's just you said soon-to-be-divorced and then ex. Just wanting to get it cleared up :D
Author's Response: No, Itachi isn't divorcing Yuki, it was meant to be a joke because Yuki told him that, she found another guy attractive. Itachi doesn't like that because he wants Yuki just to be his and turn a blind eye to attractive men. Sorry if that got to you. No they will still be married. rnThanks for the review :) thou.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 - 12:05 pm · For: Chapter 2
AWW! Yuki and Itachi are such softies! ;D
Nah, joking, joking. Really though, I think you portrayed them as great parents, each with their own little flaws or quirks. Kisa was adorable, in her own little girl way. Her being bossy is the only thing I could see of her being bratty... that, or the average 'I don't want to' kind of personality, but every little kid does that.
Overall, I think it was very sweet. Great job on this.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it.rnI tried my best to make parent more realistic then what most fanfics seem to do. I wanted to put out even after marriage Yuki and Itachil will always have problems. Also they aren't perfect parents because they are raised in different ways and their really is no book on how to raise a perfect family. Kind of tired of that, also tired of how when people have a family fics the story is more focused on the romance on parents then on the Kid. I think it is balanced, the focus on the kid and on the love the parents share. Not the Kid trying to make sure the parents happy...sorry I ranted there.rnI'm glad you like Kisa. I once again tried to make her realistic as a five year old kid as much as I can. rnAnyway thanks for the review, I always look forward to what you have to say :D