This... was really good.

I've always wondered what would happen to Sai if Danzo found out about his loyalty to Team 7, and this is definitely how I would want it to happen. This story plot was perfect. It was well thought out, descriptive, and emotional. This was definitely a great story.

The only thing I'd complain about is the tenses (past, present, future), as you seemed to switch between all three. But your amazing story seriously made up for it. This was so original, and I enjoyed every moment of it.

I look forward to reading more stories by you. Keep up the amazing work with your writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the feedback. It's very helpful. I'm glad you liked the story.rnrnI started writing in past tense with the dialogue in the present so I tried to keep it like that. I do have a tendency to overly use the past participle which is probably annoying to readers. I'll work on that. Thanks again!!!