Aww... That was really sweet. I personally liked this one better than The Kunoichi, I feel like this one had a lot more substance to it. Plus, there was a happy ending :D Great job on this, I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work with your writing!

Author's Response: Yeah, this time I felt like I was able to actually get what I was thinking out of my head better lol. I think I will do a third one to go with these two... but it will be a little different too, not sure what will happen there if I do it though... but they all are supposed to represent the different outcomes of battle, in The Kunoichi, the main person died, in this, no one died... so in the third, it would represent another outcome... anyways idk. and thank you for your kind words, it means a lot :)