Reviews For Nameless One
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 06/08/12 - 08:47 am · For: Prologue
this is prety good, certainly better than my writing, just one thing to note. in the Japanese anime, people refer to Hiruzen Sarutobi as "Sandaime", but when their adressing him, it's "Hokage-sama" you asked for feed back, and this is mine :D
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 10:53 pm · For: Prologue
ahaa.....
Tht ws nice..... :D
A few mistakes here n there... Bt nthin much...
Anyways.... Woah, youngest ANBU... tht kool.... Bt i didnt gt it.... Ws he ANBU at age 10 or 15....?
N oh.... Poor shizu..... :(
eh.... Jst to say.... Sandaime-samb sounds mre btr than calling third hokage... Well.... Jst wat i feel.... Upto u.... Anywhoos....
It ws a nice chapter.... :D
update soon..... :)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review, even though it took a second to figure out what some of it said LOL...rn----Oh, and he was when he was 10, and still was, until the next chapter, which you will see (:----rnAnd yeah, Sandiame does, but it was late when I wrote this and my internet was out at the time, and I couldn't remember how to spell it. lol :)rnrnrnAgain, thanks (:rn
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/11 - 05:06 pm · For: Prologue
Hehe, not bad so far. I like Mamoru, I don't know why. But I do hope he becomes a large part of the story ^_^
This entire thing is a giant mystery, so it really leaves me wanting to know exactly where you'll take this. It has captured my interest so far. Keep up the good work so far.
Author's Response: Why thank you (: rn And that's kind what happened to me too, originally Mamoru was just going to be the "excuse" for how Shizu knows how to defend herself (as you will see) - but then I kinda liked how he turned out, and adjusted the possible plot to include him. rn I must warn though, this will probably take awhile to update between my little mini sessions of inspiration. lol.rn And also, I don't know exactly what will happen - since I am making up the details as I go. Haha (: And thank you again