Reviews For Rinji
Name: Shizake Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/06/13 - 08:52 am · For: Unholy Encounter
I could never figure out how to reply to your review Rowan haha but I suppose I'll do it here and hope you catch it one day. But yeah thank you for the review! It means a lot coming from you and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I wanna see your entry too though! It's probably really good, I mean your a great writer too! So thank you again :)
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 15/12/12 - 02:05 am · For: Explanation
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
at the shirtless Kiba at the End xDDDD
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/12 - 08:17 pm · For: Gift and Note
I don't really wish to speak about the Connecticut event... mostly because I'll start ranting about how devastating it is...
As for the gift... Well stop apologizing about it being a video, I honestly don't mind. I found this really sweet and endearing and I'm really touched by what everyone said. Thank you Sasaui for this really amazing gift.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 12/11/12 - 11:58 am · For: Unholy Encounter
Wow.... that was amazing. That was completely and totally amazing. The action rose so fast and just sucked you in and it was all so so horrific I was just sitting there, reading it , mouth and eyes agape. Congratulations on winning the award Shizake! I know you definitely deserved it, this is incredible. Ah, the imagery! Yeesh, blown over. XP
*repeats* Ahhh, that was really good. I really liked what you did with his brother wagering his family. The beginning, with Ryu running into the house, reminded me somewhat of Sasuke, but the scenes where his family's being ripped apart was horrific.
I liked it, haha. I'll put my contest entry up soon, somewhere, probably here. I'm pretty unhappy with it, so I'll probably put up a rewrite too. XD Brekky-chan said I should do a before and after so that's why. XP
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 06/11/12 - 12:06 pm · For: Explanation
-_- another story, sasa? I know this is for special occasions, but u have a bunch of stories already!
Author's Response: Yes, but I only work on..... I believe four of them if you count the one with Itoko-san, which I still need to add to my bio.......
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 06:07 pm · For: New Year's Promise
Aww, this was actually really sweet. I was honestly a little worried about Sasuke and Kina's first holiday together, simply because I was worried for OOCness.
There was none, at least not in my eyes.
You kept him really in character, considering the circumstances. And it helped us learn a lot about how he feels and what happened to Kina. It has really great insight.
I also liked the Promise key. You couldn't have picked a better word (or kanji) to engrave into the gift. I think Promise is perfect.
The only issue I would bring up is sentence structure, but I'll blame that on the fact that you were rushing through it.
This was still really good. Great job, Sasaui! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thinking about this, it makes me a little sad not to continue NTL. It was fun writing about them, mostly because those two were actually cute together. And sweet! I kept Sasuke in character despite the timing! I'm so glad. So,, I hope I did that in NTL as well, and I may write it again, I don't know. I really enjoyed it, but there's the fact I hated writing in Sasuke's PoV. Well, I actually loved it, but I hated how hard it was. And I couldn't figure out anything, either. That's why I did it ;). And I'm really sorry for the mistakes!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/11 - 08:50 am · For: Explanation
Urufu in tears...
:')
wow...
wt a scene...
i wish u two would meet together face to face...:D
that'd b pretty damn Awesome...!! :D
Author's Response: Yeah, that would be pretty awesome. I still kinda feel bad for making her cry (even if it's technically a good thing). Oh, and Happy New Year, Shadow-san!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 14/12/11 - 08:45 am · For: Happy Birthday!
haha... kool...!!
yep
one of the best authors of TONFA... if not the best... :D
m gonna watch tht video... bt m on mobile internet... n this Damn mobile ain't playing tht video... >_<
I'll watch it once m on my lappy...
n good job with d tribute Sasaui... ^_^
m pretty sure Urufu might've likd it very very much... :D
u two r d best buddies i'v seen on TONFA...
n once again...
Happy B'day Urufu-chan
Author's Response: Thank you! Now just tell her that =D. I hope you liked the video, Shadow-san, and yes, Silverwolf most definitely enjoyed it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/11 - 04:38 pm · For: Happy Birthday!
So.... um.... yeah, just watched the video....
I, uh, don't know what to say.... The reason why I'm having such a hard time writing this is because.... well, alright, honesty. I can't stop crying.
Sasaui, no one's ever done something so touching and sweet for me. I'm not a materialistic person, but I do enjoy getting wrapped gifts. It's a nice little time to accept thanks, even when I don't want or need anything.
So for you to go to the trouble of making a video for me is just.... wow. And people actually put their thoughts in there as well? Oh my god, I can't believe this...
I seriously can't stop crying, and I'm laughing at how ridiculous and sappy I'm being. My god, thank you so much for this. This is one of the best gifts I've ever gotten. Everything in that video made me so happy. Thank you so much, Sasaui. You're a spectacular friend.
Author's Response: Sheesh. It's been forever since this review. I really need to reply. I'm so very glad that you liked it. I was afraid that you wouldn't. It's probably a good thing, but I'm sorry that you cried. I'm glad you truly enjoyed it, though. Though I'm not sure I can top it for next year. Darn it! But again, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. And it wasn't a trouble, it was a joy to get this reaction. It's not funny - it truly makes me happy to see you happy. You definitely deserve it as well as every single word everyone says. You're a great person, Silverwolf, and you so deserved this.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/11 - 12:28 am · For: Cinderella
kool Sasaui...!!
u know wt... this brought back my old memories...
just tht it wsnt halloween...
n the Sasuke in my real life story is my best friend... :P
this ws mind-blowing n epic...!!
i loved the whole fic...
the haunted mansion part ws especially funny... xD
Author's Response: Really? The Sasuke in your story is your best friend? Hm...... That's.... interesting? I never saw that one coming. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and I found writing the haunted mansion part really fun to write.
Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 05/11/11 - 11:18 pm · For: Cinderella
First off, as I have already said I do have a deep increasing hate for Sakura but…but…I do find exceptions to her if the author/fanfic writer writes her well. Meaning she wasn’t shoved in front of your face with the whole “Sakura is the best thing in the Naruto anime, and I’ll show you how awesome she is by making her great at everything,” (Yes, this is the reason why I hate Sakura) but I think you did, pretty well balancing out her character. Showing that yes in fact she does love Sasuke that is her common flaw, and though she does love Sasuke, she is still kind to people around her. (Yes, I do take in to consideration that Sakura is not a slut…Oh, wait an ItachixSakura Picture came up I hate her alot more now)
I do like how you incorporated the song at the end, mixing it with the title. A pet peeve that I do have as a reader is freaking song fics. I just don’t like it much, reason being is because, I really don’t want to read the lyrics, and again I do make exception. Movements between lyrics are fine and I think you got that down perfectly, since I wasn’t wasting my time reading stories.
Over all, I really liked…a little confusing at the beginning but I think that’s because I have a slight headache. Sorry: [
P.S. I have being meaning to read your story for quite some time. Glad I finally got a chance.
Author's Response: I can see why you'd hate Sakura. I didn't really care too much for her to begin with. I think it was writing this that made me like her more. As for the best..... I don't really think any of them are the best. I mean, there's some I really like, but I don't see why anyone would want to make them seem perfect and all that. That's just no fun. But I can see why you'd hate Sakura if people do that. It would make me hate her, too. I'm really glad I succeeded in not doing that. I think Sakura is a very complicated character, but at the same time that's hidden by her obsession with Sasuke. She seems to become deeper after the Chuunin exams (like when her history with Ino is revealed and all, even if their rivalry for Sasuke was so lame). Sorry about whatever picture it is that came to you mind. I really hope it's gone by now. I never planned for this to have any part of the song in it. I never even thought I'd do it. I think it was just fine in this one, but I doubt I'll do it again. And don't worry about my stories. I've only gotten one of your chapters read of Art is a.....Girl, so yeah.....
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/11/11 - 03:46 am · For: Cinderella
Jeez, this special was longer than I anticipated; it took me last night and this morning to finish it :P
Well anyway, it was really cute. I felt so bad for Ryu throughout the whole thing, and then he finally got his dance with Sakura, so I was happy, but then she went and said she still likes Sasuke more than Ryu, and I felt bad for him again....
But every time that Ryu was pretending to be a vampire, I seriously thought he was a real vampire. I kept forgetting he was dressed as one... duh...
I really liked the song; I went and listened to it after the chapter, and it is so sweet. I instantly liked it.
Great job on this special. It came out extremely well. Keep up the awesome work with your writing, Sasaui!
Author's Response: Ah sheesh. I can't believe I've totally forgotten to answer these reviews. Anyway, I'm sorry about how long it took you back then to read it. I think it was really cute, too, and I really emjoyed writing it. I think I did torture Ryu just a little bit in this. Okay, a lot more than a little bit. I enjoyed writing the dance scene. It was so cute in my head. As for her liking Sasuke more...... Yeah, I'm pretty sure it's going to stay that way for a good while. Seriously? Was I that good at making him seem like a vampire? Well, I guess that's a good thing. He does seem to fit the vampire act in this, so I can see why you'd be fooled. Did you know the person who sings it is a Christian? Many of songs by him have a Christian part in it. What's really sad is he wrote this, and some time after (at least my brother told me, he may be wrong) his daughter actually died.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 26/09/11 - 04:57 pm · For: Explanation
This is a nice idea! So, uh, we can submit our own specials, right? Just checking, don't wanna do anything wrong!
Author's Response: Yeah, that's right. And don't worry. This is a spot for me and whoever else wants to to place holiday specials.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/11 - 09:20 am · For: Explanation
hmm...
nice idea...
holiday specials...:D
maybe i'll try another try... n make somethin less rotten than da previous one... xD
if i gt da time... T_T
Senior college sucks... big time...!!!!
Author's Response: =D. I'm so glad everyone seems to like it. And whatever you write, I'm sure it will be great. As for college, if you're a senior, at least that means it's your last year! You're almost done with school entirely while I just started Hihgh School as a freshmen c(= (how I do this =P and =) ).
Name: SabakuNoAkane (Signed) · Date: 24/09/11 - 09:35 pm · For: Explanation
This sounds like a great idea! I may try to write one??? idk we will see how that ends up lol (must not get to ambitious, I just wrote my first fanfic this week lol)
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! I was worried it would be stupid, but apparently people don't think so since both you and Silverwolf like it. As for writing one, if you do, I can't wait to read it. Ah, your fanfic..... Yeah, I just realized I haven't read your recent ones.....
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/09/11 - 06:13 pm · For: Explanation
Oh, I really like this idea! I've always thought of doing specials, but I was just planning on making them a separate story or something. I think this is much more convenient and creative. I sadly can't think of an idea at the moment, but I really like the ones you came up with. Haha, your OCs plotting against you, it's kind of about time ;D And Ryu and the dance thing is so cute XD
I'll have to come up with some thoughts to share. Nice idea though, Sasaui!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, Silverwolf. Yeah, more than once I've thought of doing specials, and then I thought I'm probably not the only one who wanted to do specials, therefore Rinji was born. As for my CS special, I seriously need to start working on it -_-'. Stupid school work slowing me down!