Reviews For The Battle of Wills of Fire
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 - 05:55 pm · For: Chapter 7 - Curiousity
Wow. Just plain wow. I still can't believe Naruto did that. And now he plans on using that jutsu to bring Sasuke back?!!? I think your story leaves me awestruck with each new chapter. It truly is amazing.
Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 - 04:55 pm · For: Chapter 14 - Resolution
I cried when I read this, Sasuke actually did the right thing and he ended up back in the world of the dead
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 - 03:10 pm · For: Chapter 15 - Conclusion
Awww, she's pregnant! That's so sweet! It's so good to see that everyone is doing well, especially Naruto, since he was so depressed.
Wait, conclusion? So does that mean it's over? If it is, that's so sad, this was a really good story. Excellent job with this!
Author's Response: yeah, this was my ending. i hope it was alright. thanks for reading along this whole time!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 - 02:34 pm · For: Chapter 14 - Resolution
O_O Sakura's the new Kyuubi Jinchuuriki... Oh my gosh...
Your plot twists astound me, really they do... Wow, I really don't know what else to say... This was amazing... Good job!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 - 08:25 am · For: Chapter 13 - Kyuubi
What?! Sakura wants to be the Jinchuuriki?! Wow! Again, your plot twists amaze me!
And that was an epic battle! It flowed very well, and everything was so vivid. Well done with this chapter! Keep up the great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 - 08:15 am · For: Chapter 12 - Reunion II
Oh my gosh! The Kyuubi is back! Just when Sasuke realizes that Team 7 made him happy! Gah! Plot twists! They throw me off every time! Great work with this chapter!
Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 28/08/11 - 04:44 am · For: Chapter 12 - Reunion II
I am speachless, this is really well done! I can't wait to see what comes next!
Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 27/08/11 - 10:15 pm · For: Chapter 11 - Reunion
that is so sasuke, even death can't cure him of his obsessiveness. Still it's sad though...
I look forward to seeing what comes next
Author's Response: cool what did u think of the other chapters?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/08/11 - 01:19 pm · For: Chapter 11 - Reunion
Wow... Wow... Wow...
You wrote the Impure World Resurrection jutsu perfectly. And when Sasuke came back, I thought Naruto really would control him easily. Another plot twist, I love it! Great job! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/11 - 11:23 pm · For: Chapter 10 - Empty
D: EH?! WHAT?! His eyes are gone?! What is going on?! Oh my gosh, every chapter just leaves me in so much more suspense! Update soon please, this is so good!
Author's Response: hehehe, i love plot twists
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/11 - 10:26 pm · For: Chapter 9 - Prison of Folly
I loved Kabuto in this! His pretend hysteria was so spot on, I really liked it! It seems so evil and creepy, but it was so intoxicatingly addicting to rid, in a weird way. I really liked it, well done! Keep up the good work!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/08/11 - 08:09 pm · For: Chapter 6 - Insanity
I.... Well, I honestly don't know what to say. This chapter has blown me away. Maybe it's just all these twists, but your story, like this chapter has blown me away. The Naruto leaving thing was excellent. You're doing a fantastic job at this. It seems like what they would actually do. Overall, it's just out of this world.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/11 - 03:06 pm · For: Chapter 8 - Old Rivals
XD Brilliant! Naruto and Gaara's battle was absolutely brilliant! And Gaara's ending line, I loved it! Excellent work on this!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/11 - 11:28 am · For: Chapter 7 - Curiousity
Oh dear.... Impure World Resurrection... Yup, it's official. I'm in love with this story. You're really doing very well with this, I seriously can't wait for more! Good job! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/08/11 - 11:26 am · For: Chapter 6 - Insanity
Wow... I'm... thoroughly impressed with this. I know I was seriously confused as to why Naruto would not want to be Hokage, but now it all makes sense. In fact, I can really see the series of Naruto heading this way. Excellent work! I really like this!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 09:10 pm · For: Chapter 5 - Number One Unpredictable Ninja
Um, Kakashi wasn't known as the White Fang; that was his father.
But anyway, onto more important matters...
He said NO?! What?! Why?! Oh my gosh, that's so confusing! I want to know what happens! Please post more soon, please! This was great, and the twist really threw me off, in a good way ;) Nice job on this!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 09:04 pm · For: Chapter 4 - The Next Generation
Aw, this is so nice. It's sad to see Tsunade go, but at least Naruto will become Hokage :) You spelled Kakashi's last name wrong: Hatake. Other than that, great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 08:40 pm · For: Chapter 3 - Student vs Master
Hmm, I notice that you tend to switch between present and past tense when writing. It really shows when you describe what's going on. You need to pick one tense and stick to it, to help keep the flow of the story.
Other than that, I thought this was a really good fight, even if it was training. I loved the ending; it's amazing to see how much Naruto has grown. He must really look like his father now. That's a really sweet comparison.
Nice job with this chapter! Now I'm going to read more! ;D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 08:33 pm · For: Chapter 2 - Burning Sorrow
...Wow... I... really don't know what to say...
Naruto is so... surprisingly in character yet surprisingly OOC. It's complicated, I mean, you did an excellent job with this chapter. It's just the fact that I can actually see Naruto doing that that it leaves me surprised.
This is a positive review, by the way, in case my random and confusing nonsense bewildered you. It befuddled even me.
Alright, so what I meant to say was that this was a great chapter that I think was very accurate in what would and possibly should happen. Great work ;D
Author's Response: I know what your saying, there are part of this chapter that i really dislike. but i kinda needed it to move the story forward.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 04:43 pm · For: Chapter 5 - Number One Unpredictable Ninja
=(. I can't believe just how much of his spark has left him. When one's so used to the fun, happy Naruto, he seems.... Well, to tell the truth, like he did when the third died. Guess that means you're getting him right. It's an excellent chapter, though. I absolutely love your story.
Author's Response: Yeah, i hope its not turning you off to the story. I'm trying out a darker theme with sakura and naruto, but it'll get betterrn
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 04:39 pm · For: Chapter 4 - The Next Generation
Wow. This was awesome. It's really depressing, though, to see the ways that Sasuke's death have effected Naruto. It seems to have dimmed his spark. And Tsunade's stepping down!?! And Naruto is the next canidate! I'm so excited to see where you'll take this.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 01:55 pm · For: Chapter 3 - Student vs Master
I'm sorry if you're one of the people who doesn't like people pointing stuff out, but their training seemed too extreme. The rasenshuriken was enough to almost completely kill Kakuzu and Kyuubi mode and mangekyo sharingan is something that can lead to him being blind in that eye (unless I'm wrong and it has different effects on Kakashi.
Now to the good parts. Despite it being a little extreme, it was truly awesome. I'm glad that Naruto had bounced back. I just worry about the scars this event might have left on him. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yeah, probably right. It was a bit over the top. I'll try to work it into the story.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 01:47 pm · For: Chapter 2 - Burning Sorrow
To tell the truth, I did not see Naruto's anger coming. It was purely amazing. The rage was a nice twist. It keeps me wondering what you'll do next and how you'll do it. Overall this was just amazing, even if it was sorta short.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 01:44 pm · For: Chapter 1 - The Wills of Fire
Wow... Just wow.
This was EPIC!!!! I loved it. This chapter was just so amazing. Every second had me on the edge, wondering which way you were going. And despite everything, Naruto still wouldn't pierce his heart. So Naruto like of him. But I found it so sad T_T. It was great. I can't wait to find out who Sakura will decide to save. That was one heck of a cliffhanger right there.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 12:25 pm · For: Chapter 1 - The Wills of Fire
Awesome! Sakura, Naruto, and Sasuke were all NOT OOC! Which is REALLY, REALLY, REALLY hard to come by! Great work, can't wait for the rest!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! this is my first time writing fanfic. i tried REALLY hard not to make the dialog cheesy and to make the mood and tone a bit darker.