Wow. Now that was an impressive battle. I had always imagined the final Naruto vs. Sasuke battle would be rather long, but this was still really good.

There were a few instances where the sentence structure was confusing because a word or two were missing; a quick proofread will clear that up, don't worry ;)

I'm a little surprised Sakura would get stuck in a genjutsu, since she's supposed to be good at releasing it and even noticing it. Then again, I guess the trauma of the entire experience really would leave her to unfocus during the time...

The entire creativity of Naruto's new attacks was really well-described. And the way you wrote Naruto and Sasuke's techniques had a great flow to it. I really liked how you wrote it all, everything was very elaborated, which really helped me to see the battle clearly.

Sasuke's blow to Naruto had me on the edge of my seat, and Naruto's blow to Sasuke made me fall out of my seat. That was one of the most epic attacks I could have imagined for such a battle. I really liked that part, great job!

The ending was positively brilliant, as now I am completely left in suspense about who Sakura saved. I can't wait for more, this was pretty good. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Yeah, i tried to make the fight as long as i could, but it was getting hard to keep track of everyone's movements in my mind's eye :/ rnrnNow that you mention it, it is unlike Sakura to get trapped in a genjutsu, but oh well, sasuke's pretty skilled user though.rnrnthanks for your support. i hope you check back later today, as i will have the second part ready. i originally wanted to wait and get some more feedback but i was on the edge of my seat as well, and really wanted to finish it.