Reviews For At the Same Sky
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 01:59 pm · For: At the Same Sky 06
Ah, feelings. They're just so confusing. No matter how hard one tries, nobody can sort them out. Especially when it comes to love. Now that is a confusing emotion. This chapter was amazing, by the way. Hanako and Shikamaru are just so cute together even if they're not, well, together. This is amazing, Abegayle-chan, and I'm so glad I got around to reading it.
Author's Response: Tell me about it. Thank you so much! :D
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 11/09/11 - 12:14 am · For: At the Same Sky Info & Intro
this is terrible
Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry you feel that way! But this is my first fanfiction, so most likely to some people it's not going to be the best. Buut you should try my other one, maybe that'll suit your taste a little better?
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 10/09/11 - 01:56 pm · For: A le même ciel 05
Finally found time to get to it. As for the ending thing, you've already done them, so there's really no point in me answer now......
Anyway, this was amazing. I love Shikamaru's relaxed nature. He's a really cool character. I can see why he's your favorite. Just reading your story, though, is making him move up in my favorites list. You just write him that well. I can't wait to see what will happen now that he's slowly beginning to realize what he feels. This was amazing, by the way. I love your writing. It's just as amazing as this chapter.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry. :( You can always help choose for San-Kagetsu! c: Wow, I didn't think someone could actually do that just by their writing, much less myself. Thank you so much Sasaui. c:
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 - 05:54 pm · For: At the Same Sky 04
Wow. That was awesome! I loved every second of this. It was just purely, one hundred percent adorable. This is probably one of the only stories that lacks action that I could ever get into. It's just so cute! I can't wait to read more. The blanket fairy was a nice touch, and I loved Kiba's cockiness. Just something about it was so hooking. You're story is just absolutely amazing! You're awesome, Abegayle-chan
Author's Response: Hehe, Abegayle-chan. :3 I'm glad! Thank you soo much. c:
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 02/09/11 - 04:02 am · For: At the Same Sky Info & Intro
Darn. You totally ruined the happy ending! WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????
Haha, just kidding, you didn't ruin anything. Good ending, I just hated what happened. The little bold sequences at the beginning and end were awesome, they reminded me of Kingdom Hearts! Great job, keep up the great writing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 10:26 pm · For: At the Same Sky [Sad Ending]
WHAT?! WHAT?! Never meeting again?! That's so... That's so... awful!
I mean, when Tsunade said that he was going on a mission, I just thought you would say that he died. But to throw in that thing about the flower meaning never meeting again.... it was brilliantly sorrowful. It kept to the theme of the story, but you were right when you said it was sad. :(
Wow... this was a really good story... I really enjoyed this, even despite the sad ending. Thank you very much for posting this, I found it adorable right to the happy/sad ending. I hope to see more stories by you soon! Keep up the good work with your writing!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! c: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I already have a bunch of ideas for other fanfictions, but I want to come up with an actual theme first. Anyways, thank you for posting a review on every chapter! It means a lot. c:
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 01/09/11 - 02:12 pm · For: At the Same Sky [Happy Ending]
You know lover means that they have sex, right? I'd change it if I was you. Lover means two people are in a sexual relationship. Unless... are they having sex?
Author's Response: I think it just depends on the context. Obviously in my story they aren't having sex so there really isn't a reason why people should link 'lovers' to having sex. Thanks for the suggestion though.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 08:21 am · For: At the Same Sky [Happy Ending]
AWWWWWW!!! I loved it, it was so cute! And adorable! And sweet! And fluffy! And romantic!
Great work! I really enjoyed this happy ending! I'm almost terrified to see the sad ending, but I still want to read it :D Keep up the good work with your writing!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 04:12 am · For: At the Same Sky [Happy Ending]
Awwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! Oh gosh, I think this is why I love this story! Great job, can't wait for the sad ending!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 31/08/11 - 04:21 am · For: At the Same Sky 08
First off, don't feel like a dork! I was happy to finish my first fanfic! But anyways........CUTE!!!!!! That was really great, but I'm sad to see it end! Whyyyyyyyyyyyyy!? Haha, just joking, can't wait!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/11 - 10:42 pm · For: At the Same Sky 08
*squeals happily* By far one of the most romantic first kiss scenes I've ever read! This entire story just seemed so original, with the themes of waiting and 'how romantic'.
I'm both sad and happy to see the endings. This was a really good story filled with exceptional cuteness. I really enjoyed it. I'm a little scared to see the sad ending, but I'm really eager to see the happy one :) Well, either way, I can't wait! Keep up the good work! Great job today, three updates! Wow, awesome!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/11 - 05:31 pm · For: At the Same Sky 07
Gah! Seriously, Amaterasu persuades her daughter into helping Shikamaru, and then she tells her to come home! Ugh, parents!
But those two were still really cute together! :D Nice job, two updates in one day! Amazing! Keep up the great work!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 30/08/11 - 05:26 pm · For: At the Same Sky 07
Awwwww! How.........sad? Whatever, they're funny. Although that last scene was touching. *sniff* I hope they actually REALIZE their feelings for eachother soon! Great work'
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/11 - 08:04 am · For: At the Same Sky 06
I love it! I love how they are both in denial of their love for one another! It makes it so much cuter! I really liked this chapter, it made mensmile at the confusion that they both obviously have. Great job! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 30/08/11 - 04:25 am · For: At the Same Sky 06
Awesomeness! I think Shikamaru was confused (although that's kinda the point, huh?) And Hanako was just as confused! Great job!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 24/08/11 - 04:18 am · For: At the Same Sky Info & Intro
No need! Great Chapter! Shikamaru's mom is annoying.......Haha. Can't wait for the rest!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/11 - 09:13 pm · For: A le même ciel 05
Happy! Happy! Happy ending! Please! I don't want to know what sad ending you have in mind... though it would probably be amazingly creative, I don't think I could stand the tragedy after such a cute story.
Ah, this chapter was hilarious. Shikamaru's personality, no matter how serious and lazy he wants to be, is just so comical XD Aha, and he is starting to realize his feelings for Hanako. This is so cute, I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/08/11 - 03:12 am · For: 同じ空を 03
=D I can't stop grinning. I LOVED their reunion. It was just so cute. I find the "So romantic" thing really funny and creative. This story is just amazing. You did a great job with this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 21/08/11 - 07:55 am · For: At the Same Sky 04
Sweet! Sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. I was headed to bed. Hehe, loved this. Shikamaru is a bit romantic. Well, in the sense that he can be slightly romantic by giving people things. Haha, loved it, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha, it's the only kind of romance that doesn't require a lot of thought. xD
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 07:56 pm · For: At the Same Sky 04
Haha! Blanket fairy, I love that.
Okay, so when Shikamaru put the Tsubaki flower in her hair, I was squealing in delight, it was just so darn adorable.
Wow, Hanako's meeting everyone... and no one remembers her, it's kind of sad for her XD
There were a few spelling errors, but nothing major. The fluff totally has me engrossed in this story. Nice job with this, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: That was my favorite part too. xD I always think that in a fluffy fanfiction, there should be a scene where something like that should happen, it's like a rule. Thanks! <3
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 04:00 pm · For: 同じ空を 03
AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!
I'm sort of glad this had its own chapter, even if it was short. Shikamaru and Hanako definitely deserve a whole chapter dedicated to their reunion. And it was just so darn adorable, just like I imagined it would be :D
Yup, Hanako really is a romantic, and Shikamaru is turning into one as well thanks to her. It's just so cute.
Great job, I really am impressed with the creativity and fluffiness of this story so far. I can't wait for more! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Thank you! c:
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 02:32 pm · For: 同じ空を 02
First off, yay for NaruHina fluff XD
Anyways, excellent work with this. All the reunions were done very well, even though I'm waiting for the adorable reunion between Hanako and Shikamaru ;)
This was very good, I definitely can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: I looove NaruHina. :D Thanks! (:
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 10:53 am · For: 同じ空を 02
No, no you didn't. This chapter was awesome as well. I don't see any way you could ruin this story it is just plain awesome. I love it. I really want to know what will happen when the two meet. This story is just plain amazing. I think I've said that already, but that just makes it even cooler. Hanako seems awesome. I absolutely love her. I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 07:32 am · For: 同じ空を 02
Haha, NaruHina is awesome! And Hanako know's literally everyone? Cool! Can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: I think they'd be the cutest couple ever! More or less yes, I haven't decided who I'm chose for her not to be as close to, if that makes any sense.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 03:56 am · For: A le même ciel 01
Hahaha. She called him pineapple head.....
This was awesome! I loved every second of it. From the parts with lazy Shikamaru to the parts with your amazing oc, it was just plain awesome. And like Silverwolf said, you've improved. I can't wait until their reunion. This story is so awesome. I can't wait until you write more.
Author's Response: Pineapple head is my favorite nickname for Shikamaru. It describes him perfectly. xD I was having doubts about my oc actually, but I'm glad to know that someone thinks otherwise! Thank you for the review as always. (: