Reviews For Battle Stadium
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 01:58 pm · For: Introduction
Well, you definitely earned my approval! You wouldn't have really been copying me if it was romance affection, but what ever. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Cool! I'm glad I earned it! Well, still, I tried not to keep things too similar. But I'm glad you still liked it.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 01:42 pm · For: Kasumi Mayonaka VERSUS Ezra Uchiha/Hyuuga
Well, first off, you did not butcher Ezra. Secondly, this was great! Although I would have liked more action, I only got a few parts. But oh well, the story was great. Ezra did the same thing as always: Be nice to someone who gave him a bad name. Also, was that affection for Ezra when Kasumi called him strange? Or was she just getting him back into the fight? Haha, great job!
Author's Response: Darn it! The whole point of this was to be full of action, and I'm so sorry I didn't put in enough! XP On the bright side, I'm happy I didn't butcher Ezra. I tried keeping his kind personality as much as possible while also not making him a pushover. Ah, well, it wasn't romance affection if that's what you mean. It's probably affection in the sense that she's giving him encouragement. Just like with Hinata ;D I tried to steer away from the romance so that I wouldn't be copying yours. But I'm glad you liked it! If I've earned your approval, then I know I did well with this one :D Thanks so much!
Name: Starless__Night (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 06:25 pm · For: Introduction
I, Starless__Night, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.
I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone else’s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.
It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.
In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.
I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.
These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium.
You can use Kumori Uchitoru.
Author's Response: Cool to see you aboard. Kumori is an awesome character, by the way. I just read about her, she's awesome XD
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 02:12 pm · For: Introduction
Haha, Sasaui, you're right about Ezra crushing on Silverwolf's character's. Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 01:23 pm · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga VS Kasumi Mayonaka
Aw man! When the chapter was deleted, so was my review. Anyway, this is amazing. I loved it. You added Ezra to the picture perfectly. And is it just me, or does he enjoy crushing on silverwolf's characters (Yuki and now Kasumi)? Either way, this battle was amazing! I'm so glad this is only part one, because I really want to read part two.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 12:30 pm · For: This Arena Reveals the Future Of Fighting!? Luke Uchiha VS Sasuke Uchiha!
Oh man, nice battle. A ginormous amount of foreshadowing for the future, but now I'm just eager to read more of your series XD
Great work! Not only was it an awesome battle, but it was an interesting look into the future. Nice job!
Name: Firestar83 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/11 - 05:53 am · For: Introduction
Hey, this looks like a good idea silverwolf! I'd contribute but there aren't really any OC's that I'd like to add. (probably cause I don't have many to speak of)
Also, You were the only person to submit names for the twins, I feel so unloved!
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much! It's alright if you don't contribute; I'm surprised people contributed at all. Aww, I'm so sorry to hear that no one else submitted names. Please do not feel unloved, as I am a huge supporter of you and your story :D
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 06:52 pm · For: Introduction
Yeah, I know that there is a Kasumi romance in Pirates of the Blue Mist. I tried not to get them epically off personality, romance or no romance. And thank you so much for giving me credit, even if I only sparked the idea. Thank you!
Author's Response: You're quite welcome ^_^
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 06:29 pm · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuuga VS Kasumi Mayonaka Part 2!
theez, yeah, as I said, I should have seen the romance thing coming XD No, I don't have a problem with it, if you're wondering. As I've said with my actual story, there is a Kasumi romance somewhere, just not there yet. At least you didn't make Kasumi all mushy, that would have been a definite no-no. This was good.
I just realized this when I read through it a second time. You said Kasumi killed her parents. I'm wondering if I gave off that impression in the story. I'm not saying if she killed them or someone else did, as I would ruin the mystery of it all, but I think you wrote that part very well, not too much emotion for her, considering she's a 'heartless pirate captain'.
Anyways, epic battle (that's the whole purpose of this story, ain't it?), and great mixture of Kasumi's and Ezra's personalities. Nice job!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 06:24 pm · For: A Tale of Two Girls: The Snake Pitted Against The Shadow
Fantasy Madeline, I should have definitely seen this coming! Oh man, two of your best OCs in a battle together, it just even sounds epic!
Both personalities came out great; it helps to differentiate between them, as I know that you love writing your characters with a dark aura ;)
It was a really excellent battle. We see Madeline's strategic mind and Amanda's, well, invincibility (I guess it would seem XD ).
Wonderful job, I really enjoyed this fight. Now I'm in suspense for more! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 06:20 pm · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga VS Kasumi Mayonaka
theez, great work with Kasumi! You actually wrote her very well, considering I like to keep her as a mystery at most times. You captured that very well, and I loved it!
You're also keeping her close in character and beliefs, with the whole prison thing, and I think you have tied all that in with Ezra very well.
Overall, excellent work!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 06:12 pm · For: Introduction
Glad you liked it! Eh, don't feel weird about reviewing under your own story, didn't I do that in the first Naruto GX? As for the whole relationship thing, was that okay? Because I didn't know if I should do that or not XD thanks!
Author's Response: Ah, that is true. Gosh, this story will end up as a chat room eventually XD Okay, I'll give you a proper review when I'm done with this ;D
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 01:29 pm · For: Introduction
Silverwolf1213- As for what you said in one of Shadow's Reviews, thank you! But you came up with the story. Anyways, I hope you liked Ezra VS Kasumi!
Author's Response: Yes, but you are what sparked the idea. I give credit when credit is due :D Oh, and I did like Ezra vs Kasumi! I would have reviewed, but I feel like it would be weird to review a story under my name, even if it is a round robin. Does that make sense? But yeah, I loved it! I should have seen the relationship thing coming, haha, but it was still really good.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 11:10 am · For: Introduction
Shadow [I think Shadow4000, not sure]- Eh, it's just how she rolls, makes good stories, makes good ideas. Yup. As for Kazuki, we haven't seen a fight with him in it yet, have we? If you're allowed, I'll get one in for you. Haha, I'll see what happens.
Name: Shadow (Anonymous) · Date: 12/08/11 - 11:05 am · For: Introduction
Wow...
Hw do u come up with da best of ideas...
First the joint stories...
I knw it said writers only... But.. If ya dnt mind cn i put in kazuki..? ^_^ pleeej :3
bout da pledge... I cnt copy n paste on my mobile :(
plus it might take me forever to type it on this cell...
Thanx 4 ur consideration... >_<
Author's Response: This idea was inspired a bit by theez, not just me. So he deserves some props as well :) I said writers only for a reason. It's not exactly fair that people should write about your character and you don't return the favor. The pledge was also for writers who are giving permission for others to use their characters. Sorry.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 10:11 am · For: Introduction
Fantasy Madeline- Phew! That's good. Can't wait to see what happens! Feel free to randomly put any Naruto GX character in!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 10:08 am · For: Introduction
Theez- Of course not! I am not that lame.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 10:05 am · For: Introduction
Okay, Fantasy Madeline, not a bad setup for the fight. Sure, there was only one fight scene, but Oh well. I'm glad I'm not the only one who is posting on this :) Can't wait until the next part! Unless this was the entire battle.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 05:56 pm · For: Introduction
Sweet. You've got this up =D
I, Sasaui Uchiha, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.
I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone else’s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.
It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.
In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.
I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.
These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium.
Just all the characters I make.
I can't wait to submit a battle. I just need to get one into my mind first.
Author's Response: Yup, finally got it up :D Can't wait to see what battles you come up with XD
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 02:37 pm · For: Introduction
By the way, what does it mean to flame an OC? Just asking.
Author's Response: Flaming an OC (or any character for that matter) means to completely bash, make fun of, portray in an unrealistic way, etc. Basically, I just want the writers to keep all characters close to their personalities and keep up a decent fight. Flaming in this case would mean that one character would get the crap beaten out of them when everyone knows they have so much more strength. Yeah, that's it ;)
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 12:09 pm · For: Introduction
This sounds really cool. I can not wait to see a battle with Amanda Overbey from Cult and the Coven. This is going to be awesome!
Author's Response: Heehee, perhaps I'll try it eventually. Or someone else who's up for it. Or even you can put her against whoever you like ;D We shall see :D
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 12:07 pm · For: Introduction
Sweet! I'll take a break from Naruto GX for a while, and write a battle or two. Thanks!
Author's Response: No problem, I can't wait to see what you come up with! Good luck!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 11:59 am · For: Introduction
I'll join! Can I use Kasumi? Or I can do a Chapter of Ezra VS Kasumi and You can do one! I think you are thinking of Super Smash Bros. For now, I'll stick with Ezra VS Naruto.
Author's Response: Yes, you can use Kasumi! That's what inspired this, keep in mind ;D Super Smash Bros! Gosh, I feel so stupid now! Thanks for telling me the name!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 11:58 am · For: Introduction
Super Smash Brothers Brawl.
I, Fantasy Madeline, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.
I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone else’s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.
It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.
In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.
I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.
These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium.
Madeline Hatake from One Little Girl
Any character from Cult and the Coven
Author's Response: Yeesh, I posted this what, like five minutes ago? Well, thanks for joining! That's the name! Oh my gosh, I knew it was something like that! Thank you for telling me, now I feel stupid!