Reviews For Battle Stadium
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 12:48 pm · For: Introduction
Haha, I'm glad you liked it! I can't wait to see what you come up with in the next part, but I'm sure it'll be good!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 12:45 pm · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga Versus Kasumi Mayonaka: The Final Battle! PT 1
Wow! You did really great with this! I was worried doing a final battle would just be another repeat, but you did extremely well with writing another one!
Haha, I laughed when Orochimaru jumped in, because it reminded me of more plot twists in my story ;)
Oh wow, I'm next now.... Alright, as I said, I can't guarantee it'll come out anytime soon, but it will come... eventually... yeah...
Well, great work with this!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/08/11 - 01:40 pm · For: Kazuki Ushiro VS Ezra Kokoro
Holy. Flying. Cow monkey. That was awesome! And don't ask what a cow monkey is because I don't know =P. Anyway, that was an awesome battle. Ezra Kokoro is awesome. He's great at fights and matches Ezra U/H's battle spirit. It makes me really want to post a fight. If I could only decide who against.......
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/11 - 09:41 am · For: Kazuki Ushiro VS Ezra Kokoro
lol wow...!!!
thanx man... :D
i appreciate it.. :')
Kool fight...!!
*its good to b alive* LOLOL...! xD
u caught kaz's personality pretty well... :P
the fight ws cool...i see u used the kazuki from drawn together... =)
awesome fight once again...
n thanx once again... :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/11 - 08:56 am · For: Kazuki Ushiro VS Ezra Kokoro
Ezra Kokoro is quite different from Ezra Uchiha/Hyuuga, but when they battle, their fighting spirits are the same ;)
Well, now I know a bit of Ezra's powers in your story, haha. Nice battle, it was a bit short, but it was still really impressive! Good work!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 02:31 pm · For: Introduction
I, theez, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.
I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone else’s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.
It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.
In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.
I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.
These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium.
Any OC of that I've created.
Author's Response: Okay, you're officially in... again ;)
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 09:55 am · For: Introduction
@Shadow9000
I never said Kazuki VS Ezra, I said Kazuki VS an OC. Never said who!
@Silverwolf1213
Can I take the pledge again? I need to edit something.
Author's Response: Oh sure, go for it. I'll delete your original one if you want.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/11 - 12:08 am · For: Introduction
@theez
kazuki Vs Ezra....??
kaz stands no chance :/
@sasaui
aww thanx :D
some text got swapped in between... >_<
n yh... i used mobile txt wen i gt bored... :P
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 08:28 pm · For: Ayame Enkai Vs Umiko Hoshigake
Wow. This was an awesome fight. I, for one, don't care about the mistakes. It was just so cool I mean, yeah, there are mistakes. It kinda reminds me of texting at times. And no, it's not horrible. It was actually really good. It kinda surprised me when I saw it was the Umiko from Darkness Unleashed. I also think I should say thank you for even bothering to mention Karite =D. Yeah, he's buttholeish enough to send her to the past just to annoy her. Then again, he gets annoyed really easy..... Okay, I think I'm babbling. Anyway, great battle, Shadow-san!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 11:05 am · For: Introduction
wel m nt quite sure if u actualy mean those compliments... coz i didn't lik it much....
but thanx alot..!! n honour to receive ur review to something i've written... xD n phew... i thought i'd ruined ayame's character xP
@theez
he is all urs to use... :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 10:30 am · For: Ayame Enkai Vs Umiko Hoshigake
First off, stop saying such nice things about me! Okay, I inspired you; I highly doubt I inspired many others though...
Anyways, considering this was your first time writing anything EVER, I'm slightly impressed.
There were a lot of spelling/grammar errors. But everything was pretty much understandable.
About Ayame... she was alright, actually. Her abilities were very good, and her fighting style was accurate. You mentioned all the crap that happened in her life, so good job.
Hmm, I guess that's it. I guess from what I've shown of Ayame, this is pretty accurate, so nice work.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 10:06 am · For: Introduction
OMG... ur so mean T_T
I, Shadow9000, wish to contribute to the round robin that is Battle Stadium.
I understand that by joining this, I have an obligation to keep all original characters and Naruto characters close to their personalities and accurate in their abilities. I understand that it is not accepted to flame any OCs who are not rightfully mine. If I am caught bashing anyone elser17;s character, I understand that my chapter will be deleted, and I will most likely be kicked off the story.
It is my duty, as a writer, to give credit when and where it is due to the rightful creators of the original characters who I may use for a battle scene.
In addition, I acknowledge that I cannot abuse the permission of writers by stealing their characters to place in any submission for another story or for my own stories. All character permissions belong in Battle Stadium.
I also understand my right to point out if someone has bashed and/or flamed my character in a battle.
These are the characters that I give permission to use only in the confines of Battle Stadium. all of the OCs i created... Kazuki Ushiro, Umiko Hoshikage & reymundo takahashi......
Though this ws my first n last story i guess... :P
Author's Response: Okay, I guess you're in then. :)
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 09:11 am · For: Introduction
well... tld u it ws horrible... >_<
actualy i wrote it on the spot... in a book... n started typing... it took me foreva to type the whole story via mobile... so typing the whole pledge is outta da question... seriously.. T_T
i take the pledge... wateva it is...(sorry) bt plz... undrstnd my situation... :P
well... i conclude that writing ain't my job....
Author's Response: theez is right. You didn't take the pledge. I do understand your situation, but still, it's not fair for you to submit something and not take the pledge like everyone else has.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 19/08/11 - 08:50 am · For: Ayame Enkai Vs Umiko Hoshigake
*Fake-Fall's over* Whoah! Did NOT, I repeat, NOT expect you to update on this! I was caught off guard completely! Phew, okay *Takes a small breather* Anyways, this was........interesting. Couldn't exactly understand what the heck was going on, but oh well. Also, I have to know, did you take the pledge? I don't think so, and you're supposed to! Haha, oh well. Also, just so you know, I noticed a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes, and punctuation. At least I understood your writing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/11 - 10:11 am · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga VS Kina Katachi. And Then A Small Secret Battle!
Wow! First off, I love how Ezra and Kina became instant friends. They're really similar in that aspect, they're just so friendly!
The fight was awesome, of course! I really enjoyed the suspense of Light emerging to take over Ezra's body. Kina is so awesome to force Light away with just a hug XD
Haha, I kind of feel bad for Sasuke. Naruto is so mean sometimes... but I love it :D
Great work, theez! This was so cool!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/11 - 09:28 am · For: Kasumi Mayonaka VERSUS Ezra Uchiha/Hyuuga
WOW...
now that ws genuinely awesome...!!!
i simply love every fight of Kasumi... >_<
her personality is totally complicated... as Ezra said it.. xD
kool fight...!! y do u keep sayin that da fights aren't nice... or any such stuff... o.O seriously
that fight ws legendary... u included almost all of Ezra's abilities... n a decent ending...... not to mention the kool original start...
u caught Ezra's personality pretty well.... i think...
anyways... awesome job!!!
n hurray!!! an update for PotM !!! :DD
:'( m waitin 4 freshmen year...
Author's Response: Why, thank you! I'm glad you liked both Kasumi and Ezra in this one. And I'm surprised people liked the fight, I was afraid it turned out really badly. I'm sorry if I keep saying it, I just honestly feel that my fights aren't that good. I don't know about legendary, but thanks for the compliment. Well, I don't know if the update for PotM is coming anytime soon, but I do have the urge to write it. Um... you're going to want to check the summary of Freshman Year...
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/08/11 - 07:40 am · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga VS Kina Katachi. And Then A Small Secret Battle!
=D If only you realized how much alike they are. Anyway, this was amazing. You did just perfect with Kina. And yeah, she doesn't like letting people now of her inner pain. And it seems like something Naruto would do, just to get back at Sasuke. It makes me want to make Sasuke hit him in the back of the head in my story just for the heck of it. You did an amazing job. And this was a perfect way to end this. I might just make the person Kina fight be Ezra, but I still haven't decided. It's between him and Kasumi. Either way my biggest fear is ruining them. Anyway, I'm so glad you liked Kina enough to write a fight with her. The ending was amazing. Overall it was awesome.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 17/08/11 - 10:44 am · For: Introduction
Alright! Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/08/11 - 09:24 am · For: Introduction
You sure can, Theez. I can't wait to see what you come up with. I'm planning on doing one with her. I just need to figure out what character I was to pit her against.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 17/08/11 - 09:16 am · For: Introduction
Okay, I just need to ask: Sasaui, can I use Kina Katachi? I'm fuzzy about the permission thing.
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 04:59 pm · For: Introduction
Haha, Sasaui, to answer your question, it is like that thing with Goku. Ah, shoot, just gave a spoiler. Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 04:58 pm · For: Kasumi Mayonaka VERSUS Ezra Uchiha/Hyuuga
Holy freaking cow! I don't know which version I like better they're so cool! The fight was so awesome and the you did perfect with Ezra. Man, all these awesome fights are making me want to write my own. But to see my dilemma, look at my one of my other reviews. And I was the person who had the second most time to think of a fight =P Anyway, I loved Kasumi. It makes me want to read Pirates of the Mist. Her attitude just makes her funnier. I can't wait to see who you put against who next. I've thought of doing a Sasaui vs Suki since they're both guardians (even if they're totally different things), but like I said before, she's still a little kid for another three chapters. And Ezra's right. Kasumi is complicated. She acts like she's so tough and cruel, but she lets that slip sometimes by showing kindness. I think that's why I like her so much.
Author's Response: No! Don't pick which one you like best! This was merely for fun between theez and me :D But yay, I'm glad you liked the fight, and I'm so happy that I did well with Ezra. Oh yes, I see what you mean about your characters. Most of your OCs are young; my dilemma is that Suki hasn't had much time to show off her Guardian powers :P So if I use my own OCs, I'll be sticking with the Blue Pirates for a while XD Heehee, I'm slowly making people fall in love with Kasumi, I feel so giddy from that accomplishment. I also can't wait to see which characters I use next. But now I honestly want to go write some Pirates of the Mist ;) Oh, a Sasaui vs Suki fight, that sounds really cool! If only we knew more about their abilities *sweatdrop*. Haha, I'm glad you like Kasumi so much. You should see what I have in store for PotM ;D Thanks for the awesome review! You're amazing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 03:01 pm · For: This Arena Reveals the Future Of Fighting!? Luke Uchiha VS Sasuke Uchiha!
Who cares if it's short if it's going to be that awesome? I loved every second of it! It was just plain amazing. I can't wait to read more of anything by you. You just do such a good job. I kept on wondering who was going to win, you'd act like one person won, and then you'd start the fight again. Great job. It really is amazing. But wait, Ezra died? Is this like the Goku thing where he originally died or are you making a tragedy (I think that's what the thing is call when the main character dies)? Either way, I'll enjoy your awesome writing!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 02:51 pm · For: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuuga VS Kasumi Mayonaka Part 2!
How could I not review your chapter? Only a crazy person wouldn't see the awesomeness in it. This chapter had that same awesomeness. I didn't see the kissing thing coming, even though I really should have. And woah, seven parents? I never realized he had that many. I seriously want to go into your story just to kick the crap out of everyone who is crazy enough to not like him. How could you not like someone so innocent and so full of light? Anyway, this fight was epic to the extreme. I loved every second of it. And even if it was a corny ending (I'm not so sure if it was. I don't think I really know what is and what isn't corny), I loved it. I'm almost sad to see that their battle has ended. It makes me really want to write one myself, but all my ocs are kids except Tsuki (Star Angel), whose abilities are as of now unknown, and Kina (Never Too Late), who I could use, but I don't know who I want her to battle. Okay, back to your story. Just plain awesomeness. I loved it!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 02:28 pm · For: A Tale of Two Girls: The Snake Pitted Against The Shadow
Wow. This was amazing. Amanda was pretty scary, with the way she could do so many things. I can't even figure out what she was doing except for with the fire attack. Maybe that's only because I haven't read your story, though. I'll need to make a mental note to check it out. This was fantastic. I loved every second of it. Both of your characters were amazing. I can't wait for more (if there is more). Your battle was just plain epic.