Reviews For The Shadow of the Stars
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/09/11 - 07:03 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wow... more characters, nice job in introducing them. I look forward to finding out who Futago is. And more about Kyohan, of course. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm realizing that my chapters are really, really short, so I'm going to work on making them longer! And thanks for reading, it's nice to know people actually support me.
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 06/08/11 - 07:48 pm · For: Prologue
Hello, Fawkes my old friend. Great job for a prologue, I can not wait to see where you go with this. Until then, Fantasy Madeline out.
Author's Response: Thanks O'Griffy! XD I'm stuck for inspiration right now, but I'll be trying to write more soon!
Name: Skullberry_Jashinist (Signed) · Date: 06/08/11 - 04:05 pm · For: Prologue
short... but cool story!
Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ I plan to add more soon, I'm just stuck for inspiration right now.
Name: MidnightStar (Signed) · Date: 06/08/11 - 02:34 pm · For: Prologue
...awesome...
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/11 - 10:29 am · For: Prologue
It's so short! Ugh...
Well, it was interesting, as it leaves a sense of mystery. We know nothing of the characters, so I'm in suspense right now. But if she was able to scare the Raikage so quickly, she must be powerful, and I would really like to know more about Kiri and Kyogi.
I hope to see more! Nice intro, I don't see anything wrong so far.
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ rnrn