Reviews For Stray Cat
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/11 - 08:40 pm · For: Chapter 12: Not So Secret Date
Haha, poor Sal, I can't wait to see how she deals with the pompous Hyuuga family ;D Well, hopefully Hinata will be there to help along with Neji... I hope...
Good job with this, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: you'll just have 2 wait and see. :p lol.
Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 03/08/11 - 04:38 pm · For: Chapter 10: Date Two?
Negi acts so cute and she’s just perfect for him! I love this fanfic! :)
Author's Response: thanks. glad ur enjoying it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/08/11 - 11:25 am · For: Chapter 10: Date Two?
Ooh, I'm really excited to see how Neji reacts to Sal's family. And of course, I want to see the brothers' reactions to him :D Hehe, awesome chapter, as always! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: yeah. things could get very interesting...very soon. Oh how i taunt you. LOL. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/11 - 04:44 pm · For: Chapter 9: Song Thoughts
Halle, huh? I wonder what will happen with her. As, Neji and Sal make me smile at their cute relationship. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: thing will but cant tell you what. lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/11 - 10:38 am · For: Chapter 8: Family Drama the beginings
Wow, not only did you show insight to the characters, but now you're actually including them and showing how they really are. It's such a twist after the fluffy previous chapter. Nice work with it though, I'm beginning to enjoy the interactions between the family members.
Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: thanks, there will be alot of family drama to come as the title said that was only the beginning. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/11 - 06:13 am · For: Chapter 7: The Date
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
IT'S SO CUTE AND ADORABLE! I LOVE ALL THIS WONDERFUL FLUFF!
Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: me 2. it makes me giggle and blush and i was the one writing it. :) lol. ^.^
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/11 - 05:16 am · For: Chapter 6: Dress Choice
I love how they act with one another. True best friends! And wow, the conversation between Neji and Sal left me in questions about their feelings for each other. I need to know the answers!
Haha, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: BFFs. even through cattieness...they perfect friendship. lol. and how much do these 2 care 4 1 another...u shall c. lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/07/11 - 03:17 pm · For: Chapter 5: Plan/Chat with Cherry Lips
What will KJ and her sisters pick out for her to wear? Dressing up so much fun :D And I wanna see the end of this conversation between the blooming lovebirds!
Haha, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: u will. :) and i think that they will love dressing up.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/11 - 02:13 pm · For: Chapter 4: Sisterly Chat
Well, as I read your response to my previous review, I'm sorry to hear that your family life wasn't so great. But it does sound as if things got better. Correct me if I'm wrong. But I do hope things are better.
Great work with this chapter! I loved the girl talk, the dialogue flowed quite well. And it was nice to hear some more about the various characters and their family life/traditions. Haha, can't wait for more! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: yeah. they r better...took time but got better.rnthey r very close and the traditions r solid. lol. it's just how it is. lol. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/11 - 03:29 pm · For: Chapter 3: Memory
Ooh, what nice insight to the family. Excellent work! Her family has a lot going on, and her father...well...
Anyways, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: in all honesty it is hard 4 me to make both parents (especially motherz) bad guys since mine passed but growing up all i had were grandparents...my rents were getting drunk and high most of my life...so my veiw of family life is a little swayed....lolci (laughing out loud crying inside).
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/11 - 07:40 pm · For: Chapter 2: Prying
Good job with the insight to her life! You leave such subtle hints to how her life is, and I like it. Great work with this, this is going very well. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thanx 4 ur praise. :) there is alot on her 'relatives' coming up, i believe n the next chapter. so look out. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/11 - 07:37 am · For: Chapter 1: Malled
Wow! It's a very different perspective than how you usually write. A real world universe, it's different for you, and I think you did very well so far. I really liked all he description and background insight you put into this chapter. It really helped your writing. Good work. I look forward to seeing wha else you have in store.
Author's Response: yeah, i felt that i needed a different challenge and trying to write reality can be. i hope you enjoy it. i have some great ideas. :) and her background will have some more in depth lookz as the story goes on.rn