Reviews For Dark Laughter
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/11 - 02:03 pm · For: Chapter 12: Advice
Aw, Iruka helped her. It's sweet how he is like an uncle to her. And wow, more insight to the characters. It really is slightly strange how Kakashi became so attached so fast, great insight. I wonder what the answer is...
And once again, poor Sal and her heartbreak! It's so saddening....
Keep up the good work with this story!
Author's Response: there will b plenty more to come. and we will find out why later i promise. :)
Name: Eclair (Anonymous) · Date: 20/07/11 - 06:02 pm · For: Chapter 11: Truth? In Crushing
Aww..Poor Sal.
=(
Author's Response: yeah. it is difficult 4 her i think she will b okay.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/11 - 03:24 pm · For: Chapter 11: Truth? In Crushing
Aw, poor Sal! It's always sad when your crush likes someone else. And then of course, Neji just jumps in the picture. Oh gosh, how will Sal learn to deal with these bow problems? That could be a story all on it's own ;) Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: i know what you mean. lol. but we'll just have to see.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/11 - 07:30 pm · For: Chapter 10: Tell Me About It
Aww, I seriously love how Kakashi is such a cute daddy :D
And wow! More memories! These are getting so intense, they're quite frightening actually. I wonder what will happen when she remembers everything. That'll be just a mind-blower, I know it.
Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: oh, nobody will see her truth coming. at least i hope not. lol. ;) and yeah they r scary huh?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/11 - 07:25 am · For: Chapter 9: First Day
Ugh, more mean girls. Won't they ever get over themselves? But yay for new friends! Tenten is really cool, it's good that they are friends as well. Great chapter for her first day st school! It was quite interesting. It was very good, and now I'm off to read your new story :)
Author's Response: i know. i felt like that once n elementary school...well middle school...bc i developed early...it sucked...people thought that i was trying to steall all of their bfz with my large 'b-cups' at the time....wonder what they would say now to my 'f'z. lol. sorry seperate thought. lol.
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 18/07/11 - 06:22 pm · For: Chapter 8: Testing Class
Thanks for the update! Please post next chapter soon!
Author's Response: i will, glad u r enjoying it. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/11 - 05:26 pm · For: Chapter 8: Testing Class
Yay, she passed! Oh man, I can't wait to see what her first day is like. I wonder... Haha, can't wait to see how this turns out! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: the next chap will b out soon. and i'm glad u like the story so far. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/11 - 07:14 am · For: Chapter 7: Party Time
Aw, what a cute little party. They're all so adorable, those little kids. And now they know about her past...it's good that she has people she can trust. Great job with the chappie! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: yeah, two people that she knows are trustable. :) and isnt her crush cute? lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/11 - 06:30 pm · For: Chapter 6: Invites
Ooh, spooky dreams. Those are always fun -insert sarcasm here-
That's so cute how she invited Hinata! Aw!
Great job! I can't wait for the party! I love parties :D
Author's Response: yep. i have a cool idea for it. :) lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/11 - 06:37 pm · For: Chapter 5: Discussions
Gosh, their family relationship just gets stronger and cuter! And Sal really is wise beyond her years, I wonder what that reveals about her past... Ooh! Birthday party, yay! Definitely can't wait for that :D Keep up the awesome work, I love this story!
Author's Response: he's so attached to her, and she is attached to him too. i wonder what her birthday is going to be like? also. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/11 - 07:24 pm · For: Chapter 4: Playground
Haha! Ino was perfect, first of all! She was quite realistic in terms of her younger personality. And Sasuke, well, he was OOC, but it made the chapter that much more interesting, so it's all good ;D It's so cute that Sal has a crush on Naruto already. I like their sudden friendship, good job! Great work with the whole chapter, I seriously continue to love this one a lit, and it's only been a few chapter! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: yeah, i did warn about oocz. lol. i had to alter him for the story to work right. lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/11 - 01:11 pm · For: Chapter 3: Homecoming
^_^
Kakashi is so adorable with her! It's all so cute! I love how their relationship has already progressed so much. After only a few days, they act so close, almost as if they already were father and daughter. So cute!
Wow, I wonder what their lives will be like now; that, I must see. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: there is plenty to come. :) and they r adorable 2gether huh? lol. ^_^rn
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 07:18 pm · For: Chapter 2: Awakenings
Aw, it reminds me of my own story...
Yeah, I also invision Kakashi as a great father, and it's so cute that he and Sal have already established a cutsie father-daughter relationship, in a way. They both already like each other :D It's quite adorable, really.
I wonder why she remembers those strange things, though. Weird...
Awesome job! I really like this story, I think it's going to be awesome! Keep up the great work with this, it already has a nice start!
Author's Response: yeah. there will b huge drama in this story and alot of insight into salacia(the character you have seen before)z other side.
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 01:52 pm · For: Character Info
UPDATE!!! PLEASE!
Author's Response: was just about to. i was at my aunts with no time to type...was babysitting. lol.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/11 - 04:36 am · For: Chapter 1: Little Girl Lost
nice chapter ^.^
urm... no offensor anything....
but hw cn uonesay that she'd a tough life if nothing bout her past is known?
n y'd kakashi ask her date of birth??
Author's Response: common question. :) and, she is in the woods and cannot remember a thing, thatz whatz tough...plus i was foreshaddowing...bc i know her past. lol.rni dont take offence to much, there r a few things that i do take offense to, but i dont like to think bout them. lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 09:13 pm · For: Chapter 1: Little Girl Lost
Holy crap, I really like this new approach to Sal. She sounds a lot different than your other versions, and I like it. So innocent and vulnerable... it's so sad!
I can't wait to see how her awful past affects her future.
Oh, and I loved Kakashi! XD Is he the adopted father? Cuz if he is, what a coincidence, I'm writing a story like that too! :D
Yeah, anyways, it was a great first chapter! It's captivating and interesting, and it was seriously just awesome.
Oh, but her name is spelled Kurenai, with an 'e', just so you know for future reference.
Keep up the awesome work with this story! The first chapter already has me so suspenseful and stuff!
Author's Response: i didn't know that. lol. kewl. and thanx 4 the tip, i didn't bring my manga with me 2 my dads, well i did bring some, just not the right ones. lol. i brought my Ouran High School Host Club instead of naruto. lol. rni decided that having her be vulnerable would be a better apparoach this time, show the other side of me (as i have mentioned beofre Sal is the anime version of myself) i am not just the hard ass i am also a sweet and sensitive person...though it can be hard to display that in this crazy world, am i right. :)
Name: tigerseye (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 09:01 pm · For: Character Info
This is good! Keep it up!
Author's Response: i will. glad u like it. :)