Reviews For Dark Laughter
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 06:57 pm · For: Chapter 24: The Party
YOU MADE THEM KISS?!?!?! Omg, what if Naruto finds out?! She gave her first kiss away to someone who wasn't Naruto!
Other than that, lovely chapter ;D Great job, I enjoyed everything up until that little twist, where I then ended up screaming in surprise. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: the surprise was the point. lol. the little upsets keep me going sometimes. lol.
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 06:05 pm · For: Chapter 24: The Party
Nooo!! Why NEJI!!! Noooo
I'm telling kakashi!!!
Thanks for the update lol , post new chapter soon!
Author's Response: go tell him! lol. jk. i need these little upsets to keep me entertained. lol. :p mistletoe is a terrible enemy...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 07:46 pm · For: Chapter 23: Home Again
What is it with the memories? They're so confusing....
Aww, Hinata is so afraid of losing Sal. But Sal is the most reliable person she could befriend, I think. She's that kind of person ;)
Great chappie! Keep up the awesome work, can't wait for more, as always!
Author's Response: all will b clear soon as i choose. LOL. u will see. glad u like it. :)
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 07:22 pm · For: Chapter 23: Home Again
MORE!!! NOOOO
I wonder how Naruto is going to react!? HMM...
Author's Response: you'll see what happens. lol.
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 03:50 pm · For: Chapter 22: Camp Out
UPDATE SOON PLZ!
Thanks for the new chapter! Love it!
Author's Response: i will. :) glad you like it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 12:15 pm · For: Chapter 22: Camp Out
When does beauty ever last? If you know something beautiful that lasts, share to prove me wrong!
Anyway, I really liked Neji's honesty. It reminds me of many realistic situations that I'm sure many of us have gone through :P But he's still such a flirt :D
Great job with this! Can't wait for more, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: yeah, a total flirt. lol. but at least hes not a perv. lol.
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 09/08/11 - 03:20 pm · For: Chapter 21: Memories...So Tragic
Yay! Finally you updated! Thanks! Finally getting more memories back...
Neji...Sal....together...lol
PlZ update soon!
Author's Response: yeah, her memories are tragic but illuminating.
Name: dark knight (Anonymous) · Date: 09/08/11 - 10:54 am · For: Chapter 21: Memories...So Tragic
wait... what..?
ws it Salacia they wer talkin bout?? i mean the demon's child ?? o.O
suspense >.<
wow... neji might hv been red like a tomato wen sal clung to him... xP
Author's Response: you shall see. lol.
Name: dark knight (Anonymous) · Date: 09/08/11 - 10:46 am · For: Chapter 20: Movie Night
lolz...
guy sensei.... xP
hmm.. ten-ten is forbidden from talkin to naruto by her parents...??
poor naruto...
lol u like harry potter so much....??
Author's Response: Naruto and Harry Potter are my obsessions! LOL
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/08/11 - 08:37 am · For: Chapter 21: Memories...So Tragic
She's WHOSE child?! Oh my gosh, I need to know more!
Heehee, it's so funny that she is Neji's partner. Of all people, of course it would be him ;)
Nice job, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: its a mystery of course. lol. and yeah, what else could you expect. LOL. glad u keep enjoying this. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/11 - 08:30 pm · For: Chapter 20: Movie Night
Haha, Sal is so manipulative of her father... then again, she is his little girl ;D Aw, Naruto and Salacia are always so cute together. Awesome job, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: any little girl can do it. LOL. and i know how adorable r they? lol. :)
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 05/08/11 - 10:26 am · For: Chapter 19: Team
lol guys team, omg....
Author's Response: yep. lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/08/11 - 09:44 am · For: Chapter 19: Team
I think I saw that coming, but I honestly didn't think you would torture Sal so much. Poor Sal... how on earth will she deal with Guy?
But at least she's with Tenten! And Neji... eh....
Well, now I can't wait for some Team Guy action! Great job, keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: yep. we gonna get alot of that. lol.
Name: dark knight (Anonymous) · Date: 05/08/11 - 08:29 am · For: Chapter 19: Team
woaaaah....
wow... lucky... with all the leaf headband n the mask... >.< how kool is that...!! n ahaa... she looks pretty well-versed in water manipulation... skilled indeed...
Author's Response: yep. itz her true element. lol.
Name: dark knight (Anonymous) · Date: 05/08/11 - 08:25 am · For: Chapter 18: The Mask
wow... the mask thing looks cool! imagine a female version of Jr. kakashi O.O Awesome!!! kool!!!
Author's Response: thanx. i thought it seemed fitting. lol.
Author's Response: thanx. i thought it seemed fitting. lol.
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 03/08/11 - 03:22 pm · For: Chapter 18: The Mask
Aw. Teary moments! Great chapter, please update soon!
Author's Response: i got dewy eyed writing it. lol. glad ur enjoying it. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/08/11 - 11:22 am · For: Chapter 18: The Mask
Aw, she wants to follow in her father's tradition of the mask? That's so adorable. It's unexpected, but I really like that idea. And of course, the whole thing about Obito was heartbreaking and sweet at the same time. I wonder what team you'll throw her on. Ha, that'll be interesting to see :D Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: you shall see. ;) i have big plans for this. and yeah, i thought the mask thing would be a nice twist. lol. :)
Name: Eclair (Signed) · Date: 29/07/11 - 04:42 pm · For: Chapter 17: Preperations 1
Yay! Thanks for the update! Great chapter! Please update soon! More memories are coming back!
Author's Response: yep. the memories will come back through time. :) lol. glad u enjoy it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/11 - 04:41 pm · For: Chapter 17: Preperations 1
Ooh, what will happen? I wonder how her graduation will go. And as always, I wonder what these memories mean! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: things will happen and the truth will become clear. lol.
Name: Eclair (Anonymous) · Date: 28/07/11 - 03:22 pm · For: Chapter 16: A Lie?
Me likey this new chapter! It's getting more interesting....please update soon! Plzzzzz
Author's Response: lol. i thought u would. lol. :) there is reasoning. lol.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/11 - 10:33 am · For: Chapter 16: A Lie?
Gosh, you had me hanging from a rope with the Naruto part. After every sentence, I was chanting something entirely different than the previous. But the point is: I am so happy they realize they like each other! It's about time, darn it! Ah, finally... now we gotta wait for when they both graduate....
Wow, more memories... they seriously make me more interested in finding out about her past. Though sometimes I don't think I want to know...
Keep up the amazing work, this was an awesome chapter!
Author's Response: yeah, her past is the big mystery. lol. you'll see in time. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/11 - 06:05 am · For: Chapter 15: Questions and a Homecoming
What happened in her past?! Who is her former family?! What is going on?! Ugh... cliffhangers...
Hehe, keep up the good work with your writing, I can't wait to find out more about her :D
Author's Response: well, her past is a huge mystery in the story and i know u hate cliffhangers but i like to do them. lol. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/11 - 04:54 am · For: Chapter 14: The Sleepover
Aw, all the girls hanging out together, that's cute. But it still makes me sad every time she thinks of Naruto. It's really depressing about how he doesn't like her back. Ah, a whole story could be dedicated to strictly how guys are oblivious sometmes :P
Awesome job, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: yeah. oblivious. and itz harder when they r ur friend 2. lol. like the song goes. lol.
Name: Eclair (Anonymous) · Date: 25/07/11 - 03:13 pm · For: Chapter 13: First Song
Tis a NARUTO love story lol....
Thanks for the update, please post next chapter soon!
Author's Response: you will see how this playz n2 the story. lol. there is a point. lol. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/07/11 - 03:11 pm · For: Chapter 13: First Song
*cries* I love that song... It's so realistic....
And so suitable for Sal. It's still so sad to hear about Naruto! Darn it! But ooh, Neji, huh? Sal, just accept that you have the eyes of the boy you don't want!
Ugh, what will happen, I must know. Update soon, and keep up the good work!
Author's Response: i will. and that song makez so much sense. and she doesn not seem to want to believe anything like that. lol. thatz just her. lol.