Reviews For Universe Disorder!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/07/11 - 12:33 pm · For: Frieza+Cell=Nothing Compared To Ganon!
What the heck?! Theez, I had no idea you were so violent! You actually had Frieza and Cell kill a whole family, and it was so graphic! And then Ganon came in and just beat the crap out of the both of them. I had no idea he was that strong! I'm so worried now...
Now I can't wait for more intense fighting! Keep up the good work! Have fun on vacation!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm not that violent, that's just what Frieza does, right? You have a right to worry.......................rnThanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/11 - 06:31 pm · For: The End of the Castle Raid!
Aw! Fabia can't come to Duel Academy?! Hats so sad! They'll be away from each other...
Hmm, I wonder what the team will be doing in the meantime... So I definitely can't wait for that! Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's sad......................................I don't know what the team will be doing in the meantime...............Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/11 - 04:05 pm · For: Castle Raid: Battle!
Wow! More twists! So exciting and so cool! I wonder how Frieza will interfere...
Oh, btw, I swear, your fighting scenes have gotten a lot better since you first started writing. There's a lot more description and epicness. Good job!
Keep up the great work with your writing! It really is going well!
Author's Response: Thanks! Frieza and Cell won't be in the next chapter, sadly, no battle. About the fight scenes, thanks! I like to know that I've improved. Thanks again!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/11 - 07:41 pm · For: Castle Raid: Finding Friends!!
Jaden is back?! What is going on?! Ugh, cliffhangers, why are there so many of them?! Please update soon so I can see what happens with Jaden and Ezra! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Yeah, Cliffhanger's stink. I'm writing the next Chapter as we speak. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/11 - 11:32 am · For: Castle Raid: Attack Squad Story!
Epic and intense battles! And now Ezra is going to kick some butt! Wow! I'm so excited to read more of this upcoming battle! Keep up the good work!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 09:54 am · For: Castle Raid: Ezra's Story!
woooo~~
KOOL chapter...
xD poor hiashi ;P
n hehhe... keep kazuki that way... friends with everybody even fabia but he dosn't quite like Ezra... n keeps annoying ezra like that xD
Author's Response: Yeah, I'll do that. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 05:08 am · For: Castle Raid: Ezra's Story!
:D
Hikari is back!!!!! Haha, and she totally dumped Hiashi right on his butt. Totally deserved it.
Haiku, Kazuki, and Hitomi.... aw, they shouldn't make fun of Ezra, that's mean :(
Great chapter! Ezra's mommy is back, and things are starting to look up! AWESOME JOB WITH THIS! Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: Yeah, Hikari is back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And yes, Hiashi totally deserved it.......................... Haiku, Kazuki, and Hitomi shouldn't make fun of Ezra, yeah...................Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 09:48 am · For: Reunion!
hhaahaaa...!!
woot~
kool! kazuki is back... :D
lolz pan eh?
so they both had the same vision of the future... xP
kool...
Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, they did have the same vision of the future. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 08:23 am · For: Reunion!
Oh my gosh, it was a dream. I seriously thought something happened, like they suddenly skipped time and headed into the future. I was so worried. But hey, it was still cute to see how everyone was all together and married and having kids and stuff :D
I'm glad you brought in some of the other characters, it's so nice to have a reunion.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Haha, a dream, I can do that. It was sort of cute. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 07:26 am · For: A Duel Of Evil And Good!
Wow! Hiashi had Ezra's cards, I so did not see that one coming. That's even worse than when they left him! Ha, but at least Ezra kicked his dad's butt.... literally, in fact. So we know Ezra's mom is okay, still evil, but okay. Aw, more cutsie moments between Ezra and Fabia :D Nice job with this chappie, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Haha, that was an idea I had a while ago. It is worse, isn't it? He did literally kick his butt. Har har. Ezra's mom is okay, yeah, still evil *Makes a Fart Noise*, but okay. Are they cute? Happy to know that. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/11 - 01:55 pm · For: To Much to Bear!
What the heck is wrong with Hiashi? Holy crap, he's just so... eh... I've used all the negative words about him already. Let's just go with cruel, eh? Yeah, that'll do.
Hiashi is so cruel!
But Ezra and Fabia are so cute! Aw, it's so nice to know that their little episode and Hiashi being a total jerk haven't broken them apart. Adorable!
Keep up the good work, theez!
Author's Response:
Author's Response: Hehe, when I first heard about all of the things Hiashi did, I thought the same. At least Ezra and Fabia are still together.....Yeah. Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/11 - 08:48 am · For: Two Epic Battles, One Awesome Ending!
hahhaa..
nice chapter.........
but y is shadow doing......... nothing??
Author's Response: Thanks! Shadow is doing nothing because it wasn't his battle, and he fought last time. Again, thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/11 - 07:28 am · For: Two Epic Battles, One Awesome Ending!
Epic battles, as usual :D Nice job! I was so engulfed during those scenes, it was just amazing. Great job with the fights!
Oh, and you did a great job with my character :) All the characters seem very well done, actually.
Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I like it that I'm doing a good job with the characters. Again, thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 08:09 am · For: The Start Of Two Battles! Roxas, Gohan, and Fabia VS Sora, Donald, and Goofy, and a Secret Battle!
hahhaa... kool!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 08:03 am · For: The Start Of Two Battles! Roxas, Gohan, and Fabia VS Sora, Donald, and Goofy, and a Secret Battle!
Two battles at the same time! So epic! And yay! My character is going to fight! Teehee!
Wow, it amazes me how well you tie in the OCs' past with the present. You combine everything so well, good job!
I'm so excited, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Epic Battles! I love them. Especially ones that have swords. Thank you so much!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 - 08:12 am · For: Bandit's Attack! Ezra Save's Who?
Even after everything Hiashi has ever done, Ezra still saved him. I don't believe it; he's such a nice kid...
And now he has light and dark in him.... literally, Light and Dark. Didn't see that one coming, but it is so fitting for him.
Nice chappie! Keep up the awesome work, this gets more interesting with each chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, yes, Hiashi is evil, and Ezra saved him. He his nice. Light and Dark........................It is fitting for him. Thank you!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 03:43 pm · For: The First Heartless Ezra Faces!
Epicness, I love it! Yay!
Aw, I loved what Ezra said about hoping to be Jaden's brother-in-law. That's so funny yet so cute. And then Fabia wants to be his sister-in-law :D That's even cuter.
I'm a little upset that Jaden and Suki are leaving though. Jaden and Ezra separated?! It's so unheard of to me, but I am still looking forward to the OCs, so I'll wait for that instead :D
Awesome job! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Thank you! It is a little sad, isn't it? But I guess that's just how it goes. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 01:04 pm · For: The Two Keyblades!
His cards did it again?! What is wrong with them?! Are they seriously so lonely without love that they would treat their own master like this?! It's despicable! At least Ezra and Fabia are still together :D
Ooh, epic battle coming up! I love battles, I can't wait for it to come! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know what's wrong with them..............................................................And yes, at least Fabia and Ezra. Thank you!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 10:00 am · For: A Break Up?
Great chapter. It surprised me when her options were Gohan and Haiku. I just didn't expect that one. I love this story, even if there seems to be pain at every corner. I love this though. Good job, Theez.
Author's Response: Haha. Gohan and Haiku, for one, I don't think it would be cool of Gohan to have a girl, since he get's married. For another thing, is Haiku that cool? Oh what ever. Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 09:54 am · For: Ezra is Betrayed?
T_T You're too cruel. How can you put Ezra through all of this? It just isn't fair. This is a great story though. I hope that Hikari breaks free of the jutsu soon. Ezra has been through way too much pain.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 09:44 am · For: Ezra Saddened!
There's nothing wrong with him still saying mommy (I only say that because I still call my mom mommy.... Shhh, don't tell anyone) Great chapter. I'm glad his cousins were set free. I loved how Kyo stepped on Ezra's toe. That definitely got me laughing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 09:38 am · For: Sora and Ezra Meet!
*face palm* When I saw Sora in the chapter name, I thought you meant Sora Hyuuga *face palm**face palm**face palm* Wow, my forehead's red. I wonder why...... This was a great chapter. The whole aunt thing surprised me. I really think Ezra needs a break from these jerks. Either that or you need to let me come into the story so I can hit them all in the face. Whichever one you choose.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 07:09 am · For: The Party!
IT'S ABOUT TIME!!!
Well, I feel so relieved to know that he has finally found his true love, and they are FINALLY together! Aw, and it's on his birthday too! How cute is that? So adorable!
Aw, I can't wait for more, especially now! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Man I have no idea what to say......................They are FINALLY together, right? Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/11 - 02:08 am · For: The Search! A New Battle Starts Now!
ahaa!! shadow introduced finally ^.^
hehe *sweatdrop*
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 03:58 pm · For: Join This Story!
Name: Sukai Nobami
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Series: KH
Family: Her sister. When she was one, her parents left them alone with their aunt, who died of illness.
Race: Human
Power Level: Close to Trunks' power level.
Romance: Whoever
Life Story: When she was young, her parents left them because they couldn't take care of them properly. Since then she's stayed with her sister and aunt in a place out in the woods. Her aunt dies when her sister (seven years older than her) turns eighteen, so she's able to stay with her.
Appearance: Disclaimer: Not mine
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs38/f/2008/335/a/c/Kingdom_Hearts_OC___Cali_by_SasuSakuChick.jpg
Join Duel Academy: If you want. I don't care.
Deck: If she does, she has a ghost deck
Weapon: She has a whip that has a gold metal blade at the end.
Personality: She's shy at first, but when you break through her shell, she's very talkative and happy. When she's in mental pain, she hides it from everyone else. The only time she's serious is when the situation is serious.