Reviews For Orochimaru-sensei's Tongue
Name: kageainoko (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 01:11 pm · For: Chapter 1
well it was a funny pun but i think im glad it was in writing. no naked orochimaru for me!! haha:)
Author's Response: Haha, more for me!
Name: kageainoko (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 12:57 pm · For: Chapter 1
my scurvy get it? the lemon? haha lol:)
Author's Response: Heehee! Yes, but who am I to resist another goofy pun? Especially if I can make it about Orochimaru naked. Yeah, I'm weird.
Name: kageainoko (Signed) · Date: 27/06/11 - 07:54 pm · For: Chapter 1
that was pretty good. there isn't a lot of back story on what happened back then so its totally possible. all in all, it was very helpful to my scurvy. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Scurvy? You need plenty of Vitamin C. As in, C-ing Orochimaru nekkid! Sorry, couldn't resit! Yeah, I'm reeeal mature... Heehee!
Name: BattyBigSister (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 10:40 pm · For: Chapter 1
Well that was... suitably perverse. I'm joking - it was good. It did have a darker, perverted element, almost pedophilic, and you could feel she was being used - but that was the point. They were both wonderfully in character: Anko as childish and native as would be suitable for this time and well... Orochimaru was just Orochimaru in every sense possible. Definitely in character. He's nice, but you can feel his lies straight through it. The description was downright beautiful; wonderful attention to every detail and the whole thing just flowed. It was moving to read.
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I am a pervert, heehee! Though I do think Orochimaru cares about Anko in his own twisted, possessive way... Anyway, It means a lot to get such a thoughtful, positive review. I was worried I might not have captured their characters and that the sex might seem mechanical. I'm touched to know that's not the case and to hear such flattering comments about my writing. Thanks!